Thursday, May 28, 2009

Chapter Twenty Three: Reason is Out of the Question

Conor James Callahan walked into his house ready for dinner.
Conor
Hi mom.

Conor’s mother turned around.
Mother
Dinners ready, go sit down.
 

Conor sat at the table with his mother and father and little sister.
Father
How was school?
 

Conor
It was odd. Everyone seemed dead.
 

Father
Dead? How so?
Conor
No one really spoke.

Conor’s sister got into the conversation.
Sister
School
was lovely today, quiet and nice.

Conor
So, yours was the same I see.
 

Mother
I liked the silence at work. There were a few loud mouths, but they were taken care of.
Father
That’s good. Yeah, some guy at work today said the Anselia family are not Gods and we are pawns.
Sister
What a stupid guy, dad.
Mother
What happened to him?
Father
We took him out back, smashed his head in.
 

Conor’s fork fell onto the plate. He did not know what was going on.
Conor
You did what dad?
 

His father looked up from his plate.
Father
I said, we smashed his head in.
 

Conor
Why would you do that dad?
 

Father
He criticized our Gods.
 

Conor
Gods? Dad, you killed a man because he didn’t believe what you believe?
 

Mother
What we all believe Conor.
Conor
Are you guys insane?
 

Mother
No, we’re fine. Is there something you’d like to tell us?
 

Conor
Mom, what happened to those loud mouths at work?
 

Mother
Nothing.
 

Conor
Mom, you said they were taken care of, what did that mean?
 

Mother
The police came and took them outside. A few gun shots later and it was over.
 

Conor’s mouth fell open.
Conor
What is wrong with you all? Ever since that broadcast and you saw of those people, you’ve changed.
 

Mother
No we haven’t. You have.
 

Conor
I didn’t see it because I was outside writing, and you three did. So did many others. That’s why my school was quiet, that’s why you’re all quiet.
 

Sister
What do you mean?

 Conor
You’re all under some spell!
 

Father
Don’t you take that tone with me young man!
Conor
You all think they are Gods.

 Conor’s dad stood up.
Father
Are you saying you don’t?
Conor
I never believed in Gods period. Even now when I see those monsters with powers I know they’re not Gods. Even if they were, it wouldn’t matter. I don’t care.

Father
Honey, shut the doors.
 

His mother got up to shut the doors in the house.
Conor
What are you doing? Mom, seriously?
 

Father
Those who don’t believe in the lord, our savior, must die.
Conor
Dad, you’re kidding right? I’m your son!
 

Father
And he is our God. If you are atheist about what is, then you are not worthy of my blood.
 

Conor
Dad, you would do this to your own son? Just because I don’t believe in your God?

 Sister
Yes. Those who don’t believe in the lord must die.
 

Conor
You guys, be reasonable. Mom!
 

Father
Reason is out of the question.

Mother
The doors are locked.
Father
Good.


Roselyn
We must stick to the shadows.
 

Arkain
Right.
 

They made sure as they passed through the cities they were out of sight. Gears surrounded most of the area, At least two for every mile. They were running while talking.
Suri
You’re sure you know the way?
 

Roselyn
Yes. I can feel the man Amros on the grass.

 Arkain
You know Amros?
 

Roselyn
Yes. He is lady Amya’s brother.
 

Arkain
Is Amya the one who tried to kill Mr. Romberg?

 Nicholas
Yes, that’s her.

Arkain
She is your leader, and she pulled that? Why?
 

Roselyn
We don’t know.

Suri
Maybe she was playing you all.
 

Roselyn
So it seems.
Arkain
She almost killed Mr. Romberg!

 Nicholas
It’s Nicholas, call me Nicholas.
 

Arkain
She almost killed Nicholas!
 

Roselyn
I am aware.

Suri
That’s crazy.

 Arkain
That’s crazy!
 

Suri
Thanks for the echo.
 

Nicholas
Thank you, Arkain.
 

Arkain
For what?

Nicholas
Saving my life.
 

Arkain
It was my pleasure, Nicholas.
 

Roselyn
We’re 5 miles away.
 

Suri
Good. Nicholas, you said something about a story, one your dad used to tell you.
 

Nicholas
I did.
 

Suri
What did you say it was about?
 

Nicholas
The legend of the Sky Lords. The sky walkers.
 

Arkain
Sky walkers?
 

Roselyn
The children of the earth.
 

Nicholas
Correct Roselyn. The Sky walkers is a story about children of the earth. They are the reason for the word angels. They are said to be the ones who created all this, the ones who watch over us.

Arkain
Like a God?

Nicholas
Yes, like a God. Except there are many of them, or at least I think. They watch over us, and at times they pick certain people to protect.
 

Suri
It’s all just a story.

Roselyn
Stories can be true, just as they can be pretend, young Suri.
 

Suri
So that would mean Arkain is a sky walker.

Nicholas
Yes, it would. These beings possessed powers so great, the world would shake.
 

Arkain looked at his hands.
Suri
He can’t really do anything.
 

Arkain
I can so!

Nicholas
Arkain just hasn’t realized his full potential.

 Arkain
Exactly!
 

Roselyn
We can only hope he does. If you’re indeed a sky lord, you will be needed greatly in the battles to come.
 

Roselyn stopped.
Arkain
What’s wrong?
 

Roselyn
I heard a boy scream.
 

They had now exited the city and many houses were visible from their position.
Suri
Are you sure?
 

Glass broke from across the street.
Arkain
Lets go!
 

Suri
Arkain, it’s none of our business.

Arkain
I’ll make it mine.

Conor was on the floor outside on the floor. His hands were bleeding from jumping through the window.
Conor
Not my best idea.
 

Conor’s dad stepped outside the front door with a hand gun.
Father
This is the only way to cleanse you of your sins.
Conor
Dad, please!

Mother
You must die for your sins, Conor.

The gun went off.
Arkain
Guns shouldn't belong to lunatics.
 

Arkain opened his hand and the bullet fell to the floor. From across the street, Nicholas turned to Suri.
Nicholas
That’s nothing?
 

Suri
Lets go!

 Father
Arkain!
Mother
Arkain!
Sister
Arkain!
Conor stood up behind Arkain.
Conor
Do you know my family?
 

Arkain was in shock.
Arkain
No.

They charged him. The ground below moved and a giant wall of land appeared in front of Arkain.
Roselyn
Come, we must go.
 

Conor
Can I come with you?

 Roselyn
We cannot afford luggage.
 

Conor
Please? I have no one else.
 

Arkain
Yes, you can come with me.
 

They all ran away from the scene.
Conor
Thanks.
 

Arkain
For what?

Conor
For saving me back there.
 

Arkain smiled, he still wasn’t sure what he’d become.
Ilias
Got away?
 

Father
Yes, they took him and left.
Iris
And you allowed it to happen?
 

Sister
They had super powers.
Ilias
We are aware of this.
 

Three giant Gears surrounded them outside the house.
Iris
You called us for no reason then.
 

Mother
Please, we were only doing it because we are your loyal servants.
Iris
Time wasted cannot be replaced. Kill them.
Father
Wait please! We were only doing what we were told!
Ilias
And your point is?
 

Mother
You’re our Gods, please show us mercy.

 Ilias
Mercy? That is not an act of god.
 

Father
Please!
 

He fell to the floor at Ilias’ feet.
Ilias
Pathetic.

Iris
I’m tired, lets go
.
Mother
We’re only your followers!

 Ilias
And so we have the power to save you or kill you.

Sister
I will die gladly by your word, my lords.
Iris
That’s a good girl. 
The gears fired. Conor stopped running.
Arkain
What’s wrong?
 

Conor
I don’t know.
 

Roselyn
You wanted to join us boy, now run! We’re almost there. Your parents are most likely dead by now. Do you wish to continue with us?
 

Conor
I got the reason.

31 comments:

  1. duuuuude....that was so fucking good.ugh,i don't know what else to say but that was some amaing shit i just read.job well done Steven :D i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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  2. WOW!!
    Cant believe that those parents would really
    sacrifice their son for their "gods".
    Really makes you think of what might happen if this took place in
    real life and all, intense.
    I like how Conor stood up for what he believes in and didnt back down.
    Downfall to that, he almost died haha.
    Wonder how Conor will adapt to traveling with Arkain
    from now on??
    Where is all of this leading to?
    Could there be one final battle between good and evil
    at the end?
    Cant wait to read on.

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  3. I totally understand Conor. I might be agnostic, but people think I'm atheist and they all kind of have turned themselves against me or simply ignore the fact that I don't believe in Church or religions. People these days are completely blinded by beliefs... the crazy things people will do for a religion or a god.

    And I know it's wrong to say this, but the mother, father and sister's death serves them right. I can't wait to see what's next. ;)

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  4. crazy.
    a little freaky to imagine your own parents turning on you. so they must have brainwashed everybody who saw the tv thing since connor didnt. thats pretty insane! good chapter

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  5. Ha I'm finally getting
    the chance to get cathed
    back up :)

    But wow this chapter
    was crazy! Pure entertainment!

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  6. Ohh this chapter gave me chills..that these people have allowed themselves to become so brainwashed that they can no longer see anything outside of their own "truths". And interestingly enough, it is these same "truths" which deastroy them.
    And I'm sure the name choice of Conor for this new character is no coincidence..Haha i could have picked this up anywhere and known you'd written it. Very powerful.

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  7. Dang show some mercy poeple lol. This is getting brutal.:)

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  8. The books getting better and better. The way they have the humans brainwashed is crazy but I don't know if your trying to communicate this but in some way I feel there's like a hidden story in that scene. Like some people act like this towards people who don't believe in a god in real life. Either way I really like it and the fact arkain is starting to realize some powers he has.

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  9. whoa. that first part made me seriously pissed. that family was completely foolish. look where they ended up now, dead most likely. & everyone else. Bowing down to the 'gods'. disposing every single person who doesn't believe in their god. Hmm. now i wonder what Conor's role would be.

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  10. The thing about the family was awesome
    IT had a kinda eerie twilightzone/outerlimits vibe to it. eep.

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  11. Arkain is great for taking Conor under his wing........no pun intended!

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  12. Holy wow. The pacing in this chapter is phenom! I really like the way Conor says "I don’t want to be a puppet that can’t see the strings." It really shows his character in just a few words. Freaking awesome chapter man.

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  13. hmmm i wonder how yu got the name Conor. ha.
    i'm glad arkain realized how awesome he was.

    conor's family was pretty creppy. but i have a hint of biblical refernce. when abraham was supposed to kill his son issac when god asked him too.

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  14. Conor is my new favorite...and not just because of his name! haha. He reminds me alot of myself because he refused to cave in and believe like the rest of the world just because there were these beings claiming to be Gods. I couldn't believe it when his family admitted to murdering nonbelievers and then came to attack their own family. That was horrifying to me but I know that people are persecuted in their everyday life for choosing not to believe. When I tell people that I am atheist, it seems like it catches them off guard or even makes people uncomfortable. Of course my family didnt try to kill me because of it...but I can relate to what Conor was going through in this chapter!!! I love that Arkain didn't leave him behind and it just showed what a compassionate character you're developing. I'm interested to know more about Amya and her intentions with Nicholas, seems like there's going to be more to that then what has been made apparent so far...Another great chapter down :)

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  15. OMG Steven your such a good writer. If this story was in a book form i'd never be able to put the book down XD I cant wait to read another chapter!!!!

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  16. I really like all the Sky Walker stuff. I feel like it inspires me for some reason. Perhaps you can make a spin off using that background.

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  17. :O wow that was insane, people willing to kill their own kids over their gods. but this chapter is really good, sorry for skipping over it earlier. i didnt notice i did.

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  18. mmm :) i love this sacrifice. everyone has the potential to be an evil person. even the people closests to you.great job

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  19. Omfg the scene with conor and his parents and sister..was GENIUS

    It was so perfectly done..u have showed the change...altho it was short it was effective and I just think it was brilliant to say the least

    Lmfao @ nicholas lol "that's nothing" to suri when arkain stopped the bullets

    And yes conor lived :) <3 I didn't want him to die

    To begin a story with these 3 following blindly
    And dying blindly

    How sad

    Sometimes it reminds me of todays religions but lets not even get me started on that

    But what bothered me was the sister...i hate when children r sooo brain washed young..even in my real life I have found kids like that and u
    will ask em why is this or that wrong after they tell u so

    And they will say cuz the bible says so or god said so..or my parents..

    Ugh


    Very excellent chapter

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  20. I'm definitely seeing social commentary and parallels with your beliefs in this chapter, as I have done in past chapters.

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  21. I like fables that turn out to be true. I hope there's more origin story in the next one.

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  22. Wow, that was amazing. I love "AKRAIN"! One of the best ideas ever. I'm telling you :D

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  23. Intense stuff. It's getting better and better. Getting used to the writing style although I spot a few errors here and there and it tends to bug me but I won't make a fuss. I like how Arkain is realizing his powers and really is a very powerful being. Also, how Connor happens to be an Atheist (fight the power) because it proves that even in the face of death, people can still see the power of reason.

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  24. let's hope this conor kid contributes to the storyline. I have a feeling he is going to act as the errand boy of the white coats lol. I like that you explained the reason behind why the whole populace of the US was so trusting and willing to believe in "God". I was beginning to wonder why everyone was so gullible in bowing before the dark leader

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  26. Well, you know how I can probably relate to this chapter. XD I got so angry when I was reading that part about when the parents killed the guy who didn't believe the same as them.... I figured he'd join the group somehow and it was interesting seeing how they got connected. Good thing Arakin et al were so close, right? XD Hehehe next chapter!!!

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  27. FIRST PART CRAZY! SAD TO SAY PARENTS SOMETIMES DID THIS, THE ONLY DIFFERENCE IS THAT YOU ACTUALLY SEE THESE GODS...CRAZY RELIGIOUS FOLKS LOL
    "ARKAIN HASN'T REALIZED HIS FULL POTENTIAL"...."EXACTLY" HAHAHA
    WISH I HAD A SKY WALKER...THAT IS AWESOME...
    EFFIN EPIC BULLET CATCH!
    ILIAS AND IRIS GEESH I THOUGHT VELIS WAS BAD! LOL
    I HOPE THAT CONOR STAYS TILL THE END...

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  28. Well well well, it seems that this story is beginning to unravel more and more as each chapter is read, obviously. Conor and Arkain seem to have a connection that I cannot really put my finger on yet, so definitely want to see where it is they will go.

    Cannot believe that some parents would actually make that decision and be fine with it, makes you really wonder what if that actually happened in real life. There are some crazy followers out there living in this exact mindset.

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  29. Really, really love this chapter. I like that it gives you a glimpse into what the world is like now that Ximendos has taken over. And I really like the way the scene between Conor and his family was written. Epic stuff.

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