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Amanda Smith is a beautiful woman. The kind of woman everyone wishes they could be. She is 5’11, white, with green eyes. The problem was, she hated life. Despite her looks and her success in life, she wanted out. Her only hope was in her brother, her little Simon. Simon was the only thing special to her. Amanda wanted to love someone but she couldn’t find the right man. Every guy just wanted to fuck her and leave her on the curb. She wasn’t having that. Amanda, now in her late twenties, wanted to settle down and start a family.
Bartender
Anything else?
Amanda had too many drinks. She found herself at the bar a lot these days. She ran away from her problems with this.
Amanda
That’s going to be it for me.
Amanda paid the man and left. She knew she had to get home but did not want to go back to that place. To be honest, she never did. She wanted to steal her brother and run. Dreams, they never came true, she thought. She began to walk home.
Stranger
Now why is a beautiful woman like you walking the streets of
If Amanda was like every other woman she would have been scared.
Amanda
I like the air in the night. What’s it to you, sir?
The stranger was walking behind her in the dark.
Stranger
I’m curious, is all.
Amanda looked forward and kept walking. She had a mile to walk before she was home.
Amanda
Can I help you with anything else?
Stranger
Perhaps you could, my dear. I’m looking for a beautiful woman-
Amanda
I’m not interested.
Stranger
I’m sorry?
Amanda
You said you are looking for a beautiful woman. I am one and I’m not interested.
Stranger
My, my, my, you are feisty.
Amanda
I am a lot of things. What I am most is indifferent about this conversation.
Stranger
Is that so?
Amanda
That is so, sir. Now I’m going to continue walking without opening my mouth again to speak with you. I hope you can respect that and do the same.
Stranger
Now that’s just not nice.
The man began to walk faster. Amanda wondered if she should feel threatened yet.
Stranger
What’s your name, darling?
Amanda
I don’t have one.
Stranger
Don’t have one?
Amanda
That’s right. I forgot it at the bar.
The stranger laughed, very loudly.
Stranger
Well then it’s safe to assume you actually do have one. Little old you just can’t recall it.
Amanda stopped walking.
Amanda
Listen sir, I am tired of being kind. I’m not having the best of days and the last thing I want to do is fall back to earth sober talking to you. So if you’d kindly leave me alone, that would be nice.
Stranger
Why so cruel?
She turned around to see him.
Amanda
Excuse me?
She saw him. He had to of been the most handsome man she had ever laid her eyes on. He looked more like a young boy than he did a person her age. She could not believe her eyes, his face.
Stranger
Are you always this cruel to strangers?
Amanda pulled out a cigarette. It was her idea of quick thinking to stop staring at his face. She could not find her matches.
Stranger
Allow me.
The stranger raised his hand and the cigarette was lit.
Amanda
How did you do that?
Stranger
I thought we were done talking.
Amanda
We were. But now I am asking you a question, so you may answer.
Stranger
You’re a very powerful woman.
Amanda
And you’re a very persistent man.
Stranger
Just the kind I need.
Amanda
Just the kind I don’t want.
Stranger
Is that so?
Amanda
That’s so.
She blew her smoke towards his face.
Stranger
Now that’s awfully rude.
Amanda
And following a stranger trying to make conversation is not?
Stranger
Touché’.
He smiled. Amanda wasn’t expecting it to hit her this hard. The man’s smiled reminded her so much of her little brother’s. They both had smiles beyond this planet.
Amanda
You have a beautiful smile, sir.
Stranger
Such an odd thing to say.
Amanda leaned against the wall behind her.
Amanda
I’m sorry. It just reminds me a whole lot of my little brother.
Stranger
So you have a little brother. That’s the first thing I’ve learned about you.
Amanda
Why are you so curious about me?
Stranger
I guess you can call it love at first sight.
Amanda
Your sight is impressive, seeing how dark it is out tonight.
Stranger
All the better. I love the darkness.
Amanda
I like it as well. Always have.
Stranger
That’s another thing. I think by the end of the night I’ll know your entire life story.
Amanda
My life story? Why would you want to know that?
Stranger
Curiosity.
Amanda blew out some smoke.
Amanda
You want to know about my life? I have parents and a brother. I finished college and I have a shitty job. I hate every second of this horrid life. I want it to end every time I fall asleep but unfortunately I wake up every morning. The only thing that makes this world even a little tolerable is my little brother. A little brother most would wish they didn’t have. One that may be a handful, but one I love nonetheless. I leave work to drink and I go home to him and my parents. I want a different life, but I can’t have one. I want a man who will love me, but I can’t find one. I want two kids to start a family but I’ll never have them. You want to know about my life?
She threw the cigarette on the ground.
Amanda
Well there it is.
She stepped on it.
Stranger
How exciting.
Amanda was now upset.
Amanda
Fuck you, sir.
She began to walk away.
Stranger
Hold on, I think you misunderstand me.
Amanda
Exciting? What part of my life is exciting?
She said with her back turned to him.
Stranger
This part.
Amanda did not like those two words. She decided to walk faster, but it didn’t matter. The man was able to keep up.
Stranger
I seemed to of frightened you.
Amanda
Not at all. I just want to get away from you.
Stranger
You said I am persistent, so it would be unforgivable of me to just walk away.
Amanda
Don’t worry, I’d forgive you.
He laughed again.
Amanda
I think it’s time you leave.
Stranger
I think it’s time you come with me.
He grabbed her hand and turned her to face him.
Stranger
Come with me and I’ll give you the life you’ve always wanted. The excitement, the love, and the children could all be yours.
Amanda didn’t know if she had just walked into a nightmare or if this was a dream come true. Either way, she wanted to get home.
Amanda
I’m sorry sir, but it just isn’t that easy.
Stranger
Oh but it is.
His smile was a bit scary now, to Amanda.
Stranger
To be honest, it is no mere accident we met here. I found you.
Amanda now was feeling a tad bit afraid.
Stranger
Well, someone did for me. Apparently you are a monster.
Amanda
Excuse me?
She could not believe what she was hearing.
Stranger
A monster. No worries, I am one as well. I’ve come to ask for your allegiance. I came to help you unlock your power.
He grabbed her hand.
Stranger
Now that I am here, and you are there, I am ready to fall in love, have children, and give you the life you desire.
With his free hand he stroked her hair. Amanda didn’t know what to say. Again she wondered if this was her prince or just a drunken man looking for a object to put his penis in.
Stranger
What say you?
Amanda
What would you have me say?
She now was afraid.
Stranger
Yes. Yes that you’ll run away with me.
These words, these words were what she’d been waiting to hear all her life.
Amanda
You don’t understand.
Stranger
I don’t understand what, exactly?
Amanda
How long I’ve been waiting to hear those words.
The stranger smiled.
Amanda
If it’s too much to ask,
Stranger
Nothing ever is too much.
Amanda
Would you say it again?
The stranger held both of her hands at his chest level.
Stranger
I believe you say something first.
Amanda almost laughed.
Amanda
What would you have me say?
Stranger
Yes. Yes that you’ll run away with me.
She kissed him. She kissed him so hard she thought for a second she’d break his face, his fragile, beautiful, and memorizing face. This is always what she wanted; always what she told herself she needed. Would there ever be another chance? No, she thought. It was best to jump and hope she landed on the other side. She let go of him.
Amanda
I will go, on one condition.
Stranger
Present it.
Amanda
We must take my brother as well.
Stranger
Deal.
She smiled.
Amanda
All this time, and no names.
Stranger
Well it’s not my fault you left it at the bar.
She laughed a bit.
Amanda
My name is Amanda. Amanda White.
Stranger
Such a human name.
Amanda
And yours?
Stranger
Well, I have two names.
Amanda
A first and a last name, you mean?
Stranger
No, two names. An old name and a new name, I have. I will give you the old one but only for you to use when we’re alone.
Amanda
You have a secret name! You’re probably wanted by the government.
She amused herself.
Stranger
The new one is what you can call my state name. It is the one the world will know.
Amanda couldn’t help but feel excited.
Stranger
My real name is Amron Anselia.
She wasn’t surprised. A beautiful man had to have a beautiful name, she thought.
Stranger
The world will know me as, Ximendos.
2 months later……..
Simon sat in his room reading the bible. It was given to him by his parents in hopes that it might save him. It hasn’t. It never will. He’s a senior in high school and six feet tall. His black hair flows to his neck and he’s very thin. The thing about most find either creepy or delightful is the smile always on his face. Simon White is not a normal boy. He has an urge to kill. At times he wondered if it was him or someone else. He always came to the same conclusion. He wanted to see others suffer. He knew that people were suffering at every moment and that’s why he always smiled. Simon closed the book.
Simon
Jesus was a good man. I am not.
It’s not that Simon didn’t need to be saved. No, he could have used it, he thought. The problem is he didn’t want to be saved. The urge, the need, was far more satisfying than anything else he had ever encountered.
Simon
I hate good men.
He set it down on the desk and stood up. His hands and clothes covered in blood. Police sirens could be heard from a distance.
Simon
They’ve come, they’ve came, to take me away.
He laughed. Simon walked out of his room passing his dead father on the floor.
Simon
Why did you go?
At the bottom of the stairs lied his mother dead.
Simon
You left me alone with them.
He stopped in front of the door. His smile almost disappeared. His only thought at that moment was of his sister Amanda. She went missing a week ago. Amanda was the only one who controlled his urges. She was the only one who made him feel safe. Now, he could not help himself from feeding his needs.
Simon
Amanda, where are you?
He opened the doors to a band of police officers pointing guns at him. He walked forward and allowed them to arrest him. Why would he resist? He thought, as they read him his rights. He called them.
Ximendos
Do as I’ve taught you, Amanda.
Amanda nodded. She walked forward raising her hands. As she did the sky roared with sound. All the police officers looked up. Simon wondered if this might be Jesus coming to his rescue. Ximendos smiled..
Amanda
You will not have my brother.
Lighting fell from the sky. The police officers did not know what to do or think. They could not see Amanda so they were terrified. All ten officers dropped dead to the floor.
Amanda
Simon!
She ran towards Simon who was sitting down handcuffed by a burning car.
Simon
Amanda?
She wrapped her arms around his neck.
Amanda
Simon, oh my Simon.
Simon was surprised. He thought his sister was gone for good.
Simon
Where have you been?
Amanda, now in tears spoke.
Amanda
I was away doing business. I am sorry I was gone.
She hugged him harder.
Amanda
I am here now, and that’s all that matters. I will never leave you again.
Simon
I’m glad you’re here. I’ve missed you.
Amanda
Where are mom and dad?
Simon
Inside.
Amanda
I’ll go get them.
Simon grabbed her hand as she stood up to leave.
Simon
No, you can’t.
Amanda looked down at him.
Amanda
You didn’t, did you Simon?
Simon shook his head up and down. She picked him up from the ground.
Amanda
It’s okay. We were leaving anyways.
Simon
Where are we going?
Amanda
With him.
She turned to show Simon to Amron.
Amanda
Simon, this is Ximendos. He is your new step-brother.
Simon did not smile. Who was this man? He took my sister, he thought.
Simon
Hello, I’m Simon.
Ximendos stretched out his arm and gave Simon his hand.
Ximendos
Pleasure, I am Ximendos. Amanda speaks highly of you.
Simon did not respond.
Ximendos
Well. I think it’s time you two leave.
Amanda
And what about you?
Ximendos
I will clean up the place.
Amanda
Fine. Let’s go Simon.
Simon had never traveled by the method Amanda would use, but he was ready. They left.
Ximendos
You may show yourself now.
Orthak began to come out of the ground next to Ximendos.
Ximendos
Were you there the whole time?
Orthak screamed.
Ximendos
I suppose. I know, you never want to be far away from me.
Orthak screamed again.
Ximendos
You have nothing to worry about. Again, she is my wife.
He turned an officer over on his back.
Ximendos
You are me.
Orthak screamed.
Ximendos
I’m glad you understand.
He stood in front of the house.
Ximendos
Their parents are dead. This is most pleasing.
Months ago he had told her Simon could come with them. What she didn’t know was he was going to come with Ximendos whether she asked or not. He wanted them both, he wanted the pair
Ximendos
You may feast now, Orthak.
He turned to walk away as Orthak screamed with pleasure.
Ximendos
And so ends here the bloodline of the Smiths, the line of immortals grows thinner.
2 months later……
Patrick stood on the top of a building. His red hair free in the wind. His brown eyes shining in the sun, he felt alive. Patrick jumped. Patrick fell twenty stories and landed in the alley of the building. His head hit the ground first and cracked in half while his bones smashed down on the ground when he hit. Patrick died.
Ximendos
Well it’s a good thing you don’t really die.
The body began to move.
Simon
He’s like us?
Ximendos, Amanda, and Simon surrounded the body.
Amanda
That’s why we’re here.
Ximendos
Yes, and after we have him we will be on our way.
The body reconstructed itself.
Patrick
Damn, again.
They all looked down at the body.
Patrick
It never works.
He stood up slowly.
Patrick
Who the fuck are you?
Patrick laughed.
Patrick
Hold on, did I really die? Are you guys’ angels?
Ximendos
You can say that.
Simon was standing behind Ximendos out of view.
Amanda
Feeling a bit suicidal, are we?
Patrick
Not even. I was doing that with a purpose.
Amanda
And that purpose would be?
Patrick
See how far I can go.
Ximendos smiled.
Ximendos
You are aware then.
Patrick
That I can’t die? Yes.
He laughed again.
Patrick
A few days ago I got shot in the head. Seconds after I am walking again.
He walked towards them.
Patrick
I’m a fucking god!
He saw Simon. He almost lost his balance. It was his smile and his face that pulled all the air from his lungs.
Patrick
And who might you be?
Simon
Me?
Patrick
Yes, you.
Simon
I’m Simon.
Patrick
I’m Patrick.
He extended his hand. Simon grabbed it.
Patrick
Your hand, it’s so cold.
Simon
Your hand is so warm.
Simon’s smile grew and Patrick laughed.
Patrick
Well it’s nice to meet you. What about you two?
Ximendos
I am Ximendos, and this is Amanda.
Amanda
Hello.
Patrick
Nice to meet you. Next question,
He pointed at them.
Patrick
What the hell do you want?
Ximendos was growing impatient.
Ximendos
I’ve come to ask you for your allegiance. You posses great power and it would be wise if you joined my ranks.
Patrick
That’s great.
He yawned.
Patrick
Well, it was nice meeting you. Oh and you,
Simon looked at him knowing he was speaking to him.
Patrick
Hopefully I’ll see you around.
Simon blushed.
Ximendos
You aren’t going anywhere.
Patrick stopped.
Patrick
And why not?
Ximendos
Either you come with me or you die.
Patrick laughed again.
Patrick
Kill me? I’m immortal.
Ximendos
I am aware of that. What you aren’t aware of is there are ways of getting rid of immortals.
Patrick
Immortals can’t die.
Ximendos
You’re correct for the most part. But they can die. Not in the same way a normal human dies, but they can.
Patrick
How do you know this?
Ximendos
Because I’ve killed one.
He lied. Patrick laughed again.
Patrick
So I join you or you kill me?
Ximendos
That’s your ultimatum.
Patrick looked over at Simon and smiled.
Patrick
I’m in.
Ximendos
Excellent.
Amanda
Let us go. We have three more to go.
Ximendos
By the way Patrick, are your parents home?
Patrick
No, they’re dead.
Ximendos
I see.
Ximendos was happy with this. He crossed his checklist.
Patrick
I call shotgun!
He stood by Simon.
Simon
We’re not driving.
Patrick
Well then how the fuck-
They disappeared.
3 months later……
Vanessa combed her long black hair in front of the mirror. She knows she is beautiful, as she stared at her own green eyes. As an aspiring actress/model and this year’s prom queen, life is just perfect, she thought.
Her Dad
Honey, we’re leaving now.
Vanessa
Okay dad! See you when you get home.
She smiled. She loved her parents.
Ximendos
Orthak, it is time.
As Vanessa’s parents’ car drove down the street Orthak ran for it. The car collided into a poll and exploded.
Ximendos
Two more and we are done.
Orthak appeared next to him.
Ximendos
Very nice, now leave.
Orthak disappeared. Vanessa came running outside.
Vanessa
No!
She ran towards the car but Ximendos grabbed her.
Ximendos
There is nothing you can do.
She struggled for a second but then stopped in his arms.
Vanessa
Please, help them.
Ximendos rubbed her head.
Ximendos
It’s too late for them.
She cried.
Ximendos
We must go.
Vanessa
Where are you taking me?
Ximendos
Away from here.
Vanessa passed out in his arms.
1 month later……
Danny had just received the news that his parents died in a mysterious car accident. He sat in his room alone. He has long brown hair and green eyes. His parents, who he was like best friends with, are now dead. He has no one else.
Danny
Fuck this.
Danny found his dad’s gun. Danny always heard stories about kids using their own parent’s guns to kill themselves, but he never thought he’d be one of them.
Danny
Fuck it.
Danny put the gun barrel in his mouth and pulled the trigger. As he did the door opened. Patrick, Simon, and Vanessa walked in.
Patrick
We’re too late.
Vanessa
As if that matters.
They laughed. Simon didn’t.
Simon
We don’t have all day. Is he going to reconstruct himself or what?
Patrick
Give it time, Simon.
Simon threw a smile at Patrick. Danny’s head came back together.
Vanessa
There ya go.
Danny grabbed at his head.
Danny
Why am I still alive?
Patrick
Well we can answer that.
Danny quickly pushed himself up and got against the wall.
Danny
Who the hell are you?
He demanded.
Simon
I am Simon, this is Patrick,
Patrick waved.
Simon
And this is Vanessa.
Vanessa smiled.
Danny
I don’t care about your names! Who are you?
Patrick
Calm down, and we’ll tell you.
Danny
Calm? I just shot myself and now I’m alive again with three random people in the room!
Patrick put his hand on his face.
Patrick
You’re getting annoying. Either you shut the fuck up and let me talk or I’ll smash your fucking head in.
Danny stopped talking.
Vanessa
That is much better.
Patrick
We’re three agents of the Shadow Regime. We’re here to ask you for your allegiance.
Danny
My allegiance in what?
Simon
I’ll wait outside.
Simon walked out.
Patrick
Don’t mind him; he doesn’t like hearing people talk.
Vanessa
You’re an immortal and we need you in our team.
Danny
I don’t want to be apart of any team!
He walked towards the door.
Danny
You can all just get the hell out of my house.
Patrick’s arm blocked Danny’s way.
Patrick
Not so fast, dead boy.
Patrick’s smile was gone.
Patrick
Either you come with us or we have to call in the big gun.
Danny
Who is the big gun?
Patrick
Our boss.
Danny
What will he do if he comes?
Patrick
Kill you.
Danny
But I thought you said I’m an immortal!
Vanessa
The boss has his ways.
Danny
So if I come with you guys, I’ll be okay?
Vanessa
Yes. You’ll also be trained in order to harness whatever powers you posses.
Danny thought for almost a minute.
Danny
Fine. I’ll join you guys. I don’t really have a choice.
Patrick
Good! Excellent choice, my friend.
Danny
So how do we get out of here? Where is your car?
Vanessa giggled.
Patrick
That’s close to what I said my first time.
They disappeared.
1 month later….
Patrick
And his name is?
Vanessa
Tom Scawley.
Simon
What a hideous name.
Vanessa
Oh well. I just wish we didn’t have to pick him up in a funeral home.
Patrick
Scared or something?
Vanessa
Not at all. Just a little sad.
Patrick
What the hell, why?
Vanessa
Because we’ll never die.
Patrick
Not unless we face Ximendos.
Simon
Which we never will.
They all agreed. They opened the last door in the hallway. It is a big white room with little white doors all long the walls.
Patrick
You hear that?
They listened. They could hear banging.
Vanessa
That must be him.
They opened the small door it was coming from. The banging got louder right when it opened.
Tom
Help! Help!
They pulled the coffin out.
Tom
Let me out of here! I’m not dead.
Patrick
You were!
Tom stopped talking.
Patrick
He must be shocked.
Patrick dropped the coffin on the ground.
Tom
Ouch!
Patrick laughed and Simon smiled his way.
Vanessa
Should we open it?
Simon
No, I’m bored and annoyed. Let’s go.
They disappeared with the coffin.
January 1900
They all stood in front of Ximendos, down a small set of stairs.
Ximendos
We’re complete. I must say I am very pleased.
Ximendos opened his arm and raised them.
Ximendos
You are my warriors!
They stood their in silence.
Ximendos
Now before anything happens, I must give you new names.
Amanda spoke first.
Amanda
New names? For what?
Ximendos sat down in the giant throne behind him.
Ximendos
Well, Amanda is not really a warrior name.
They all agreed.
Ximendos
Amanda, please step forward.
Amanda walked up the ten stairs.
Ximendos
You will no longer be Amanda White. Your new name is Akasha.
She smiled.
Ximendos
And so, Akasha is born.
She walked back down.
Ximendos
Simon, you’re next.
He walked up.
Ximendos
You are getting a name that suits who you are the most. You, my brother-in-law, are now Syn.
Syn’s smile was never this dark. He then stepped down.
Ximendos
Patrick, you’re next.
Patrick
That’s me, guys!
He ran up the steps, almost tripped, and then straightened up.
Patrick
Let me have it, master.
Ximendos
You’re name was a tad bit difficult to create.
Patrick smiled.
Ximendos
You’re quite the character and you are one who follows a path to its end.
Patrick got down on one knee.
Ximendos
You are now, Pathion
Pathion
I like, I really like.
He stepped down and Vanessa took his place.
Vanessa
I am yours, my master.
Ximendos
You are now, the beautiful Vesper.
Vesper
Yes, your majesty.
She stepped down and Danny took her place.
Ximendos
Are you ready for your name?
Danny
Always, my lord.
Ximendos
You are now Darby.
Darby
Excellent.
He walked down with the others. Tom walked up.
Tom
I am ready.
Ximendos
Tom, you are now Tusa.
Tusa
I am grateful, your honor.
He took his place with the rest.
Ximendos
Akasha, please take my side.
Akasha walked to the top and sat on the arm rest.
Ximendos
Akasha is my right hand. You work under her after I do. You five represent my left hand. My Syn clan.
They all looked confused.
Ximendos
Yes, Syn is your leader. He is the most powerful out of you all.
Pathion
Hey wait! Why can’t I be leader?
Syn
You could if you’d like.
Pathion laughed.
Pathion
No, I am just kidding. I wouldn’t have it any other way.
Syn smiled.
Ximendos
Well then. Now that it’s settled. I’d like you to meet one more person in our team.
Akasha
Another person?
Ximendos
Yes, he has been apart of my force since the beginning.
Akasha wasn’t happy with this. From the dark appeared Orthak.
Ximendos
This is Orthak.
He screamed. They all looked upon him in horror.
Vesper
What is he?
Ximendos
I do not know what to call him other than Orthak.
Pathion
We can call him darkness!
Syn
Orthak suits it well.
Darby
Is it powerful?
Ximendos
You have no idea. Orthak is a monster. He is my greatest weapon.
Pathion
I thought we were!
Ximendos
You’re my left hand, Akasha my right, he is my chest.
Syn
That is fine with us.
Vesper
I see no reason for distress.
Ximendos
Good. You may all go and rest now. I have business to attend to on my own in another world.
Ximendos stood up and left the room with Orthak. Akasha left through the other door.
Vesper
Orthak’s presence offends her.
Syn
That it does.
Pathion
Oh well, that’s not our problem.
Pathion turned to Syn.
Pathion
Let’s go get some air.
They left the room.
Vesper
Would you two like to go have some lunch?
Darby
I can’t think of anything better.
Tusa
Of course!
Syn and Pathion stood on the balcony watching the sun go down.
Syn
It is beautiful.
Pathion
I can’t argue with that.
Syn
Is that so? Or is it because you do not wish to argue with me?
Pathion
It could be both. What does it matter?
Syn
It doesn’t. I was simply curious.
Pathion
Curiosity killed the cat.
Syn
You won’t be killing me.
Pathion
I know.
Pathion set his hand on top of Syn’s.
Pathion
You know, when I first saw you I didn’t think you really existed. I thought for sure you were just a figment of my imagination.
Syn
Charmed. What was it that caught you?
Pathion
Your smile and your face, and now the amazing personality that you have.
Syn
I must say when I first heard you laugh, you had me. My sister used to be all that mattered to me.
Pathion
And?
Syn
Now I have you.
Pathion smiled, he forgot to laugh. Syn laughed.
Syn
What are you looking at?
Pathion
The sun shining on your face as it sets.
Syn
You’re most kind.
Pathion
You’re beautiful.
Syn
As are you.
The sun was now gone.
Pathion
Would it be too early to say I love you?
Syn
It’s never too early.
Pathion
I love you, Simon.
Syn
I love you too, my young Patrick.
14 years later……
Tusa was the first to fall. Darby fell in battle. Vesper fell next. Pathion fell laughing. Syn picked his body up from the ground.
Syn
Amanda!
Akasha turned while fighting Amya to see her brother carrying Pathion.
Amya
You’re not going anywhere.
Her hands were tied. The Syn clan failed. Although they took out a handful of members of the White Coats, they had fallen. Hayden, Merdos, Masato, and Dynobin approached Syn now that they had defeated the rest.
Syn
Patrick, I am sorry.
He placed Pathion down and turned to fight. His opponents are Hayden, Merdos, Masato, Dynobin, and Grey Kasper.
Syn
Die!
He attacked with hate and love. Dynobin died before they were able to defeat him.
Syn
Amanda, please!
Akasha moved forward to save her little brother but Amya jumped in the way.
Akasha
Move!
With all she could muster she blasted Amya out of the way. She now was free to save him.
Ximendos
No!
Ximendos broke free from fighting Amros and grabbed her arm.
Ximendos
If you go you will die!
Akasha
He is my brother!
Ximendos
Let’s go! To higher ground we must go.
Akasha
I can’t leave him.
Ximendos pulled her away.
Ximendos
He’s dead already.
Syn
Amanda?
Syn watched his sister turn away before Hayden’s foot smashed his head. Ximendos and Akasha ran back.
Ximendos
You must go!
Akasha
I can’t leave you too!
Ximendos
You must and you will!
He used some of the little energy he had left to send her away and keep her there. Hayden and everyone stood back while Amros and Amya approached Ximendos.
Amros
It’s over, Amron.
Ximendos raised his hand to attack but was pushed back by Amros.
Amros
You never give up.
Ximendos sat up and spat blood on the ground.
Ximendos
Neither did mother. Or have you forgotten her sacrifice?
Amya
That won’t work on us.
Amros
You are finished. Your people have fallen and you are defeated.
Ximendos
Is that so?
He stood up.
Ximendos
I have enough energy to destroy this entire planet.
They all sensed his power grow to almost his normal level. They knew they were just about as done as he is.
Amros
Stop, this doesn’t need to happen.
Ximendos
Oh but it does!
Amya
Think about mother!
Ximendos
Shut up!
Amya
She isn’t only in your heart.
Ximendos felt water in his eyes.
Hayden
Think about Akasha and your future together.
Ximendos turned to Hayden.
Ximendos
How dare you! How dare you all!
Amros
Amron, it’s over. We’re offering you a truce.
Ximendos
I want a treaty!
Hayden
And you will have one. We just have to know you’re serious.
Ximendos
I could destroy this entire planet.
Amros
And what would that accomplish? We’d all be dead. You can’t rule if you’re dead.
Ximendos knew this was true. He thought about his mother, he thought about Akasha, and he thought about the three faces in front of him that he’s always known. He thought about his future and his trek into the unknown. For a second he thought he could hear his mother and then he saw her in their faces. Amros, Amya, and Amron, they are one, he thought. It was over and done.
Days later…….
Syn woke up to Pathion’s voice.
Syn
Patrick, is that really you?
Although he couldn’t see him, he felt his presence on the other side of the white wall.
Pathion
Yes, it’s me.
Syn
We’re alive.
Pathion
Yes, but we’ve all been captured.
Syn thought about their situation.
Syn
I was ready to die with you.
Pathion
I know.
Syn
We’ll get out of here. One day.
Pathion
I know, I know, I know, Syn.
Syn smiled and for a second Pathion thought he could see it.
Syn
We have each other.
Pathion laughed and for a moment Syn could hear it.

Man that was LONG!
ReplyDeleteI kept thinking Mr.Stranger had a western accent when he spoke and then would speak clear english when he was Ximendos lol.
I liked the beginning scene the most, reminded me of True Romance a bit :)
No offense, but I wish the chapters were shorter, just because sometimes I have to go back and skim through the previous entry to follow up with the current one.....theres just too much to follow!
but this is great none the less.
All these new characters is beginning to feel like season 2 has just begun (LOL).
I like this Syn character, and think he would mess well against Cameron.
Amanda: Oooh that girl got sass. Looove her.
ReplyDeletePathion and Syn: That was just too cute. I loove how you portrayed how they were with each other.
All in all it was fantastic. I loove to read this.
Damn you Marco I wanted to be first! Anywho, I heard more of a proper english gentleman like voice as I always have with him.
Great Job!
Oh wow right now! This chapter was ridiculously insightful because it let us know how things came to be with Ximendos and everyone associated with him. Apparently Ximendos has something in his heart that he dose not want to let go of. I am curious to know where this is going to go.
ReplyDeleteWhat is going to happen with Syn and Pathion being captured? Can they use their powers to escape and rejoin the others?
Akasha had to make a decision and she chose Ximendos instead of Syn, what does that say about her?
Ximendos is still my favorite character and will continue to be because he is so powerful and strong, yet there is a side of him that I do not know of. I want to know more and have a better picture of him.
Excellent chapter =) like the new feeling im getting from the characters. keep up the good work man.
ReplyDeleteAgreed that it was long but very good. I love the flashback chapters and I think this is one of my favorite ones. I loved to see how the shadow regime came together and about all of their past. This was such a good chapter. I cannot wait to read more and see what is in store.
ReplyDeleteOmg Steven i cried literal tears down my check when Amamda was saying how her life is...i relate to her so much in this chapter i feel as if im her its mind boggling ...and like everyone i love the flashbacks it gives me insight to how they bacame who they are in the present...good job!!
ReplyDeleteHoly shit! that was LONG. :)
ReplyDeletewowwwww. but i loved it anyways even if it was so long. hahaha. ;)
it showed the background of it all.
that Ximendos isn't as powerful as he is now.
He HAD to start somewhere you know.
And how Akasha was just a woman who wanted happiness, but she found it in Ximendos and so she had to make some sacrifices.
Amazing, just amazing.
The immortals were his comrades eh?
I didn't see that coming!
So Syn and Pathion are still alive?
Hmmmm. why are they not dead but captured.
they must be of use to something.
Another amazing chapter as usual.
I had to digest too much I don't really know what to say!
reading on.<3
i knew amanda was alaska!! ahah
ReplyDeleteare they the ones that were unlocked by fallen?
i really liked this chapter and how they were all created and how the treaty was created
oh these are the people in the cell. very nice way of introducing them :)
ReplyDeletewow, this was a long chapter. but again, it's always nice catching up on history between people.
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ReplyDeleteVery long flash back but wonderfully done
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the introduction of all these characters very much. When I think back to those who were in the cell I thought of grotesque monsters were hidden away inside. that they are so power and destructive
and its crazy cuz these "immortals" take the form of human beings.
Its the classic case of never judge a book by its cover
Point blank my most favorite thing was syn and pathion
I just heart u for portraying their love for each other without getting "too much"
its very realistic and its touching
It was amazing to me...thank you for that
One one thing was the car "joke"
lol where is the car?
and i loved how they asked that
i actually laughed allowed seeing it in my head
but then i remember that this was around the end of 1800s/early 1900s
One thing is they all seemed so modern or present..i was imagining modern day young ppl as in today
Like the whole car line makes me forget the time frame in which they are in
i mean its your story but i had to go look back at what year the flash back was taking place
but its great
that was a long chapter! haha but very good!
ReplyDeleteone thing i have to say though is that in 1886 i don't think a woman would be permitted into a bar by herself and there were no lighters, only matches. and the dialogue would be different during that time period.... and sex out of wedlock was out of the question. i would rethink the time period or just make a few modifications.
other than that this was a good flashback! this story just gets more and more intense
Once again i am not surprised by this chapter! the heat just keeps on coming and keeps getting better and better.. a reader not only loves to read a great story, but loves the connection they develop among characters. i like how i can relate to amanda's life story in the beginning, classic! the rise of Shadow Regime is finally revealed!
ReplyDeleteLongest chapter yet. And it was amazing. I really liked this chapter, told so much!! I would enjoy it if you had a timeline somewhere in the blog as one of the features. That'd be pretty cool, cuz it's hard to remember those dates, watch me mix that up on a Global test, 1914: war between the 3 siblings and White Coats/Shadow Regime, not World War I xD
ReplyDeleteTwas an amazing chapter.. I love the scene jumping and the obtaining new members. It's just lovely to be honest. And as people have said before, the whole Akasha and Ximendos hookup story was great :p
ReplyDeletethe introduciton of the new characters, such as Amanda and Patrick. seemed WAY to rushed. Two things puzzled me at the beginning: why is there a striking, curvacious drunk woman walking the streets of new york city in the early morning darkness alone and without a taxi as escort for a mile? Why was Amanda so willing to implicitly trust an absolute stranger, even though Ximenendos was presented in this chapter as a regular casanova? Seems kind of sketchy to me, and if I were in her place I would run for help. Either Ximendos used some kind of incubus suduction with his magic or Amanda is REALLY gullible
ReplyDeleteSuch an amazing chapter! I knew it was Akasha in the beginning, and so it answered my question of how they got together in the first place. So... was she taken as a pawn at first, or someone to truly love? That question does make me wonder. I can't believe that Vesper and the others who had their parents killed by Orthak never questioned their parents' deaths! Oh and I thought that the relationship between Patrick and Simon was really sweet, but I wish it didn't have to end so fast. :( You should do a side story about the Syns! Haha...like a filler chapter.
ReplyDeleteFirst thing I was thinking...." who is Amanda?! She must be important a character already mentioned, but who?"
ReplyDeleteHahaha I thought the stranger was a bum, not a handsome man! Lol
Oh is it akasha!! She does have two kids!!!
Yesssssssss! It was akasha and ximendos!!! I knew it! Lol
I love how orthak talks to him, very sinister!
Oh wow Patrick reconstructing himself was awesome!!!!
Dam, they killed vanessas parents like that.... Who are these kids I wonder...
Syn.... Hmmmm krysin maybe?????
If these immortal kids are afraid of orthak he must look scary!
Oooooo okay pact was broken by Gemma, nice!
Wait where are syn and pathion?...,,,
What is Ximendos holding on to that does not allow for him to let it go? Is there some part of his back story that we are not being told and have to wait it out? I do not think I am ready for the suspense and surprise that I will receive when I do find out!
ReplyDeletePeople are now being captured, but they have powers, does this mean they will use those power in order to rejoin the others and continue with what they were doing or is this the end for Pathian and Syn?
Why is Ximendos so angry with the world and humanity, is there something buried deep in hi past we dont know of yet? i loved the recap and introduction of all the Shadowl regime. They way he met "amanda", at first i was like ohh shit shes gonna get raped but it turned out to be so much more than that, as evil as Ximendos is, i feel he turly loves Akasha. Somehow while reading it, i knew it was Askaha and Ximendos when i began reading this chapter.
ReplyDeleteSyn and Pathian, while different apart, were seemed to be made for eachother when they were together. I fell in love with there relationship and soon as Pathian said," Your smile and your face, and now the amazing personality that you have."
For once, i found myself rooting for shadow regime..