Wednesday, April 8, 2009

Chapter Seventeen: Footprints On Her Heart

All Arkain first noticed was blue. Blue, blue, blue. It was all he could see. As he adjusted to the light he noticed his arms were wrapped around someone. Suri was laying on his body with her head on his chest. He tilted his head back and saw the sun.
Arkain
What the hell?

They were in the sky. High above the heights airplanes go. They were centered in the middle clouds floating as Arkain’s wings gently moved up and down. Suri stirred.
Suri
You’re finally awake.

Arkain looked down on her head. Her hair smelled great.
Arkain
I take it you’ve been awake for awhile?

She looked up to his face.
Suri
Yeah, about two hours I’m guessing.
 
Arkain held her close. 
Arkain
How did we get up here?

Suri
You flew?

They both let out soft laughs. 
Arkain
The last thing I remember was that Camelot guy saying our time had run out and I knew what he meant, I turned and ran to you as fast as I could, I grabbed your hand and the rest is a blank.
 

Suri
Well that clears up a lot.

Arkain
I guess my body for the rest of the time acted on its own.
 

Suri
Why here?

Arkain
I think my subconscious mind knows deep in me that I feel safest with the stars, the sky.
 

Suri
That makes sense.

Arkain
I’m just glad we’re alive. The others probably think, um that we’re, um-
 
Suri
Dead.
 
Arkain
Yeah, that was what I was going for.
 
Suri
I wonder what’s going on down there.
 
Arkain
Yeah. I’m sure things are fine.

Suri
You never know.

Arkain
Right. I think we should head down.

Suri
Can we wait? The sun should be setting soon, I can feel the wind getting cooler, and I just thought we could wait for it.

Arkain
What for?
 
Suri
All my life, I’ve always looked at things from the front, the bottom, and the sides. I’ve always wondered what it would be like to see things from atop. When I woke up earlier, I finally knew what it was like. I have seen what you’ll be seeing for the rest of your life. It filled my lungs with a happiness I haven’t felt in so long. I just don’t want to leave here.
 

Arkain
I get you. I don’t know though, I just feel like something isn’t right. A feeling in my gut.
 
Suri pressed her face against his neck. 
Suri
Can’t you just concentrate on the stars?
 

Arkain
They're not out yet.

Suri
You can still feel them I bet, they are still there.
 
Arkain looked down on her.
Suri
I just, I’ve been alone for far too long. I thought I’d die before I got to feel what every girl dreams about.
 
Arkain knew she meant love.
Arkain
You won’t die before that, I promise.

Suri
I know we met yesterday, but it feels like I’ve known you before. It feels like we met before, and in that first encounter you left footprints on my heart. Prints no one else has been able to fill until we met again, until now.
 
Arkain set his head on hers.
Suri
I know I have this power that makes me stronger than most men, and I know I’m not human but I can’t help but be afraid.
 

Arkain
Why are you afraid?

Suri
Ever since I can remember, I’ve always had these voids in me. It’s not like I was born into this you know? I still remember vaguely what it was like to be a normal little girl. You’re the first person I’ve known all my life who makes me feel normal.

Arkain
We’re not normal, Suri.

Suri
I know, but you see, we all, whether human or evolved humans, we all share the same emotions and pain. I just don’t want that pain ever again. I don’t want to think about having no one I can relate to again. Knowing we can die at anytime, knowing we’re in war now, it makes me afraid, it worries me.
 

Arkain
You don’t have to worry about anything, Suri. It’s alright.
 
The tip of Suri’s nose touched Arkain’s chin.
Suri
Promise me, promise me that no matter what, you won’t leave me to the life I had before you walked into me yesterday.
 
Arkain
I promise.
 
Suri
I trust you.

Arkain
Are you crying?

Suri
No, I promised someone I would never do that.
 
Arkain
So it looks like we’re both locked in promises now I guess.
 
Suri
Let’s hope we don’t make too many. Now since there are no stars, can you focus on me until they get here?

He nodded.
Arkain
Close your eyes.

He touched her lips with his own.
Gemma
Arkain!
 
The darkness was consuming the building and growing.

37 comments:

  1. aw....hahaha.i like this chapter a lot :)
    it was kind of cute.

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  2. Oh man really intense, for me at least.
    Finally drama between Gemma, Arkain, and Suri!
    I completely forgot that Arkain had wings, so this possibility completely left my mind.
    Wow, pretty sure that Arkain and Suri feel the same way for each other.
    But what is Gemma going to do?
    Jealous?Angered?Disappointment?
    Cannot wait to see what this darkness does to Gemma and to Arkain and Suri as well.
    Setting up for some dramatic altercations.
    YES!!

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  3. Aww this was a good chapter
    i really liked the detail and "romance"
    lol really this was a good one!
    Now im left in suspense though cuz outa nowhere gemma yells his name lol i hate suspense!
    Hurry with the next one! :]

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  4. Awwwwwwwwwh i loved it!
    That was so cuteee. aha
    One of my favorites i
    must say.

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  5. Wow, this is my new favorite
    chapter. Learned a lot of new things
    in this one. I'm gonna have a lot of
    suspense till the next chapter, but that's
    what makes this chapter great.

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  6. Woah, love triangle! But I must say I would like Suri/Arkain more than Gemm/Arkain. I just re-read this whole thing, it is definitely coming along! It is developing at a perfect pace and with all the events switching it keeps it interesting. Good job =]

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  7. I love Suri and Arkian together, they seem like they would make such a good couple! So i hope at the end of this amazing story they end up together :]

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  8. Interesting.
    I bet Gemma's going to have a cow.
    Jealousy and all.
    Sorry I haven't read this! I've been sort of busy with tons of college work.
    Great job :)

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  9. Ohh snap SURI,ARKAIN, N GEMMA
    wonder what's gonna happen??
    do they like him??
    like, LIKE-LIKE him?

    Arkain=Player? jeje lolz

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  10. Haha i like how all the girls are like "YES! Finally some romance!" I, being a girl, would have to agree (:

    It is a beautiful scene, how it's set up in the sky, among the stars. Not to mention it's a bit of a breather from all the intensity of the chapters before. But now I really want to see how this plays out with the schizoid down there on planet earth...something tells me Gemma won't be too pleased.

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  11. haha i too agree about the romance thing. i love it. definately adds to the story really well. and of course im very glad that theyre both alive!

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  12. Awwww. This is one of the few "aww" chapters. Ahaha.
    (: oh boy gemma!

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  13. wow, I thought Arkain was dead but he is not! haha. Suri and Arkain can make a good couple.

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  14. I like how you added a bit of humor to this chapter by saying that Camelot guy haha. This is a good chapter because it shows you how they really connect. Most of the time books have bad couples but this is a good one because the writer did a good job!

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  15. eeep! The kiss :) I loved it! And everything about this chapter rocks!

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  16. aww i cried.

    soo cuute

    butt ohhmagah Arkain needs to stop making promises.

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  17. Caaaaan you feeeeeeel the looooooove toniiiiiiiiiight?

    Damn kids always trying to sex when a war's going on!

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  18. this was a nice cute chapter. ahahaha.

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  19. was there a 'wicked' reference here?
    this chapter is really good.
    suri is a hopeless romantic i think haha

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  20. Ahhh Steven! I knew it! You are a TOTAL romantic :) Most good writers are! This chapter balances the action and intensity of the previous chapters with a softer yet still deep and meaningful one. I love these two together! You make them seem like they really do have a strong bond, just the way that Arkain treats her shows that he wants to be able to protect her. Suri's lines are beautiful, especially the ones about pain. You are so good at conveying emotion :)

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  21. cute steven.lol i dnt know what else to say.

    cute

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  22. aw cute stuff , but im pretty sure this will upset gemma

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  23. Aww poor Suri..but i saw the feelings between Arkain and her from the begining its cute..

    And Gemma she just needs Arkain ..is that what he can sense??

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  24. i was never a big fan of romance in books, or movies, or anything like that so this chapter is like ehh to me, but i like it cause now arkain
    and suri are becoming "one"

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  25. finally!!! haha the chemistry was great from the beginning and now they finally kiss! yay

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  26. So I love how his body reacted and they r in the sky..I think that was amazing

    I could just see them in a sea of blue "the sky"


    I won't lie I don't care for their pairing..in all reality it kinda bugs me to be honest suri and arkain...ugh!!! >.>

    Im just being honest

    I seriously don't like them together..I don't kno why..but I just can't wrap my mind around it

    i just cancel it out of my head..i find it just...

    *sighs*

    I wish he wud hurry back..he don't got time for love


    If anyhing gemma is losing it

    Part of me wish he wud lose his grip on suri

    *holds hands up*

    just being honest

    -_-

    <_<

    >_>


    it was a nicely written scene tho and i loved suri's view of seeing things from every other aspect than from above

    and its beautiful how arkain can see from above and look below at all of us

    :)

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  27. Well, for the whole chapter I thought I was wrong about Arkain being inside of Gemma, but at the end you sowed a litte seed of doubt into my mind again.

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  28. This is that perfect moment that everyone should experience with their lover. I dig it.

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  29. My favorite chapter so far. FINALLY SOME KISS ACTION FOR THE SEXY MAIN CHARACTER! =)

    Damn, I love this chapter! :D

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  30. I knew Suri and Arkain would turn into something more! Must find out what happens.. So far everything is great no qualms yet. Other than a few errors I may have spotted but I won't point them out. :p

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  31. .....and then they have sky sex! Well in the graphic novel version they do. lol This was a good cheesy chapter. I knew Suri and Arkain were gonna be together! And I told you Arkain's wings saved the day.... you could say that Arkain is Suri's guardian angel. lol

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  34. He saved her! how cute! There love is growing and I love it! beautiful wording, "You left footprints on my heart." :')
    Now I wonder if Gemma is going to get very jealous about that, He did make a promise to her too.......uh-oh...

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  35. Just like anticipated, Arkain flew out of the explosion with Suri, surprised that no one saw them fly out granted it was in the midst of an explosion. So, Suri is beginning to feel like a "normal" person and seems to have something special brewing with Arkain. Once again, Arkain has made a promise to someone to not leave them, what does this mean for Gemma? Is she already aware of what is happening? Is that why the darkness is growing at such high rate outside the building?

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  36. I feel like promises are going to be a big part of this story...

    And Arkain and Suri! Ah! I love them. And loved this scene between them. The simplicity and innocence of their relationship is great.

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