Saturday, September 5, 2009

Chapter Thirty One: Her Fear of Being Found

Spring 1692

Amros was lying against a tree while Amya was across lying in the grass. Amros appeared to be about the age of sixteen while Amya fourteen. Amros had little white flowers floating above his hands. Amros’ has short blond hair and blue eyes. Amya moved rocks on her stomach up and down with a smile. Her long blonde hair scattered across the floor above her.
Amros
Where is Amron?

Amya turned her head to him.
Amya
He said he was going to look for some berries.
Amros
Should we find him?
Amya
No, leave him. He can’t get into much trouble here.

Amron stood above a bush. He appeared to be ten years old with black hair. His blue eyes gazed through the bush searching for berries.
Amron
Where are you?

He shook the bush.
Amron
Found you!
Hayden
Or did I find you?

Amron did not jump. He straightened himself up and turned around.
Amron
Who are you?
Hayden
Hayden Olymny.
Amron
Were you looking for me?
Hayden
No, but I’ve found you.

Amron shrugged.
Hayden
What is it you’re doing?
Amron
Searching for berries. I like berries.
Hayden
Any luck?
Amron
Yes, just now. I found some right behind before you interrupted.
Hayden
Well, carry on.
Amron
I don’t want to anymore.
Hayden
But wouldn't you rather enjoy your berries? You seemed quite happy with your discovery.
Amron
I was. I’m just no longer interested.
Hayden
Why’s that?
Amron
I find you more interesting.

Hayden moved a bit forward.
Hayden 
And why is that?
Amron
Your ears, they aren’t like mine. Your clothes, they have blood on them.
Hayden
Very observant.
Amron
What are you? Why are your clothes bloody? Why are you here?
Hayden
So many questions, young one. Why so curious?
Amron
I’d just like to know.

Amron turned around.
Amron
Will you tell me? Or should I go back to my business?
Hayden
I am an Elf. We’re the race that shares this planet with you humans.
Amron
I’ve never heard of an elf.
Hayden
Well that’s the way we want it. We aren’t friendly creatures. Well, we weren’t. Most of us are dead now.
Amron
Dead, why?
Hayden
Civil war. You see, I am a prince. My family has been in battle with another for centuries over power. I have no one anymore. I sought human company, and I found you.
Amron
Me?
Hayden
Yes. The passage to our world has led me to you.
Amron
Do you believe I owe you something for this meeting?
Hayden
Not in any way.
Amron
Well then, you may leave.

Hayden sat on the floor.
Hayden
But I just got here. I thought you were interested in me.
Amron
Well I don’t know what I can do for you.
Hayden
Can we be friends?
Amron
What would that accomplish?
Hayden
I just lost my parents. I’ve lost my entire family. I could use some company.
Amron 

I am not the best at being company. Plus I'm not supposed to have outsiders as friends.
Hayden
What’s the problem?
Amron
My brother. He says I’m not allowed to talk to strangers.
Hayden
Well that’s no fun.
Amron
I know. He says it’s important though. He says it’s for my own good.
Hayden
What could possibly be wrong?
Amros
You wouldn’t understand.

Amros came into view with Amya behind him.
Amron
I didn’t mean to talk to him, he approached me.
Amros
Quiet.

Amros turned to Hayden.
Amros
How can I help you, sir?

Hayden stood up.
Hayden
I’m going to kill you. All of you.

Hayden moved forward. Hayden flew backwards into the tree and it split in half from his weight. Amya ran forward and tried to touch Hayden and placed her hand on the tree instead. It turned into stone. Hayden jumped into the trees and landed behind Amros.
Hayden
That won’t work again.

Hayden’s body stood there despite the wind blowing fast passed him.
Amros
How is it you still stand there?
Hayden
I’ve made myself too heavy for you to move.
Amron
Stop!

Hayden, Amros, and Amya fell to their knees clutching their heads.
Amron
No, no, no, I’m sorry!

He fell on the floor and closed his eyes. Hayden stood up before Amros and Amya.
Hayden
You may stop now. I mean you no harm. My actions were only to see what you were capable of.
Amron
I didn’t mean to!

Amros stood up.
Amros
Who are you?
Hayden
I am Hayden Olymny, prince of the elf race.
Amron
Please don’t tell momma.
Amya
What is an elf?
Hayden
It’s a race aside from your own.

Amros and Amya walked towards Amron.
Amros
I am Amros, this is my sister Amya, and that is Amron.

Hayden smiled.
Hayden
I’ve already met Amron. He is quite a child. It would seem all three of you are, for your ages.

Amron began to cry.
Amros
Stop crying!
Amya
It’s okay Amron, we’re okay.
Amros
He’s not allowed to use that power.
Hayden
I’ve never met any humans in my life, but from what I’ve gathered in our libraries of books on your kind, you’re without power. I may be incorrect, but I do not believe you’re human.
Amros
It doesn’t matter to us either way. We’re family, and that is all.
Hayden
Well said.
Amya
Would you like to meet our mother?
Hayden
Are you sure I wouldn’t be a bother?
Amros
We’re sure. Mother will be happy to meet another person with special abilities. We have kept to ourselves for so long afraid of being condemned for what we are. It’s very comforting to meet someone else who is different.
Hayden
I don’t want to intrude uninvited by your mother.
Amron
Come, please?

Amron wiped his eyes.
Amron
Momma will love you.

They began to walk.
Hayden
I’m sorry about earlier, I did not want to harm you in any way.
Amros
It’s okay, we won’t hold that against you.
Amya
Be best not to tell mother though.
Hayden
Right.

They approached the little brown house at the end of the forest. Hayden stood in front of Amber Anselia.
Amber
It’s a pleasure to meet you Mr. Olymny. I do apologize for the state of my home. I was not aware my children would be bringing company.
Hayden
No need to apologize Mrs. Anselia.
Amber
You can call me Amber, sir. Children, off to bed.

Amber smiled and motion for the chair. They both sat at the table while Amron, Amros, and Amya went to their room.
Amber
Forgive me, I haven’t had company over since Amros was born. Those days have long passed.
Hayden
You’re afraid of the other humans?
Amber
Yes, yes I am. They don’t know what it’s like to be different. They’ve been burning up others lately calling them witches. It scares me. I can't let them know what my babies are.

Her voice began to rise.
Amber
They’d think of my children as freaks.

Her grip on her cup tightened.
Amber
My children aren’t freaks, Mr. Olymny. They are special, that’s all. I want to be able to let them have friends and allow them to go to school but that’s just out of the question. They’d be teased and ridiculed by their peers. This just isn’t a place for them, let alone a world.

She took a sip of her drink.
Amber
It’s either this or be hung on their gallows. I don’t know what scares me more, death, or the fear of being found.

Amron walked into the room and hugged his Amber. Suddenly her upset face turned into a smile.
Amber
See, he has the power to make people happy with the touch of his hands.
Hayden
Amazing.
Amber
They’d want to kill him for that, for making someone happy? What madness is that? I’d die before they touched my blood.
Hayden
You’re a strong woman. I dare say the first to raise three of your kind with unnatural abilities.
Amber
I’m just trying to make sense of what has been given to me. This is all I have and I won’t ask for more. I just want my family to be happy. I don’t want us dying for what we are.
Hayden
Yes, you’ve stressed that point.

Amber blushed embarrassed.
Amber
I’m sorry. I don’t mean to go on and on about the same thing. It’s just a rare opportunity to speak to another person who understands. You’d think of us to be a civilized people, but I wouldn’t bet my chickens on it. It’s not hard to understand, I think they’ve got it right, it’s accepting that they just cannot do. I don’t think humans will ever be able to do that. Understanding is not enough, it’s accepting that matters.

She kissed Amron on the forehead.
Amber
Go to your room.

Amron walked out of the kitchen.
Hayden
Would it be okay if I trained them?
Amber
Trained them for what?
Hayden
Their own good.
Amber
I don’t see why not. If the world is against them, they should know how to fight for themselves, should anything happen to me or their father.
Hayden
Where is their father?
Amber
He’s out doing business. He still has a connection with our village. Someone has to put food on the table.
Hayden
I understand. As I said, I’d like to train them. Teach them how to harness their powers.
Amber
I like that idea. My babies need to be strong.

She stood up and shut the curtains on the window.
Amber
Can you promise me something, Mr. Olymny?
Hayden
You can call me Hayden. What would you like me to promise you?
Amber
If anything happens to either me or my husband, can you take care of them?
Hayden
Of course, Amber.

Amron stood at the corner of the door watching Hayden and his mother speak.
Hayden
Well, I think I’ll take my leave now.
Amber
Where are you staying?
Hayden
I don’t know yet. I’m sure I’ll find somewhere.

Amber put her hand on Hayden’s shoulder.
Amber
You can stay here for the night. Our living room is room enough. My husband won’t be home for a week.
Hayden
Are you sure? I don’t want to intrude anymore.
Amber
I’m sure. Now go make yourself at home while I put Ron to bed. I have a feeling he’s listening to our conversation still.

They heard footsteps come from the living room.
Amber
I knew it. Goodnight, Hayden.
Hayden
Goodnight, Amber. Thank you so very much.

Amron got onto his bed without waking his brother and sister. Amber walked into the room.
Amber
Fast asleep already?

She sat on the edge of Amron’s bed.
Amron
No.

He said in a grunt.
Amber
Are you okay, baby?
Amron
I don’t know, momma.

She stroked his hair with her hand.
Amber
I’m here for you. What’s wrong?
Amron
You said, you said he’d protect us if you died. Why would you die?
Amber
Well I don’t know, Ron. There are plenty of reasons why anyone would die. You can’t outrun death, baby.
Amron
I will. It will never find me.
Amber
Really? You think you can do that?
Amron
If I wanted to.
Amber
Well, do you want to?
Amron
Yes!

Amros stirred in his sleep.
Amber
I don’t know if you’d want to, baby. Death isn’t such a bad thing. It’s the end of the road. After putting so much work into this life, it all ends. Think of it as sleeping forever. Once it comes, you never wake up again.

Amron sat up quickly.
Amron
But I don’t want sleep, momma. I want to be awake with you forever!

Amber smiled.
Amber
I know Ron, I know. Thing is, if you figure out how to outrun death, I won’t be able to follow you. What’s the point of living forever when you don’t have the people you love around you?
Amron
It works both ways, momma. What’s the point in living after those people are gone?
Amber
You’re a smart boy. With this start, there has to be an end, Ron. Don’t be afraid of the end of your life.
Amron
I can’t help it momma. Death’s never going to find me.
Amber
Well baby, it will find me.
Amron
What if you hide with me? Amros and Amya as well!
Amber
We can’t hide forever.
Amron
Yes we can!
Amber
It’s time to go to bed, Ron.
Amron
Don’t ever leave me.
Amber
I can’t make the promise. The flesh of me will be gone one day.

Amron looked down at his sheets.
Amber
It’s up to you to keep me with you. It’s up to you to remember me forever.

She stood up and extinguished the candle’s fire.
Amber
Goodnight. baby.
Amron
I love you, momma.
Amber
I love you too, baby. More than you’ll ever know.

27 comments:

  1. The background stories are my favorite to read, just because it gives you a glimpse into who these characters are, how they came to be that way, and what may have become of them had they made different decision and taken different actions. It's ironic that you gave Amron the power to make others happy, because I'm sure we all figured out who Amron grows up to be..(by the way the Amros and Amron thing drove me crazy!)In the future he withholds his power and uses those with more destructive powers to do his bidding. And that's what is truly terrifying about him: He doesn't require a physical ability; he can substitute it with his charisma, not unlike Hitler and his Nazis.

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  2. ...Whaaat? I'm the first for once?
    I'm shocked too. :D

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  3. Awwwwh that was so touching....

    i love these flash backs man.
    its beeeeen forever! aha

    Next chapter!

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  4. Wow, this was nice to read.
    You see how all of 3 them were already so unique wayyyy back. Especially Amron, so wise when he was just so little.
    I should've guessed it sooner that Hayden was their teacher.
    GAH.
    amazing as always.
    Can't wait to be back in present time.
    But i do like flashbacks very much!
    :)

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  5. The flashbacks are my favorite chapters. I can't get over how you make these chapters so good along with the rest. I don't really see a lot of books that actually have flashback chapters like this so its kind of a newer idea. I really like the idea though because these are some of my favorite chapters. I like getting the insight on how everyone knows each other. I also like getting insight on what made them who they are now. It's interesting and keeps my attention for sure. The story just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter!

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  6. i like flashbacks.i don't know,it seems like i have this connection with most of the chapters,like i can relate to most of the characters and what their feeling.i guess that's why i'm so into this :D


    also,i'm expecting a huge and epic fight scene soon!!!!

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  7. OOOHHH good chapter, ounce again. Keep it up. :D

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  8. i love getting to read all of the back stories about how everyone fits together. its so creative, youve thought of literally everything which makes this a really well-rounded story

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  9. Amron is an interesting character,
    Hes very observant and his thoughts are not
    typical for kids that are around his age, Im assuming.
    Hayden to my self seems like hes going to be a big part of what is to come in the next chapters.
    Amron though, I also feel, that he will have a ig impact on the things that go on from here.
    Exactly what its going to be, I dont really know.

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  10. This made my cry. I sniffled.
    Annd who's Amron? He's new, or is he someone we know, but different?

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  11. I love the exposition here. You integrate it so well within the story. Whoever drew that stupid map of how to write a story had NO idea how to do what you do Steven! Genius!

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  12. hayden kinda reminds me of the guy from hellboy 2.
    but not as crazy haha.

    i love the background chapters (i think i said that before but oh well). i like their mama amber, very realistic

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  13. amron is ximendos(sp?) ? i think so. i can see this kid going to a dark place like anakin skywalker turns into darth vader. i definitely see this happening with amron.

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  14. i love knowing peoples' back stories especially when the story is really far in yet it still ties in.

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  15. I like the flashbacks there so cool getting to know where everyone comes from and getting to know the characters more.. awesome...

    Amber loves her children in a way some moms dont..shes a mother that will do any and everything for her child...i love that

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  16. dude this right here "I don’t know if you’d want to baby. Death isn’t such a bad thing. It’s the end of the road. After putting so much work into this life, it all ends. Think of it as sleeping forever. Once it comes, you never wake up again."

    it literally put a smile on my face.lol
    sorry i havent read in awhile its gonna take a few chapters for everything to kick back into my head.

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  17. i love events from the past! it makes the plot
    of the story all fall in place! dialogue is important for the plot to move forward, me likey!

    "It’s up to you to keep me with you. It’s up to you to remember me forever." such a beatuiful line<3

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  18. You give a lot of back stories but urs are good not only do they clarify things but they bring u a bit closer to the characters

    Its shows how things have come to be

    one would assume going back wud slow the story down or make it boring but its not at all

    it really brings things full circle

    i actually look forward to the background stories

    they really bring me deeper into the story i alway shave an "ooooo" moment

    or "i seee"

    or "wow i get it now"

    and my fav moments "that was frigging beautiful"

    lol

    but i love it

    great chapter

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  19. good chapter. i really like the flash backs (= i think it is the best part cus after your read them its like OooooOOOoooooo haha

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  20. Nice to find out some more background information, but I want to find out what happens to Arkain!!!

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  21. Wow, sad things have been said about death. REALLY SADDENING! =(

    Wish life was eternal, with everyone you love and everything you need. Like on a whole other planet where it has a chemical in the air which allows you to never grow old. Imagine that? Haha.

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  22. It's sort of sad to read about this past. But it's nice to read it as well. It gives me a better understanding of everything that is going on and why these people are the way they are. I'll continue reading after sleep. Other than that, great chapter yet again.

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  23. Hayden got some great screentime in this chapter, and I appreciate it, Steven. In fact, potentially, he could have the best characterization in the series next to Gemma. Of course I have yet to finish the series, I don't think I will ever get use to Arkain's character. He seems to...flaky in my opinion. I think your supporting cast is a lot better than the central characters ;) I like the story.

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  24. I'm really glad that we get to know Hayden and the rest's background story! Afterthrast chapter, it was something I wad wondering about, a lot. I think it's interesting that Amros had this side to him, I thought he'd have been the same easy-going person when he was younger too. >_> I really wanna know what happens to Amron, I mean since he hasn't been brought up before, I'm guessing he passed [unless he was mentioned and I'm too tired to remember]. Anyway, it's amazing how you keep up with all your characters and give them a face and enough of a glimpse into their pasts that one is able to relate. Connecting with the characters has been my favorite part of Arkain.

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  25. Taking us back is really awesome, I am able to have more of a connection to the characters that way. Your letting us know how they got acquainted and their relation to one another, it just gives more "life" to your characters...
    Spring 1692! crazy cool...
    Amron, Hayden, Amya, Amros all younger haha
    Amron is to cute, you know what surprises me is, your not a mom but your able to portray a good mom so well in your stories, as well as other characters, but like a mothers insight on life you just surprise me so much.:D

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  26. New introduction to a character! Amron is someone who seems to have cohesive thoughts not typically found in others of his age group. Could he possibly play a bigger part in the future? First answer would be yes since he was just introduced! Looking forward to reading and knowing more about him!

    Hayden, Hayden, Hayden we finally get to see a different side of who you are. The backstory of who he is allows us to better understand him and have a greater appreciation for what he does and who he is.

    Where is XIMENDOS?!

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