Nicholas
They’re more determined then you initially thought.
Amya
Yes, we were not prepared for this.
Nicholas
Didn’t think he’d want to take over the government?
Amya
He wants to control the world through human ways, not through destruction and death. It’s brilliant.
Nicholas
Will you join them?
Amya turned around and looked shocked.
Amya
Never. I’ve sworn my allegiance to the human race.
Nicholas
Comforting. So what next?
Amya
We fight.
Nicholas
Can we win?
Amya
I don’t know.
Nicholas
Tomorrow decides it all.
Amya
Yes, yes it does.
Nicholas turned his chair so that he was facing the windows behind him.
Nicholas
I’m starting Operation Gears.
Amya
Operation Gears? So it exists?
Nicholas
Yes. The government has been working on them since the cold war.
Amya
They’re ready?
Nicholas
They’ve been ready.
Amya
War.
Nicholas
If we must.
Arkain out his face next to Suri’s.
Arkain
Should we go now?
Suri
Not yet, it’s setting.
Arkain
What if something happens?
Suri
It’s like the voice said, we have a week.
Arkain
You’re right.
Suri
Let’s spend this as our last moment of normal.
Arkain
What part of us being this high up is normal?
Suri
It’s normal now.
Cameron and Velis sat in a dark room in conversation.
Cameron
What is he getting out of this?
Velis
Beats me. If it was up to me all these humans would die. Apparently Master’s gone soft.
Cameron
Not that, I meant out of involving Amya.
Velis
It means less of a hassle. But wait, you knew about this empire shit?
Cameron
I was the one who proposed the idea.
Velis
I should have known. You’re the softest one.
Cameron
Control over the human race will result in peace.
Velis
They’ll be afraid of us, of course it will cause peace.
Cameron
That’s all I want.
Velis
Their hatred will grow. This peace you seek will only truly be a standstill. Once they know they can rebel, they will.
Cameron
I know what lies ahead. I know inside their hate for the empire will grow until as one large body they can’t take it anymore. I am fully aware of this.
Velis
So then why?
Cameron
That is what I want. I want them to rebel. When that day comes, I’ll kill them all.
Velis
I was wrong, I think you may be just like the others.
Cameron
I’ve lost hope in the human race, in life, in everything. The empire will subtract any hope these humans have, and then kill them.
Velis
I’m still not fond of it. I’d like to just kill them all now.
Cameron
Patience
Velis
Easy for you to say.
Malic appeared in the room.
Malic
Well, this is all some bullshit.
Cameron
We can’t all have it our way.
Malic
Yeah, so we have it his way.
Cameron
Exactly.
Velis
At least we still have our missions.
Malic
The only thing I care about. Can’t wait.
Velis
Good, blood is soothing.
Malic
True that. Except I’m not for your mission Velis.
Velis
Why?
Malic
I’ve seen that man Romberg rise to every obstacle and I don’t know.
Velis
You feeling sorry?
Malic
I guess. I just can’t see myself killing someone so pure.
Velis
That’s why I’m doing it. We need to kill him because with that, people will bow in fear.
Malic
Well what if they don’t? What if they refuse and fight against us?
Velis
Well that’s exactly what we want, apparently. We’re giving them a choice.
Malic
Why do we have to kill a good man for that to happen?
Cameron
No one would riot for less.
Ximendos sat in the darkness of his home at the top of the stair case. He heard footsteps coming and he smiled.
Ximendos
Hello, Gemma.
Friday, April 17, 2009
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HOLY CHEESE =O
ReplyDeleteGemma did what?!
Intense.
I seriously am shocked of Cameron's plans.
At first I thought he actually was the only one in the evil side with some good thoughts, but he's gone bad. It's interesting to read on how he visualizes the world.
Velis doesn't have any control on herself; I bet she's going to get killed first, or she'll put on a fight with Suri and Gemma at the end.
I wanna know if Nicholas dies or not =O
Great job!
No way!!
ReplyDeleteDude i did not see that coming at the end and all.
Something told me that Gemma might turn to Ximendos.
But what if this is just a trick?
Who knows?
It will be interesting to know what happens.
And what are Suri and Arkain going to do?
This next chapter it going to be really interesting because there
is so much going on, who knows what will happen.
good job Morales.
I really liked this chapter!
ReplyDeleteIt was captivating :]
NEXT CHAPTER :D
Well, I never saw any of that coming. xD.
ReplyDeleteBut maybe that's just me. Anyways, wow...
I wanna see what happens next. I can't wait
to see what Gemma did, and all the suspense
of all the things that have happened. Gosh.
HOLY CHEESE =O
ReplyDeleteGemma did what?!
Intense.
I seriously am shocked of Cameron's plans.
At first I thought he actually was the only one in the evil side with some good thoughts, but he's gone bad. It's interesting to read on how he visualizes the world.
Velis doesn't have any control on herself; I bet she's going to get killed first, or she'll put on a fight with Suri and Gemma at the end.
I wanna know if Nicholas dies or not =O
Great job!
No way!!
Dude i did not see that coming at the end and all.
Something told me that Gemma might turn to Ximendos.
But what if this is just a trick?
Who knows?
It will be interesting to know what happens.
And what are Suri and Arkain going to do?
This next chapter it going to be really interesting because there
is so much going on, who knows what will happen.
good job Morales.
I really liked this chapter!
It was captivating :]
NEXT CHAPTER :D
Well, I never saw any of that coming. xD.
But maybe that's just me. Anyways, wow...
I wanna see what happens next. I can't wait
to see what Gemma did, and all the suspense
of all the things that have happened. Gosh.
Haha "No would riot for less"?
Bright Eyeeeeeeeees. hah
LOVE THIS CHAPTER N CAMerON
ReplyDeleteIs freakin tight lolz like coming up
with that plan
Gemma?what?wait...what?
ReplyDelete....OH MY GOSH!!another good ending :)
Cameron is seriously my favorite badass.
oh and i spy Bright Eyes in this chapter!
Gemma?what?wait...what?
ReplyDelete....OH MY GOSH!!another good ending :)
Cameron is seriously my favorite badass.
oh and i spy Bright Eyes in this chapter!
I remember you telling me about hsi chapter in yogurtime. Of course, I wasnt familiar with half the characters you were talking about then, but now I get it.
ReplyDeleteOk, so Arkain and Suri are taking their sweet ass time while the fate of the human race hangs in the balance..
and Amya is cavorting with the Shadow Regime now??
Nothing was more disappointing than Cameron. I saw him as the "evil" character with the potential to repent and do something great. I hope I was right about him, because I still have a certain compassion for his character.
is Gemma going to the dark side? i know she knows better, hopefully theres something we dont know about what she's doing
ReplyDeleteCameron has his very horrible ways too. Damn!!!
ReplyDeleteI'm hoping Romberg doesn't die, he is so good.
Gemma why did you come to him?
Oh boyyyy.
Holy crap. :| Aweseome chapter
ReplyDeleteWhen he said hello gemma my eyes got all big and I was shocked I didn't see that coming. Maybe she will kill him who knows. I hope the president doesn't die I like him and I thought I knew Cameron had good in his soul then he said he was just waiting for them to riot so he could kill them all. This is getting so good.
ReplyDeleteUgggh! You have this knack of ending chapters perfectly and I'm like, whooooa. :) Loves it.
ReplyDeleteArkain, if you had went to Gemma like you should've she wouldn't turn to Ximendos. tsk tsk tsk
ReplyDeleteWhy aren't Arkain and Suri returning? There is something bigger than them that they need to get back to.
Malic? What's going on there? Is he getting soft?
Ohhhhhh Cameron. You will soon learn that there are lots of ppl who still have faith in what you don't, I just fear it will be too late when the time comes for you to realize that. Tsk, tsk.
ReplyDeleteno man...nicholas can't die. and i'm not surprised you referenced gears. hahha
ReplyDeletei dont know why, but i really like cameron. i feel bad for him, losing his little brother and such.
ReplyDeletevelis is still kick ass.
what is gemma doing!!!
First of all, I love the Bright Eyes title :) I'm anxious to get to the next chapter to find out what in the world Gemma is up to. Hopefully I'm not wrong about her...Nicholas is such a good person, he truly believes in hope for humankind which I guess can seem a little naive but I really think it's that hope that keeps him going. I wonder what the Operation Gears is that he was talking about...It's going to be hard to find out he dies if thats what happens. I'll probably stop liking Velis and all her evilness if that's the case!! I also like how Suri and Arkain are off in their own world, it's like that quote from somewhere(lol) that for those we love time stands still. I still think that Cameron has potential to come to our side or at least he is the weak link in the bunch...we shall see! onto the next chapter.
ReplyDeleteCameron is such an interesting character so peaceful but sooo hateful.spiteful. i honestly think he might wanna change his mind and move over to hayden and arkains side.
ReplyDeletebut thats jus me.
cameron definitely has good in him, he'll find his away. velis is legit but she's so ruled by killing for sport. but its all part of the chaos. i wonder how gemma will react to arkain and suri
ReplyDeleteSo whats gonna happening now??
ReplyDeleteSuri's kinda making me mad i mean they have to get down find out whats going on, whats gonna be done.. i mean come on not now, theres too much happening that their part of and ppl need help..this is not normal lol..
Cameron is so mad and hurt hes being plan mean i hope it turns around for him i like him..
And omg Gemma what are you doing!?
OMG! the chapters ALWAYS fucken end in suspense and it kills me!!! ugh it makes me wanna read more and more and more until the suspense is goe! ahaha i LOVE the title of this chapter<333
ReplyDeleteCameron is so complex!! i really think that he is gonna cause a major plot scene later in the story... maybe having to do with his dead brother??? ;)
ReplyDeleteand i hope gemma is not joining the empire!!!! that would be really bad!
cameron is a bit twisted...I must say I love the names of ur characters
ReplyDeleteThere is something about cameron I love tho..I suppose his name is close to my heart as well...as it is my "bf's" name
I love the talk on peace...sometimes I feel maybe naruto has inspired u to write you know
I can see the influence..or maybe im wrong
But if so, the inspiration has produced great work
I want to see "operation gears"
Ximendos is learning the ways of the human but only with the help of cameron
Cameron is running shit with out even trying to
Seriously im about to jump in the story and shoot suri out the sky
Lmfao
Ugh
> .>
*jealous*
But u end chapters intelligently...u make sure the reader has to turn the pg to figure wtf is going on
I still like the president, and I knew he'd have something up his sleeve. I would totally vote for him, he's such a legend.
ReplyDeleteI hope operation gears is totally badass and it fucks shit up.
This Ximendos suspense is Bee Essssss I wanna find out what's up! Sucks about Romberg. He's a good dude, I think Operation Gears will be helpful.
ReplyDeleteI think Amya is Amros's sister :D
ReplyDeleteIf she would be, that'd be so awesome ;)
I wanna find out who's the strongest/weakest, in every side the White Coats & the Shadow Regime.
This is getting amazing.. You think you know the full story and then it just keeps piling on more, I love it! And as Kyle said, Ximendos is most definitely being a tease and I can't wait to find out more about this guy haha.
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ReplyDeleteHmmm Operation gears, sounds interesting, very interesting...
ReplyDeleteWow Velis really hates humanity which I could of guessed but Cameron! I liked him... could see where they are coming from tho lol
Is Romberg Jesus hahaha sounds very christian... we will kill them if they don't coraperate but we are giving them a choice..psshhh hahahah I like it a lot!!!
How dare that evil little wench turn to, my favorite character, Ximendos?! She is supposed to wait for Arkain, but maybe she has lost hope in him since he did not present himself when she was calling out for him. Curious to find out what Ximendos does with Gemma now in his present Empire.
ReplyDeleteOperations Gears, huh? Would this have to do anything with Adam Phoenix? Cole Train? Dom? Haha, I bet it does not, but curious to find out more and more about this project that has been in the works for a while now.