Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Chapter Forty-Eight: The Boy Who Cried Dragon!

Arkain woke up to five figures standing above him.
Pathion
Finally he’s awake. I thought he’d sleep forever.
Vesper
He looked so peaceful.
Tusa
Yum.
Arkain stood up.
Arkain
Can I help you?
Syn
No, we’re going to help you.
Arkain
Oh yeah, training.
Pathion put his arm around him.
Pathion
Relax buddy, it’s going to be fun. Before you know it you’ll be ready to take on all the bad guys.
Arkain
I can do that now.
Pathion looked at Arkain like he just told a bad joke.
Pathion
You really don’t know what you’re up against. The likes of Ximendos won’t be beaten by a little boy with an attitude.
Arkain took his arm off of him.
Arkain
I never said I was against you guys training me.
Cameron appeared.
Cameron
Well good, because you need it.
Arkain gave him a dirty look.
Arkain
Alright, let’s get this started.
Syn
Excellent. We will start now.
Arkain
When will this be done?
Darby
A couple of hours.
Arkain
That’s some quick training. Why so fast?
Pathion
We work fast. We’ll teach you some hand to hand combat skills. After that we’ll give you some energy. And then after that, as asked by Fallen, we’ll give you a sword.
Arkain looked puzzled.
Arkain
I have one already.
Pathion
You don’t have a Dragon’s sword. It’s not just any old sword. It’s one of the most powerful weapons anyone has.
Arkain
Who else has one of these Dragon swords?
Pathion
There are only five swords in the entire world. Ximendos has one. His two kids have one, we heard, and Cameron has one. And of course, the last one Fallen is carrying.
Arkain
Cameron, you have one?
Cameron
Yes I do.
Arkain
Awesome!
Syn
Cameron, we’ll need you later for a demonstration of your sword.
Cameron nodded.
Cameron
She’s been dying for me to let him loose.
Arkain
Okay cool. So what are we waiting for? Let’s get started.
Pathion
Right this way, your highness.
Pathion pointed towards the ocean. They disappeared.
Fallen
Well, everything is going as planned.
Fallen stretched his body.
Cameron
Yes, it is. It’s funny how it all went so well. I thought it would be a tad bit more difficult to bring Arkain around.
Fallen
The purest of heart are always the easiest to paint your color.
Cameron smiled.
Cameron
I can’t argue with that. I must say though, I really do like Arkain. He’s not the stupid kid I thought he was.
Fallen
He never has been. Sure, he has the attitude of a human but he is most definitely one of us.
Fallen looked up at Cameron.
Fallen
I knew you’d like him. You two are a lot of the same person.
Cameron
I’ve noticed.
Fallen laughed.
Cameron
Why are you laughing?
Fallen
No reason. I just felt like laughing.
Fallen stood up.
Fallen
I really do hope the sword answers to him.
He licked his paw.
Cameron
As do I. At the moment Ximendos holds three swords. We need another.
Fallen
That we do.
Cameron
The Dragon Sword must become Arkain’s.
Fallen
I really do hope so. Arkain has a lot to do for us.
Cameron smiled.
Fallen
Don’t go becoming too close to him.
Cameron
I know. I treat my tools well. Letting them think we’re friends is a part of the deal.
Fallen jumped into his arms.
Fallen
Good, now let’s go get us some breakfast. I think Velis and Malic would like to come along. Let’s go get them.



Iris woke up due to her bed moving.
Ilias
Wake up, sister.
Iris opened her eyes.
Iris
What do you want?
Ilias
I’ve come to speak with you. I didn’t have a chance to do it yesterday.
Iris rolled the other way so she wouldn’t be facing him.
Iris
I don’t care. We no longer have anything to talk about.
Ilias
That’s not true.
He lied down next to her looking up.
Ilias
We have loads to talk about. Where were you last night, by the way?
Iris
None of your business.
Ilias
While that’s true, I’d still like to know.
Iris mumbled.
Ilias
I can’t hear you.
Iris took her face off her pillow.
Iris
I found Cameron. I tried to kill him.
Ilias
I knew it. Little Iris always going for the gold.
He chuckled.
Ilias
So I take it he’s dead?
Iris put her face back into the pillow.
Ilias
I’ll take that as a no. What happened?
Iris
Fallen showed up.
Ilias
Oh dear, he ruins everything. No worries, you’ll get him next time.
Iris
I’m sure of it. I was going to use my sword, but they disappeared.
Ilias
Well good thing you didn’t. You would have been in trouble with father. You know the rules.
Iris
No drawing swords until after the cleansing.
Ilias
Yes. Not only would it waste too much energy, it would be pointless. In the new world they can run free all they’d like. Until then, it would be wise to keep them hidden. As it is, everyone is doing the same.
Iris
There is also another problem.
Ilias
And that would be?
Iris
I’ll tell you when I tell father.
Ilias
That’s fine. I have something to tell you anyways.
Iris
Yeah, what’s that?
The door opened.
Akasha
Good, you’re both awake.
She stepped in.
Akasha
We’re having a meeting. Get your things and meet in the white hall.
They both nodded and she left.
Iris
You were saying?
Ilias got off the bed.
Ilias
I’ll just tell you later. After the meeting, if I am up to it.
Iris
That is fine with me.
Ilias bent down and kissed her on the forehead.
Ilias
I will see you in a few.
Iris
Will do.
Iris smiled. He left the room.


Nicholas walked outside into the sun.
Anna
Good morning, Nicholas.
Anna stood in the sun with a cigarette and a shotgun.
Nicholas
What are you doing out here?
Anna
I’m just relaxing.
Nicholas
With a gun?
Anna
It’s called protection. Relax, I’m not going to shoot anyone.
Nicholas
I hope not.
Anna motioned for him to come sit next to her.
Nicholas
It’s almost noon. This day is passing by quickly.
Anna
Yup. Two more days until we can attack. If it wasn’t for that damn Fallen person we would have already attacked.
Nicholas
I’m kind of glad we didn’t.
Anna looked at Nicholas with wide eyes.
Anna
And why is that?
Nicholas
We’re all still alive.
He looked at her while his hands were clasped together. She aimed the shotgun to the sky.
Anna
Better dead than ruled by these monsters.
Nicholas
I wouldn’t mind if Amros was the leader of the world.
Again she looked at him in horror.
Anna
You can’t be serious. He’s a monster.
Nicholas
A good one. Although I wouldn’t call him a monster.
Anna
All the same. They’re not God’s creations.
Nicholas
And we are?
Anna
I’d like to think so. We are perfect.
Nicholas
I would have thought God’s creations would have at least have been able to defend themselves.
Anna
We can.
Nicholas
I’d like to see you face Ximendos.
Anna
I would if I could.
Nicholas
Sounds like suicide.
Anna
I have God on my side. He would guide me to victory.
Nicholas
Is that so?
Anna
Yes it is.
Nicholas
I wouldn’t put too much faith in that, Molly.
Anna
I walk by faith, not by sight.
Nicholas
So why are you here?
Anna
Excuse me?
Nicholas
If God is behind you and you walk by faith, why aren’t you meeting Ximendos at his gates right now?
Anna was shocked by these words.
Nicholas
I’m tired of hearing things like that. If you walk by faith, by all means walk by it. But if so, close your eyes and really do it. Don’t just say it, do it. Close your eyes and let God guide you. If not, you’re just full of air.
He stood up.
Nicholas
With all due respect, do what you preach, don’t just open your mouth and talk.
Nicholas walked inside. Anna, upset, fired a shot in the air.
Anna
I’ll show you. I’ll show you all.

Emmylou
Oh shit!
The car began to slow down.
Suri
What’s going on?
Conor
Please tell me you just need to go to the rest room.
Emmylou turned to Suri.
Emmylou
Flat tire.
Suri
Shit.
Conor
Oh no!
The car stopped.
Conor
Where are we?
Emmylou
Last time I saw a sign we were in Ohio.
Conor
Well that’s not that far from the Empire’s home.
Emmylou
We’ll have to walk to the next town.
Ian woke up.
Suri
That’s all we can do.
They each got off the car.
Ian
Where we going?
Conor
We have to walk now.
Ian
What’s wrong with the car?
Conor rolled his eyes.
Conor
It doesn’t work anymore.
Ian
Did you break it?
Conor
No, your sister did.
Emmylou
I did not.
Conor
Sure, whatever.
They started walking.
Ian
I don’t want to walk!
Conor
You don’t have a choice.
Suri
I can carry you.
Emmylou
It’s okay, he can walk.
Suri
No, it’s totally fine. I won’t even feel him on my back.
Ian got on top of Suri’s back.
Suri
See, he’s as light as air.
Ian
Go!
Ian pointed forward.
Conor
This is going to suck.
Emmylou
You’re telling me.
And then they saw it.
Suri
This isn’t good.
At a distance on the road stood two giant Gears.
Emmylou
What do we do?
Conor
Shit, shit, and shit.
Suri
Doesn’t look like we can get around them and I don’t think they’re just going to let us pass. Looks like I’ll have to fight them.
Conor
How that hell can you do that? You’re as big as their feet.
Suri
Well looks like I’ll just have to take their feet off.
Emmylou
You sure you want to do this?
Suri
It’s our only option.

Amros, Hayden, Roselyn, and Grey all stood in the sun viewing the mountains.
Grey
In two days my fighters will be prepared for an attack.
Roselyn smiled.
Amros
Good. By that time all we will have to do is remove Ximendos and Akasha and capture Ilias. Once that is done, things will shift in our favor.
Roselyn
If all goes as you say, things will be perfect.
Amros
I have faith things will go as I’ve planned. The key here is Ilias.
Hayden
That it is. If we can remove Ximendos nothing will stand in our way. All that will remain is Ilias and a new world.
Grey
I like what you’re saying. If we can kill the new God, the world would be Godless.
Amros
Yes, and finally. This world and these humans have lived long enough with the idea of God.
Roselyn
That they have.
Hayden
Once enacted, they will finally be free from it. After that, with Ilias’ help, this world will finally be perfect.
Roselyn hugged Grey.
Roselyn
I certainly hope so. It sounds so magnificent. You know, the way you describe it.
She looked over at Amros.
Roselyn
And you thought of this idea all on your own?
He nodded.
Roselyn
I always knew you were a brilliant man. Amya spoke highly of you.
Amros
Thank you.
He turned towards them all.
Amros
When Hayden and I realized we’d be losing this world we have to decide on the next best option. This was the best we could think of.
Grey
You did well.
Hayden
The new world will come soon. Once it does, this world will find true peace.
They all smiled.
Roselyn
We can’t wait.
She kissed Grey.
Roselyn
Can I ask you something, Amros?
Amros
Of course.
Roselyn
Why are there five Dragon’s swords and only four Eagle Blades?
Amros put his hand on his chin.
Amros
Well that’s because there only needs to be four eagles. The great eagles are the only threats to the dragons. Four Eagles can take on five dragons is basically what I am getting at.
Roselyn
And you posses one of these swords?
Hayden
We have two.
Hayden smiled at Roselyn.
Roselyn
So we do have a chance.
Amros
Well, Amya has the other. As of now the Empire has three Dragon Swords and one Eagle Blade.
Grey
That doesn’t sound good.
Amros
It’s not. Believe me when I tell you, the coming war is going to be devastating.
Roselyn
I’ll be ready for that.
Grey
As will I. I’m not afraid of a dragon sword.
Roselyn and Grey laughed.
Amros
You should be. These weapons are deadly and destructive.
Hayden
That they are. When dragon fire meets eagles' breath the world will think it is coming to an end. You just watch. You have never seen power like this.
Roselyn
Well it’s a good thing we have at least two Eagles' blades on our side.
Amros
Better than none.
They laughed.
Roselyn
Can we see one?
Amros
An Eagle Blade? I don’t see why not.
He threw his staff up and it transformed into a long white blade.
Amros
Do try and not run.
He threw the blade forward and in a giant flash of light appeared a giant white eagle.
Roselyn
Amazing. The power it is giving off it unbelievable.
He released a giant cry.
Grey
What is it’s name?
Amros
His name is Wynson.
It extended its giant wings.
Roselyn
I can’t believe it.


Ximendos
We have much to discuss.
Ximendos sat at the end of the table with Akasha next to him. Commander Gunner stood behind him. Ilias sat down across from Amya.
Amya
Good morning, Prince Ilias.
Ilias
Good morning, Lady Amya.
She smiled.
Ximendos
Where is your sister?
Iris
Here.
Iris walked in and sat next to Amya.
Iris
Feeling a bit better, Amya?
Amya
Yes I am.
She said a tad bit annoyed.
Ximendos
We have great news.
He said putting his hands together.
Akasha
The Gears have completely wiped out any governmental or religious buildings around the world. If anything remains you will destroy it Ilias.
He nodded.
Akasha
For the bigger news I will let Ximendos give it to you.
Ximendos stood up.
Ximendos
We’ve found her.
Ilias
Who have we found?
Ximendos
Orthak is our master at tracking down people. He located a strong energy source and tracked it down. He is confronting it now. If our guess is correct, the energy source comes from a girl named Suri.


Cameron, Velis, Malic, and Fallen looked down the hill to see Arkain fighting Pathion.
Malic
I see they’re teaching him hand to hand combat.
Velis
Good. Last time I kicked his ass.
Malic laughed.
Cameron
He’ll need all he can get. If he’s supposed to battle Ilias or Iris he’ll need to be strong.
Fallen
That’s what his sword will be for.
Cameron
The problem is they have them as well. They even have Amya.
Fallen
That’s true. Oh well, we can still beat them.
Velis laughed.
Velis
Of course we can! I say we take it to them as soon as possible.
Malic
Don’t mind her guys, she doesn’t think much.
Velis knocked Malic to the floor.
Malic
Stop it!
Velis
That’ll teach you how to shut your mouth.
Pathion and Arkain stopped.
Syn
It is time, Prince Cameron.
Fallen
How exciting.
Fallen jumped out of his arms and ran down the hill to them. Cameron, Velis, and Malic followed.
Arkain
What’s going on now?
Arkain spat blood on the floor.
Syn
Well now that the first two steps are complete, it’s time for the last.
Arkain
Oh yeah, the sword.
Fallen
That’s my cue.
Fallen ran forward to Arkain, stopped in front of him and opened his mouth.
Arkain
What the hell?
As Fallen stepped back a sword handle appeared.
Arkain
Do I?
Pathion
Grab it, idiot.
Arkain grabbed it and pulled it out of Fallen’s mouth.
Pathion
I wonder how he does that.
He said quietly to Vesper.
Pathion
Can you do that?
Vesper
Pig.
Vesper walked away. Arkain held the black blade up to his face.
Arkain
It’s beautiful.
He noticed the purple ruby on the handle.
Arkain
I really do like purple.
Fallen
Oh thank goodness it’s that color. I don’t know what we’d do if it were yellow.
Arkain
I know. I hate yellow.
Fallen walked over to Syn.
Fallen
This process is quite simple. You’ve already managed to get past phase one.
Arkain
Really? How did I do that?
Pathion
I swear, this kids as dumb as you.
Tusa
That’s not nice.
Tusa walked away from Pathion.
Fallen
Not just anyone can carry that blade. If Cameron were to grab it, it would release an energy throwing him away from it.
Arkain looked at the blade again.
Arkain
So it’s mine?
Fallen
Not just yet. The second part is where things get tricky.
Arkain
Why’s that? It already lets me hold it.
Fallen
Yes, but that doesn’t mean you’re friends. That doesn’t mean you’re connected.
Arkain
Connected?
Fallen
Yes, connected.
Syn
That sword you carry is a Dragon Sword. Which means-
Arkain
It’s a dragon? You have to be kidding me.
He looked past the sword to them.
Arkain
You are joking right? I didn't think you guys literally meant a dragon!
Fallen face palmed himself.
Syn
No, we are not kidding. The sword is not only an object, but it is also a living breathing monster.
Arkain
Alright, I’ve had to deal with the fact that I’m an angel. Cameron can use fire, Velis is fast, you guys are some kind of a clan with power, Fallen’s a fox, and Hayden’s an Elf.
Malic
Hey, he didn’t say my name.
Malic was sad. Velis hugged him.
Arkain
And now you’re telling me dragons also exist?
Fallen
Why is that so hard to believe?
Arkain
It’s not that it’s hard, it’s just unreal.
Syn
These swords are Elvin. They are not from your world.
Arkain
Still, we’re talking about dragons here!
Syn
Cameron, please show him your sword.
Cameron
With pleasure.
Cameron stepped forward. A flame appeared before him and he drew a sword from it. Cameron's sword was black with a blue ruby on the handle.
Cameron
Arkain, hold your blade up.
They both raised their blades to their faces.
Arkain
What are we doing?
Cameron
Set your thumb on the ruby.
Arkain
What thumb? Right hand, left hand?
Cameron
It doesn’t matter.
Arkain set his right thumb on the ruby. The ruby began to glow.
Arkain
It’s glowing!
Cameron
Now you’re going to have to think.
Arkain
Okay?
Fallen
This is the hard part, Arkain. The naming of your sword.
Arkain
Thanks!
He said sarcastically to Fallen.
Cameron
You must think, and you must do so with all you have in you.
Arkain
For what?
Cameron
You have to name your sword.
Arkain
I can do that.
Cameron
But if you name it wrong, it will seal itself away from you forever.
Arkain
Well that’s not so bad.
Cameron
And it will kill you.
Arkain lowered the sword.
Arkain
It will kill me?
Pathion
That’s what he said!
Darby
The boy is very funny.
Pathion
Shut up.
Darby walked away from Pathion.
Cameron
You have to concentrate. Think about a name you think will fit your sword. The name must mean something to you. If you get it right, the sword is yours.
Arkain
This doesn’t sound easy anymore.
Fallen
It’s not supposed to be!
Cameron
Now silence. You have to think!
Arkain stood there silently. His heart began to race. After all that has happened, would he die by a sword that was supposed to be his. He tried to clear his head.
Arkain
(This can’t be happening. Stop it Arkain, focus. Come on, name, name, name. How about after my mom? No. That won’t work. What if my swords a boy? Stop it, Arkain! He said it has to mean something to you. Okay, think. Stars! Stars mean something to me. Can’t name my sword star though. That’s a bit girly. What if it’s a girl? No, doubt it. Doesn’t feel like a girl. How can a sword feel like a girl? Stop it! Stop being stupid.)
They all watched Arkain as he silently spoke to himself in his head.
Arkain
(Be serious Arkain. You said stars, so let’s work with that. The stars mean something to you. They breath, they beat, they feel. Well that’s not getting us anywhere. You’ve always wanted to be up in the sky with them. Very close, very safe. It always seemed like that would be the place you’d call home. Yeah, come on, this could work.)
Fallen licked his paw, bored.
Arkain
(You could be up there now. You have the wings. You could be up there now if you wanted to. Just extend your wings and you could be soaring with them.)
They sword shook in his hands.
Arkain
(It just shook. I got close. Just extend your wings. Not that’s not it. And you could be soaring.)
It shook again.
Arkain
(Okay, that’s it. Something with Soaring.)
It shook again.
Arkain
(Okay, it likes that. What could it be what could it be. Soaring. Soar. Soaring.) Soren!
The blade’s ruby began to glow so bright everyone could see it.
Cameron
You’ve found the name.
Arkain smiled.
Arkain
I did. Now I don’t have to die.
Cameron
Well then, let us release our weapons.
Arkain
How do I do that?
Cameron
You must say the name of your sword out loud. Say it like you mean it.
Arkain
Alright. Say it like I mean it.
Cameron
Are you ready?
Arkain
Yes.
Cameron
I will be releasing mine as well.
Arkain
Okay.
Arkain was now sweating.
Cameron
On the count of three.
Arkain’s palms began to sweat.
Cameron
One.
Arkain saw the blue ruby on Cameron’s sword glow bright.
Cameron
Two.
He wondered if he should be Afraid.
Cameron
Three.
This was for all the marbles.
Arkain
Soren!
Cameron
Zuma!
There was a giant flash of light. Blinding even with the sun out.
Arkain
What the hell?
As Arkain got his sight back he saw it. He saw them.
Arkain
No way.
Before his eyes stood two giant dragons. The one closer to Cameron was significantly larger. The one in front of Arkain was smaller and had purple in its color while the one in front of Cameron had blue.
Cameron
What’s wrong, Arkain?
The giant Dragon before Arkain turned towards him. Arkain stood still. His green eyes met its purple ones.
Arkain
Dragons!

15 comments:

  1. Haha!! Omg i didnt expect all this!! ..Dragons?! ..now thats awesome..i really wanna know whats gonna happen next!?!

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  2. Sorry for the delay.. :(

    Omg this is so rivetting. Eeeep.

    i dont even know what the say the whole time i was at the edge of my seat well actually the edge of "my" laptop cuz im laying down and I would rise up a bit over the laptop out of excitement.

    Well lets see. it was all good. really captivating.

    uhm the thing were malic got sad was cute i was like aww.

    and yeah EWW no one likes yellow, though i'd prefer hot pink but i love purple too.

    uhm lastly...

    Hi Fallen. come here. You can jump into my arms too. come on. i'll love you forever and ever and ever. promise.

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  3. How to train your dragon! Haha
    Were you planning on doing the swords or got inspired by the movie?

    Good chapter I liked it.

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  4. OKAY.
    This story has gotten 1000000 times better!
    I absolutely love dragonsssss! yess. :)
    So here... Arkain has started and is about to be finished with his training. The real DEAL training that his stubborn head needs. And he has received his Dragon Sword. But... what I'm thinking since Fallen's and Cameron's motives aren't completely clean and Arkain's just a 'tool', what is to become of him?
    AH.
    Theeeeen. Suri and compnay are now actually in trouble, I was waiting for that part when there will be an 'oh shit' situation and there it is.
    And Orthak's the one who found her, not good! Anxious to see how that plays out.
    The back and forth between Nicholas and Anna was pretty entertaining/interesting, two people with two completely different beliefs, so...with Anna's last words in that. "I'll show you. I'll show you all." Hmmm. it's truly easier said than done so we shall see.
    Operations Cleansing is almost there, but will there be sibling drama when Iris finds out the news her brother is trying to tell her? uh-oh!
    amazing chapter like always. :)

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  5. Oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice, didn't see that coming at all. Great chapter, very entertaining. How do you think of this stuff??? =) Not a bad thing though trust me, this story is so freaking epic. Good job, and keep it up!!

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  6. This is amazing because youve invoked another thing that I love, that being dragons, reminds me of Norse mythology for some reason.
    Seeing Arkain reaching the finale of the training that he has endured
    allows me to think that hes finally beginning to have his head cleared.
    This is exciting because I cannot wait to see what hell do.
    I always though that Cameron was trying to befriend Arkain for some reason, I am hoping that its not for some lame thing.
    There should be a reason as to why he is doing that.
    Pretty excited for the Cleansing to begin because
    that is a pretty big step in the story.
    Ximendos is, of course, my favorite character still.
    You continue to impress me every time I read more and more
    of Arkain Steven, thanks <3.

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  7. This always-hungry Tusa scares me. "Yum" because he/she is hungry or "yum" being sexual?
    Yikes.
    Anyways, I LOVE the introduction of these swords to the story! And the fact that they are really dragons was great! I got the whole Avatar vibe from the fact that the sword/dragon is something that must connect with you and only then can you have it. And purple has always been one of my favorite coloures, I'm glad the ruby was purple!
    Funny, my first initial reaction was to think of Arkain`s mom when he had to choose a name. Guess i would have been dead :(

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  8. ...........and i TOTALLY see that this was a huge influence after you saw How To Train Your Dragon!!

    How To Train Your Arkain!!

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  9. :O dragons !!!

    i want one :D

    well i really liked this chapter. and i love the whole training part of it :)

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  10. I so badly want want cameron and arkain to be close

    i truly want cameron and arkain to be come best friends

    in a way i feel they are twin stars maybe

    that they have a connection beyond this world
    it will be so good if they find out about the conversation in the cell

    I cant wait for ximendos to find out about the SYN CLAN baby

    they are back and ready for action

    Iris is gonna be so pissed about the "proposal"

    Talk about NICOLAS shutting ppl doooowwwn

    i was getting so sick of anna

    i love how he bursted her bubble

    but knowing her
    she is gonna pull some shady as shit
    u kno how fanatics be like

    uggghhh

    but thank you for giving nicolas some kinda back bone there..in that conversation

    u showed a side of him i kinda needed to see :)

    the fucking swords sound amazingly awesome

    im guessing the dragon swords turn in to dragons?

    and if that is true..its way to fucking sick

    sick beyond belief yo

    i swear to god i dunno how u make this story get any cooler than it is now man

    but the eagle swords and dragon swords are a great throw in

    i mean u kno i cant stand suri

    i dont really feel to bad for her
    im just afraid of what it might do to my arkain if they found out they annihilated suri
    i dont want him to be broken hearted but im here for him if he needs some love

    lmao lol

    but once again i loved how u allowed him to access his dragon

    he had to find a name
    i love the story behind what would happen if he didnt find the name

    but the name sounds so perfect
    when he said dragons dude i was just like "DRAGONS!! too hot yo too hot"

    lolol

    once again another great chapter :D

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  11. Nice Chapter! Dragons & Eagles! This all seems like a family tree mathematical equation to me. XD

    I like what's going on though.

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  12. AWESOME! There's more too it than what I thought and all of this is getting amazing. I wonder what kind of power Suri really does hold that Ximendos has Orthak tracking.. Continuing on haha.

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  13. soren...dragons... chosen blades...I don't think this is dealing with the movie How to Train your Dragon. And I am right in suggesting that these ideas are in reference to the Fire Emblem series? It just seems to be too much of a coincidence otherwise. Anyway, this chapter should have had the rocky balboa training montage music :D

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  14. I want a fucking dragon sword that is just so awesome, way to make the story even better!
    "The purest at heart are always the easiest to paint your color." wow that was deep... [♥]
    Yea Arkain and Cameron are friends dammit! no faking...hahaha
    Anna stood in the sun with a cigarette and a shotgun=badass lol

    Dam nicholas speaks the truth! that speech about faith is great!

    Crap Suri, Conor, Emmylou, and Ian ran into gears Dam what are they going to do?

    Never mind, I want the Eagle blade! Oh my gosh! his staff turning into a blade! sooo cool...

    Oh shit! what the sword can kill him if he names it wrong?! screw that! lol

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  15. Noooo, what is Cameron planning for Arkain?? There's no way he thinks of him as just a pawn after what they've been through, or at last I hope not! I wonder how Iris will take the news of her brother's marriage. As Billie was saying, I completely agree with her opinions on Nicholas' speech! Was the sword naming a reference to Bleach? It just seems that way, I dunno if you read/watch any Bleach.
    I feel so bad for Malik haha, being left out and all! I want that sword... >_< The purple and green eyes at the end was really cool!

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