Orthak stood in front of Arkain.
Roselyn
Suri, get to the trees, once inside the White Coats will be alerted.
Suri
Yeah, if we can get passed him.
Roselyn
I will fight him.
Arkain did not back down.
Arkain
You’re a monster.
Orthak did not respond.
Arkain
What you can’t-
Orthak’s hand was now on Arkain’s neck.
Roselyn
Damn!
An arrow hit Orthak in the stomach. Instead of knocking him back, it sunk in until it was gone.
Roselyn
Run!
Suri, Conor, and Nicholas ran for the forest. Roselyn put her hand on the ground.
Roselyn
Rise, my old friend.
The ground Orthak stood on rose to the sky and he let go of Arkain.
Roselyn
Arkain, follow the others.
Arkain
I want to stay and fight.
Roselyn
His power exceeds yours by a margin greater than you think.
Arkain
I can still take him.
Roselyn
Go!
Arkain turned to the forest, just as he was about to go in a giant black wall appeared blocking his path.
Arkain
What do I do now?
Roselyn
Keep yourself alive.
Inside the forest a portal opened and Hayden stepped out.
Suri
Roselyn and Arkain are back there father!
Hayden
He is here.
Suri
Orthak.
Hayden
Yes. And these two are?
Suri
We can talk later.
Hayden
I will send Merdos and Masato.
Roselyn shot an arrow up and it hit the ground below Orthak.
Roselyn
Lets see you work your way out of this one.
Giant wood like rectangles emerged from the sides and circled around Orthak until he was in a ball of wood and could not be seen.
Arkain
Keep him busy.
Arkain’s wings beat in the air. The wall moved and Arkain was knocked to the floor.
Roselyn
Arkain!
Orthak stepped out of the wall. He raised his hand and giant black walls appeared around Roselyn.
Arkain
So you have some tricks.
Arkain stood up.
Arkain
I’m still not afraid.
Arkain put his fist into Orthak’s chest. His fist sunk through. Although his arm was going more into Orthak, it was not coming out the back.
Arkain
What the hell are you doing?
There was now a searing pain on Arkain’s arm and he screamed in pain.
Arkain
Shit!
He was now going to pass out from the pain. Before his eyes closed he saw an orange figure fly into his body. Arkain flew across the floor, rolling in the dirt. A giant orange tiger stood in front of Orthak. A giant white tiger growled behind Orthak.
Soldier’s voice
This is the Solace Police, please remain calm and this will be over soon.
A giant Gear appeared behind them all.
A giant Gear appeared behind them all.
Arkain
This just gets better and better.
Arkain slowly picked himself up from the ground, his wings moved in the air.
Soldier’s voice
Arkain!
Orthak turned towards the Gear. The wall that blocked the forest lifted itself and formed into giant piercing darts and crashed into the Gear and it exploded.
Arkain
Fuck!
Arkain stretched his wings above him to avoid giant metal parts flying down. The giant cats transformed themselves into humans. Merdos had long orange hair in a ponytail while Masato’s grey hair flowed downwards.
Merdos
Protect the boy, I’ll get the lady.
Masato
Of course.
Masato stood by Arkain.
Masato
Having fun, boy?
Arkain
A blast.
Merdos ran his hand across the black wall and it split in half and collapsed.
Roselyn
Thank you.
Merdos
I am Merdos, pleasure to help a lovely woman.
Roselyn
Roselyn, of the New Order.
Roselyn picked up her arrow and shot it.
Roselyn
Bastard!
The arrow hit Orthak in the neck and sunk in like the other. Orthak’s darkness arose from the floor below her and wrapped itself around her bow.
Roselyn
No!
She dropped it to the ground and it disappeared. Masato charged Orthak. Orthak fell to the floor and lifted his legs into Masato’s chest.
Merdos
So he can fight too.
Merdos ran forward. Roselyn drew a thin curved blade and charged along with Masato. Orthak dodged Merdos and Masato's hands and Roselyn’s blade with ease.
Roselyn
Die demon!
Merdos’ hand connected with Orthak’s neck and Orthak’s all black head fell to the ground.
Merdos
That wasn’t so hard.
Orthak’s body didn't fall to the ground, it just stood in place.
Merdos
Well, lets help him out then.
Merdos walked forward and put his hand on the body to tip it over.
Merdos
Shit!
Orthak’s body grabbed his wrist and Orthak entered his body.
Roselyn
His power is beyond ours.
Merdos
You said it.
Merdos lunged at Roselyn, as she jumped back to Arkain.
Roselyn
We have to get out of here.
Iris
I don’t think so.
Roselyn flew across the grounds hitting the floor until she bashed into a tree.
Iris
Hello, Arkain.
Masato turned towards Iris and tried to attack but was thrown across the field as well.
Ilias
Children, we don’t have time for you.
Arkain
You did that to them?
Ilias
I did that.
Arkain gulped.
Iris
You’re coming with us.
Arkain
No, I’m not.
Iris
So be it.
Arkain felt his body snap together.
Iris
I’ve put a shield all over your body, it is now impossible for you to move.
Orthak pulled out from Merdos’ body and Merdos fell to the ground unconscious.
Ilias
You did well Orthak, now go home.
Orthak disappeared.
Hayden
Do you think you’re leaving that easily?
Ilias
We do.
Hayden
Hand me the boy.
Roselyn stood up by the tree, using it as support.
Hayden
I will not ask you again.
Iris
I will kill the boy. My shield will smash his body if you’d rather have it that way.
Hayden
You wouldn’t.
Iris
Oh, but I would. My swim was ruined because of this, and I’d like to either take him or kill him.
Roselyn
We can kill them.
Hayden
No, we cannot. Take him, but we will be coming for him soon.
Ilias
Or will it be us for you? Now that we know where you call home.
Ilias winked.
Hayden
Come and you will all die.
Ilias
I’m looking forward to it. Snacks as well.
Arkain
Hayden, don’t let them take me!
Hayden
Arkain, this is out of my hands.
They disappeared. Roselyn fell to her knees.
Roselyn
We failed him.
Hayden
A great disappointment.

Wow. These powers are pretty intense. This is definitely not your normal superhero novel. Question- is Orthak a shadow that can just take over anyone or become any person by entering them?
ReplyDeletei seriously thought that there was gonna be some epic fight between Iris & Illias and Roselyn & Merdos but i guess you're saving that for another time? i hope Arkain gets out soon!!!i can't imagine what he's gonna do when he's out of that shield!!!ah,wonderful Steven,i love it :)
ReplyDeleteOnce again wow.
ReplyDeleteEach time I began reading the next line
I wanted to know where this was leading.
Why is it that they were willing to give up Arkain in
such predicament?
Do they have a plan in place for him or themselves?
Cannot wait to see where Arkain is taken to and what is
going to happen to him as well.
Dang letting them take
ReplyDeleteArkain puts a whole new
twist on the story!
This is getting intense. aha
I love it!
Orthak is virtually indestructible? "This is some X-men shit!" Hahahaha. I want to see what they do to Arkain! Every chapter with him in it seems to reveal a new power or a new character facet. It's interesting exploring this character as he discovers his own potential. As the reader, you really feel like you are on an insane journey with this character, like you are moving at his pace, and you are as uncertain about the future as he is. It's great character developement and not an easy feat, considering there are so many now.
ReplyDeleteOH man i didnt not see this coming :|
ReplyDeleteThis was crazy I cannot believed they captured him but it's a good way to keep the readers attention by making things unpredictable. I still think Cameron and arkain will connect somehow and realize they are best friends. I'm kind of shocked Hayden didn't do anything but we will have to see.
ReplyDeleteOrthak was surprisingly a very well-skilled demon. ah Hayden. I hope you guys get Arkain back without causing too much of you to die. i don't know. Ilias&the others were wiser than i thought. acck this is really, really good. turned into one of my fave stories now. (=
ReplyDeleteThe moment I read the title of this chapter it reminded me of an AFI song, are you by any instance a fan? XD
ReplyDeleteOrthak is just a puppet. The ones that I'm sure will try to take over will be Iris and Ilias.
Why did they have to take Arkain? D:
It's not fair that Hayden let go of him so easily, but I'm sure he'll go and rescue Arkain and they'll have a massive fight against the bad dudes ;D
Great work, it keeps getting better and better!
whoa Orthak is creepy, the way he'll just absorb things and what he did to Arkain is insane. I could never come up with something like that! Can't wait to see where the story goes now!!
ReplyDeleteoh mah gahw
ReplyDeleteThey seriously need to stop letting Arkain down.
gosh
Idk what to think. i'm so impressed not that i didnt think you had it in you cuzz i knew you did. but more of an...ah whatever you know what I mean.
Anywho, eeeep! This orthak fellow is major <3
I like Orthak. A man with so few words, but you know what he's all about haha. I envision him as this rotund shadow-beast haha.
ReplyDeleteI can definately see the anime influence here. Where all the magic and destruction seems displayed so easy-breezy ha!
Orthak is one scary dude. That's for certain. The whole fight scene was great! I can't wait to see what happens now with Arkain...
ReplyDeletewhat the flip is going on?!
ReplyDeleteThat was quite a twist! I can't believe they got Arkain! It seems like that boy is going to be getting himself in a lot of messes haha. I like that while he is the main character of the story, he still hasn't perfected his powers and has yet to realize his full strength. This makes him seem more realistic and not just some superhuman character. I like that alot about this story. Can't wait to see what unfolds in the coming chapters. Hopefully Arkain will be rescued without too many casualites!!!
ReplyDeleteThey let them take Arkain ??? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO oh lord i just have to know what happens next . You have such a wonderful imagination my friend!
ReplyDeleteorthak has some strange powers. i hope we get to see what else he can do with them. this was a very fight intensive chapter, pretty awesome one at that.
ReplyDeleteohh man i sense a huge battle about to happen. gahh this is so good <333
ReplyDeletei like this battle.everyone still hasnt reached their full potential as fighters. and how easily even hayden isnt even able to save arkain.
ReplyDeletethe battle has just begun! :D
ReplyDeletei love arkain, this stuff is awesome!
the fight scene in the beginning reminded me
of the game zelda or some reason, idk ahahah.
very good!
i really love the way that you do the fight scenes!!
ReplyDeleteand Orthak is so creepy! especially becuase he doesnt talk! ahh he scares me!
i really want to see Hayden fight somebdy!!! gah you are teasing me becuase i feel like he has all of this potential to kick ass but he hasnt yet!!! oh well i will wait
How cud they just lets them capture him...ugh
ReplyDeleteAnother great scene
Hayden just be letting them capture others
He lost gemma
Now arkain
Its disturbing I must say
What is hayden good for?
*sighs*
Now lets get to this demon...man oh man he sounds frigging impossible to beat..I was tryna imagine this dark force but it is beyond my own
perception..he can touch u solidly but u can't impact him...he is nothing but space...a shadow...a void....I wonder what his weakness is...or cud there be a time interval
Roselyn tried so hard but was very useless..just extra baggage
I can't stand iris and ilias
I love the pairing of their names tho
This scene was intense...im bugged out for my arkain
Im sure suri will be having a fit
U writing is superb
I can't praise u enough
Onward to chap 26
Orthak seems like a very slippery character! I really enjoyed the fight scene.
ReplyDeleteUGH! Hayden is such a talk the talk but the walk the walk type of guy. He say's hes gonna own them yet he doesn't. What a bashful weakling. It pisses me off, and he is stated to be one of the strongest of the White Coats. That's ridiculous. Ugh, Hayden sucks. My least favorite character from this point on, and I thought when he appeared something good would happen. Grr, so pissed!
ReplyDeleteHayden hasn't done anything yet.. All I can think of is a Legolas looking guy who's all talk. The whole time the Solace is beating up on Arkain and his allies and yet the good guys have no awesome powers it's getting to me. Amros and Hayden need to kick some ass already.
ReplyDeleteGood fight scene. Orthak seems like a rather generic villain. Perhaps he is also entranced and being manipulated by Madara-i mean Ilias?
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ReplyDeleteUmm excuse me, why is Arkain not being treated with respect? How could he be given away with such ease and without a second thought. This definitely makes me think that there is a plan in place that is yet to be mentioned to the readers because there is no way he is going out that easily.
ReplyDeleteWhy is Orthak so powerful? That is just not fair for the others, haha. It is like walking around with the Hammer of Dawn and only using it against tickers, haha. Overall though, awesome and epic battle. I am sure we will read more of Orthak.
You have such an imagination! haha. Great job with all the descriptions; made the fight and the whole chapter a lot easier to follow (especially because fight scenes can tend to get confusing).
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