Monday, April 13, 2009

Chapter Eighteen: A New Empire

Hayden
Who do you work for?

Hayden stood on top of a building directly in front of the chaos with Elijah, Kota, and Bonka. 
Elijah
You know the answer to that.
 

Hayden
Your mission?

Elijah
To take the girl with us.

Hayden
That is impossible.

Bonka
We could have done it.

Hayden
Do it now.
 
They all just looked at each other.
Elijah
We will be leaving now.

The helicopter appeared and they began to board.
Hayden
Tell Amya she is not needed in this fight.
 

Elijah
Will do.
 
They boarded the copter and it sped out of sight.
Hayden
Now what to do with this.

The blackness was circling in the same spot. An entire police squad was on the street surrounding it.
Voice
Hello humans and others.

Hayden looked up, the voice was coming from the sky.
Voice
I’d like to have all of your attention. If you’d kindly look up to the sky, this will be over quickly.
 
This voice was scattered across the world in different languages across the skies. 
Voice
First I’d like to make clear this isn’t your “god” you pray so tiredly to.
 
The whole world in less than 1 minute now had stopped everything they were doing to look up and listen. 
Voice.
There is no proof of heaven or in the existence in the being that sits on his mighty throne on the grounds of it. There is however, a God, and that God is I.
The world did not know what to think.
Amya
Damn it!

He continued.
Voice
You probably are asking who is this speaking from the sky. I am your new leader, your new savior, your new God.
 
People began to protest. 
Voice
Quiet. You are no longer in need of invisible idols and saints. I am God. You don’t believe me do you?
 

Hayden
This is madness.

Voice
My regime will now be taking control of the United States of America. Every other country will bow soon after. Know us not anymore as the USA.

People around the world began to allow fear seep down their spines.
Voice
Resistance is not necessary. You’re under our law now. Those who commit acts of treason and heresy will not see a court or jury, they will only find death. I am a being of my word. If you insist on anything other than full obedience, you will die.
 
Arkain and Suri were listening without distraction.
Voice
Nicholas Selarom Romberg will die. His death will be the symbol of a new era. In one week he will die on worldwide TV. There are monsters he keeps at his bedside he’d like to keep him safe. Amya Anselia, listen to reason and you will be spared. Join and you will be Queen.

Amya
He hasn’t changed.
 
Voice
A new wind you’ve never tasted is on its way. A new time you’ve never counted with your man made machines is coming, a new era, a new regime, a new empire. Every nation, every person will join. Either that or die. Peace is ultimately in your hands.
 

Amros
Some people never change.

Voice
You’ve lived most of your lives under authority so this should not be new to you. The world will grow into a stronger union and you will all see this will be for the greater good. I have ends that will justify any means you see unfit and unjust. My time grows short so I must end this. Gemma,
 
The blackness ceased and disappeared. Gemma was now looking up to the sky.
Voice
Gemma, I know you’re afraid. You seek another, one you can see. Without that person you would rather allow that monster in you to consume all you cannot allow sympathy for.
 
Gemma was dumbfounded.
Voice
Yes, I know who you are. Arkain is dead. You cannot change what is done. You can only change what is to come. I beseech you to control yourself and find me. If you do as I plea, you will be made a Princess of our new empire. Should you choose not to, I will kill you.
 
Gemma began to walk away from the ruble where the building once stood. No one noticed as they were all looking up. 
Voice
The Shadow Regime will be taking over the American government. It will thus be known as the Solace Empire.
 
Amros
Fool.
 

Amya
Idiot.

Voice
I am your Emperor, your king, Ximendos.
 
Hayden turned to look down at Gemma but she was gone.

31 comments:

  1. WOW!
    Really intense stuff right here.
    Gemma knows that Arkain is not dead becuase of the previuos chapter nad all.
    This Ximendos character sounds really interesting because he is taking things into his hands and not taking no for an answer.
    Curious to see what Gemma does because she knows Arkain is not dead and she was just threatened by Ximendos.
    Another thing that came to mind, what is Hayden going to do to stop this?
    Will he do anything at all is the better question?
    Man, this chapter just gve me a new favorite character and its Ximendos!
    Good job Morales.

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  2. Dude I was seriously
    so amazed with this chapter.
    This was absolutely incredible.
    I wanna know what Gemma's going to do.
    & most of all Arkian and Suri, when
    are they gonna show everyone that
    they're not dead. Ahhhhhhh
    NEXT CHAPTER!

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  3. This just keeps getting more intense.
    Arkain's dead? Haha. That's what everyone
    thought last time. xD. Who knows...
    Gemma and the "God/King/Emperor" that she's hearing...
    wow. Intensifying.

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  4. that is some trippy shit.i'm dying to know where this voice came from.

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  5. wow this creeped me out a bit. This is an intense chapeter and I like it. The voice seems like an intresting character that just got thrown into the chaos and I'm curious to see who this voice really is and the history behind him.
    can't wait until the next chapter!

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  6. Gemma definitely knows Arkain is not dead.
    She probably wants to break free from the other voice.
    And Ximendos is interesting. He seems to be demanding, and doesn't need anyone to make decisions. He makes them himself and then he picks whom he thinks is appropriate for the job. I want to see if the president is really going to die or Arkain arrives just in time to save him.

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  7. Ximendos? Emperor, King???
    oh dang

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  8. Wow, this guy Ximendos guy doesn't waste time. He just gets STRAIGHT to the point. Hmmm I think I can see where this is going: Gemma knows Arkain is alive..but she still has yet to find out about him and Suri. And I specifically remember her asking Arkain to never leave her...haha lately Arkain's making alot of promises he probably can't keep. So at this point in time, Gemma is battling her bloodthirsty alter ego; but I think once she discovers that Arkain has "betrayed" her, she's going to let "him" loose, just because she's been hurt. There really is not hell like a woman scorned.

    But hey...i'm just guessing here.

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  9. definately want to know more about Ximendos and his plot to take over the world. if i were Romberg i'd be really afraid right now. imagine hearing you were going to die on national tv....

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  10. The only thing I liked about the new 'God' aha. Is that he didn't beat around the bush, he just got what on with it. I'm curious to find out what is his relationship with amya & the others.

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  11. I can't wait to see how this all plays out. He sounds creepy and I can't wait to see what his relationship with Amya armos and the others is because apparently they've meet before. And I have a feeling that arkain will stop this but the question is when will he let everyone know he's not alive it's probably better for everyone to asume he's dead so he can surprise all of them.

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  12. what a creeper! I love it though. It's really intense and I like how you describe/show that he is "omnipresent, omniscient and omnipotent" lol only he really isn't :) Awesome

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  13. Whoa *eyes open wide*
    I was wondering when Ximendos(sp?) would be coming in.

    Idk if you did this on purpose but i love the fact that it plays upon the fact that tons of people fear the new world order.

    annd once again, The Greater Good,

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  14. With such a big voice comes such a small brain.
    Arkain is still alive, and if he was as all-powerful as he claims to be, he'd know that.

    I love how he's just giving orders and yet the good guys are just rolling their eyes at him haha.

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  15. for some reason i can't tell whether or not gemma will fall into ximendo's hands...

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  16. this chapter is kind of scary.
    i dont want gemma to go bad :(

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  17. I felt like I was holding my breath this entire chapter! The way you wrote Ximendos's voice just made the scene come to life for me and I can imagine everyone panicing and the chaos that will surely follow this chapter. This is madness. I love how you weave so much of your own interests (in religion and such) into your story...it adds such a personal touch to it all. I know Gemma won't go to the bad side, she has a good heart, but I do wonder where she ran off to.

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  18. for some reason i thought that black void thing was because of gemma. but turns out it was something bigger. nice.
    the plot seems to unfold alot faster now.then it did in the beginning. atheist...lol

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  19. this shows how fast the world and people's realities can change. i really thought the black cloud/voice was Gemma. very interesting a lot of twists in this story. its unfolding very nicely

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  20. Thats so scary i wouldve crapped my pants lol..

    I like how everyones scared of Hayden he must be powerful.

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  21. wow, i really like this chapter because
    something big is gonna happen! or something big already is happeneing, however u would say it. lemme read the next!

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  22. oh and i fucken love this line! "A new wind you’ve never tasted is on its way" <3333333333

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  23. oh shit lol

    wondering how amya is connected to the trippy voice!

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  24. I must say this was an exciting chapter..i could just see everything span across the world and no matter whats comes out his mouth everyone understands...can u say hotness

    u just saw the stillness of it all

    i must say i love a lot of the names you have chosen for everyone

    im wondering now about amya and exactly who she is in relations to everyone in the story

    i myself was lost in the chapter...i felt like the rest of the human race ust wondering who this voice is...could it be god..no something much harsher

    i love how they believe arkain is gone

    wait till they find out....he is gonna come outta the deepness and spring himself on ppl..yess

    and then velis is gonna be looking maaad stupid


    and its crazy..if you wanna take over the world just take over the US

    after they fall no one stands a chance

    great chapter great wording

    i loved it...

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  25. This chapter was a different tone to previous chapters, I found.

    I still don't want the president to die. xD

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  26. Whaa now this is interesting. I want to know more about this Xemindos person. Gemma should figure out her monster dealio and do some good.

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  27. I like Xemindos, the leader of the Shadow Regime. Awesome! Hahas. I'm guessing you can relate him to Naruto's Madara ;)

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  29. So I would like to know the whole reason that makes Gemma so special?
    I wouldn't know what to do if I heard a voice in the sky! All his threats tho, Oh that is God! hahahaha Nice character add...
    Gemma is going to join him huh?.... All hail Ximendos!!! hahahaha

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  30. An the introductions continue to stack up making me find a new favorite character to follow, haha. Ximendos is just AMAZING! Love the way that he unannounced starts to talk to the world and they have to listen because they have no choice, he has not given them one. The utter confidence and determination that he portrays is simply outstanding, everyone not associated with him seems to be quivering in their shoes, when does it all go down?!

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