Supriya and Kegan floated above the edge of the palace grounds. They both had wings coming out of their back keeping them in place. Ximendos looked up at them.
Ximendos
Well, I did not expect to see the likes of you two here.
Ximendos looked down the cliff and then back to them.
Ximendos
Pardon my ignorance, but to what do I owe the pleasure?
Supriya
Where is Anna Carter?
Ximendos looked baffled.
Ximendos
Should that name ring a bell or something?
Supriya
She came here in a white Gears unit.
Ximendos
Oh.
Supriya
Where is she?
Ximendos
Well you kind of missed her. You see,
He pointed down.
Ximendos
She went that way.
Supriya
Let’s go, Kegan.
Ximendos
I don’t think so.
He grinned and clapped his hands together.
Ximendos
Kegan of the triple K brothers. I never thought I’d see you again.
Kegan, after looking straight at the palace the whole time, looked down on Ximendos.
Kegan
Likewise.
He said coldly.
Ximendos
Is that the tone you take with all of your old friends?
Kegan
We haven’t been friends for years.
Ximendos
Well at least I still have your brothers.
Kegan was now upset.
Kegan
Keep them out of this, Ximendos.
Ximendos laughed.
Ximendos
You know, I don’t think so. Amros and others are calling their allies, so why shouldn’t I? I think I’ll head over to see your brothers tomorrow. Thank you so much for reminding me. To think I had forgotten about them all this time.
Supriya
Don’t let him anger you. We have to get out of here.
Ximendos
Get out of here? Oh I don’t think you can.
Supriya
We didn’t come here to fight you.
Kegan
You’re not worth the time.
Ximendos
We’ll see about that.
He dropped his cloak.
Ximendos
I haven’t stretched my body in so long.
He cracked his neck. Kegan landed next to him. His wings were now gone.
Kegan
If I must, I’ll be your opponent.
He turned to Supriya.
Kegan
Get out of here. You must let the others know Anna is gone.
Supriya
I can’t leave you!
Kegan looked at Ximendos.
Kegan
You must. I can handle him.
Supriya
But-
Kegan
Go!
Supriya flew into the clouds.
Ximendos
How heroic you are sending the girl away so you can save the day. Some people never change.
Ximendos winked at Kegan.
Kegan
You’re right, they don’t. I see you’re still the monster you were when you trained with my brothers and I.
Ximendos
That was so long ago. I do miss the days when I ran around with you magicians.
Kegan
The feeling isn’t mutual.
Ximendos
As I expected. Your brothers will be most pleased to hear you are involved in all this.
Ximendos raised his right hand up.
Ximendos
After my brother and Hayden you are one of the most worthy opponents.
Kegan stretched his arms out.
Kegan
Let’s try and make this quick.
Ximendos
It all depends on how fast you die.
They flew towards each other.
Nick
Who’s the hottie?
He said as Arkain ran towards Suri.
Cameron
Her names Suri. She’s his though.
Nick
The good ones are always taken.
He scratched his head.
Nick
Oh well.
Velis approached them.
Cameron
Hello.
Velis
Cameron, can I speak with you in a bit?
Cameron
Of course. Give me ten minutes.
Velis
Alrighty.
She walked away.
Nick
Now that is a woman.
Cameron
And she’s mine.
Nick
Wow.
Arkain hugged Suri tightly in his arms. She smelled exactly the same as when he last saw her.
Arkain
What are you doing here? I can’t believe this.
He felt his eyes begin to water.
Arkain
You found me. You found me.
He kissed her forehead.
Suri
I did. It wasn’t that hard really. I remembered your smell.
Arkain’s smile shined in the sun while it was setting.
Arkain
You don’t know how happy I am to see you.
He tried to kiss her on the lips but she moved her head.
Suri
Who are your friends?
She said looking over he shoulders. He turned around.
Arkain
That’s Cameron and Nick. You remember Cameron, right? He tried to kill us.
Suri
Gotcha.
He grabbed her hand and walked her over to them.
Arkain
You guys, this is Suri.
Suri
Hello.
Nick
Pleased to meet you, I’m Nick.
Cameron
Hi.
He said indifferently.
Arkain
She’s my girlfriend.
Nick
Well you picked a winner.
They laughed. Suri stood quiet.
Cameron
Well now that she’s here she can help us with our plans.
Suri
I’m all in. What’s the plan?
Arkain explained to her the plan as she listened without interruption.
Suri
That’s a good one. It’s a good thing they’ll never know what hit them.
Cameron
Indeed.
Nick
I just want to put an end to all of this. Once we’re done things can get back to normal.
Cameron
I’m not sure there is a normal to get back to after this. The empire have destroyed any past humans had. Anything after this is all brand new.
Arkain
I have to agree. What was is no longer.
Nick
It doesn’t matter. Life is what it is now, not what it was. So whatever happens after is alright with me.
Suri
Well now isn’t too bad either. I mean sure the empire is evil but they aren’t doing horrendous things anymore. I happen to think the plan Ilias architected is brilliant.
Arkain looked at Suri as if she was a new person.
Arkain
What are you on?
She turned to him.
Suri
Well no one is dying anymore. The humans are rebuilding cities and their lives. They’ll fight no more and they’ll be happy. What’s so bad with that?
Cameron turned around and began to walk.
Cameron
We’ve discussed this Arkain, she’s right. Even so Suri, the empire must be removed. The humans must be freed.
Suri
Why? Because you say so? Let the humans decide for themselves.
Cameron burst into flames.
Cameron
Decide for themselves?
He turned slowly.
Cameron
When did they decide for this in the first place, exactly?
Suri
That’s irrelevant.
Cameron
The empire is controlling them like puppets and it’s time to cut the strings!
The ground shook behind them.
Arkain
What now?
They turned to see Pathion and Tusa standing up from where they seemed to have landed behind them.
Kegan dodged Ximendos’ punches and kicks with ease.
Kegan
You never were much of a hand to hand type of guy.
He pushed back and landed at a distance.
Ximendos
You’re absolutely right.
He swung his hand up and a giant green wave of energy flew towards Kegan.
Kegan
(I have to make sure he doesn’t lay a finger on me. I haven’t forgotten what he’s capable of.)
Kegan’s hands hit the ground and a giant wall appeared. Kegan jumped to the top of it.
Kegan
Still playing with fire I see.
Kegan’s hands burst into flames. He raised them to his mouth.
Kegan
Dragons breathe!
He blew his breath into his hands and everything in front of him was engulfed by flames. The flames disappeared and Ximendos still stood in the same spot. A green energy shield surrounded him.
Ximendos
Very nice, However.
He reached up into the air and drew his sword from thin air.
Ximendos
Let’s keep the dragon’s breath to the real dragons.
He threw his sword forward and it transformed into Zarathustra.
Kegan
Already using that are we?
Ximendos
Zara is always ready for combat. Why deny her certain pleasures?
Zara broke that wall down and Kegan jumped up. His wings appeared.
Ximendos
Kill him.
Zarathustra took flight towards him.
Ximendos
Right into my trap.
His put his hands together and a green ball of energy formed in them.
Ximendos
Let’s see you get away from this.
He threw it up into the sky.
Ximendos
Farewell, old friend.
The green ball of energy exploded and covered the whole sky. Ximendos caught his sword in his hand.
Ximendos
Good job, my darling.
Ilias got out of bed quickly.
Gemma
What was that?
Ilias
I don’t know. Probably my father.
He walked towards the door.
Gemma
Be careful.
Ilias
Don’t worry. I’m only going to observe.
He met Akasha in the hallway. She too was walking out towards the battle.
Ilias
How is my sister?
Akasha
She is well. She should be fully recovered by tomorrow.
Ilias
Good. We still have much to discuss. What is going on outside?
Akasha
I’m going to assume it’s your father. The amount of energy I felt can only have come from him.
Amya
And you are correct.
Amya was waiting for them at the end of the corridor.
Amya
We have company.
They looked up at the now black and green sky.
Ilias
How many?
Amya
One.
Akasha
Who would dare face Ximendos?
Amya
He’s a young looking man. I do not know him.
Ilias
Well we better take a closer look.
Akasha
Not too close. Wouldn’t want to be caught in the crossfire would we?
Ian
Where’s my sister?
Suri sat up to speak.
Suri
She’s out there somewhere. If I know her she’ll be coming to save us.
Ian
I miss her. I miss my mom and dad too.
Suri
I miss my mom too. But hey, we’re close to your dad.
Ian
Really?
Suri
Yeah. Emmylou said he’s in the Empire’s base and we are too.
Ian
Let’s find him!
Suri
We will Ian. We will.
Merdos the tiger stopped quickly when he reached the exact place where the Empire’s palace used to be.
Emmylou
So this is it?
Conor
Well where the hell is it?
They both got off of Merdos and he transformed back into his human form.
Merdos
Up.
He pointed up and they both looked up to the sky.
Emmylou
How are we going to get up there?
Conor
We can use a helicopter.
Emmylou
I don’t suppose you have one lying around.
Conor didn’t respond.
Emmylou
Do you fly?
Merdos shot her a dirty look.
Merdos
No, I do not.
Conor
What is that?
He said with a shaken voice. They each turned to see a body lying on the ground in a large pool of bloody.
Kegan appeared across from Ximendos.
Kegan
You only brought out Zara to distract me. I should have known.
His right shoulder was on fire.
Kegan
Very well.
He tore his shirt off.
Kegan
(He has become more powerful than I imagined. I can’t keep this up or I’ll end up dead.)
Kegan slammed his hands into the ground and giant glass walls box up Ximendos.
Kegan
Truth!
Inside Ximendos only saw himself in mirrors.
Ximendos
What is this?
Suddenly he saw himself get younger in the mirror directly in front of him. He was a young boy now.
Ximendos
Amusing.
Amber
My son.
He turned around to see his mother’s crystal blue eyes looking back at him.
Ximendos
Mother?
Cameron
What is the meaning of this?
Pathion
Step aside, young Cameron.
Pathion flew forward and his fist smashed into Suri’s face sending her backwards into the ocean.
Arkain
What the fuck!
Arkain lunged forward but was grabbed by Tusa.
Tusa
Easy there, yummy.
Arkain
Let go of me!
Nick
What is your problem?
Nick grabbed Tusa’s shoulder.
Pathion
Look.
They all looked towards the ocean where Suri was now walking out of it.
Arkain
Suri!
Cameron saw it first.
Cameron
We are fools.
Suri’s arms were black.
Arkain
What’s going on?
He struggled in Tusa’s arms.
Tusa
You’re so stupid.
Suri’s entire body was now black. Only her head remained. Arkain finally looked closely. His eyes widened with terror.
Arkain
No.
He trembled.
Supriya landed in front of Amros, Hayden, Roselyn, Grey, and Nicholas.
Supriya
Kegan is in danger!
Amros
What do you mean?
Nicholas
Where is Anna?
Supriya
We didn’t make it in time. He killed her moments before we arrived.
Hayden
Where is Kegan?
Supriya
He stood behind to battle Ximendos.
Amros
Those two have history.
Supriya
All the more reason for him to get out of there while he can.
Hayden
He is a magician. He’ll find his way out. He is aware that he cannot defeat Ximendos.
Amros
He shall be here soon.
Supriya
You’re right. If anyone can escape something it’s him.
Roselyn
Shall we go inside for drinks?
Nicholas
Wait!
They all turned towards Nicholas.
Nicholas
What about Anna? She’s dead.
Amros
We were told.
Nicholas
Yet none of you even flinched.
Hayden
She’s gone, Mr. Romberg. What would you have us do?
Roselyn
I don’t weep for strangers.
Grey
She was a good woman. Now she has left this life.
Nicholas
What about her corpse? Why didn’t you retrieve her corpse, Supriya?
Supriya
I wasn’t thinking about that. I doubt you would have either with Ximendos around.
Nicholas walked towards them.
Nicholas
Shouldn’t we at least go back for her body?
Hayden
I’m afraid not, Nicholas. She’s gone now. Her body is as meaningless to our cause as the rocks at your feet.
Amros
We can’t afford to waste time over such things.
Roselyn
You have to understand, Nicholas. She abandoned her post and betrayed humanity.
Nicholas
I know, but-
Grey
Let her lie were she died.
Nicholas
I just thought a proper funeral would be nice.
Amros
Many have died in the last two months without a burial. One more should not matter.
They all walked in leaving Nicholas outside to think.
Amber
You’ve grown to be such a handsome man.
Ximendos
It’s you.
Amber
It’s me, baby. I’ve missed you so much.
Ximendos walked towards the glass. He touched it softly with the tips of his fingers.
Amber
Did you miss me?
Ximendos
Every moment of this life.
Amber
That makes me happy.
Kegan stood watching the glass box.
Kegan
I think now’s my time to leave.
Akasha
What is this?
Kegan saw Akasha and Amya walking towards him with Ilias trailing behind.
Kegan
You must be his wife. It’s called Truth.
Amya
Truth?
Kegan
Yes. It is a box of mirrors that show you the truth in your heart. These mirrors are capable of bringing forth the existence of whatever truth you wish to see.
Amya
Will it hurt him?
Kegan
Perhaps emotionally. This isn’t a physical attack.
Akasha
What is he seeing?
Kegan
Only he knows. This weapon is used for a distraction.
Ilias
A distraction? So you were planning on getting away then?
Kegan
I was.
Akasha
Well don’t even think about it.
Kegan
Shit.
He said softly.
Amber
Did you fulfill all the promises you made me?
Ximendos
Yes mom. I’m the king of the world. Just like I promised you.
Amber
That’s my son. What about your brother and sister?
Ximendos
Amya is with me. After so long without saying a word to each other she joined my side.
Amber
That Amya sure was a bright one. I’m glad your big sister has your back.
Ximendos
Amros wants me dead.
Amber
He always was jealous of you. Don’t let that stop you. You have to continue on, baby. Kill them humans.
Ximendos
But momma, we don’t have to do that. They’re our slaves.
Amber
Slaves? Did they enslave me when they took me away from you?
Ximendos would have looked to the ground ashamed but he didn’t dare take his eyes off of his mother’s face.
Amber
No they did not. They took my life. They took me away from you. When did you become so soft?
Ximendos
It was my son’s idea.
Amber
Son? I have a grandson?
Ximendos
And a daughter. Two beautiful children.
Amber began to cry.
Amber
So I take it you’re married?
Ximendos
Yes.
Amber
She beautiful?
Ximendos
Just like you, mom.
She wiped her eyes. Ximendos felt his eyes begin to water.
Amber
All I missed. All I’ve missed because of the humans.
Ximendos
I’m sorry.
Amber
No you’re not. You fell off your path and lost your way.
Ximendos
But mom I didn’t want to kill Amros and Amya.
Amber
You must if that is what it takes. If they stand in your way between the end of humans and the continued existence of their wretched race then you must! You cannot show any mercy next time.
Ximendos
I didn’t because I thought we were all one. I thought my brother and sister and I were you.
Amber spit on the floor in the mirror.
Amber
Nonsense. They ceased being my children the moment they turned their backs on you.
Ximendos
Really?
Amber
Yes.
Akasha
How long will he be in there?
Ten minutes had passed since Ximendos was trapped inside.
Kegan
Until he decides to break them. As you know, glass is a fragile material. He could be in there for days for all I know.
Akasha
And if I break them myself?
Kegan
You cannot. The outside is unbreakable.
Akasha
We’ll see about that.
She raised her hand towards the box.
Kegan
I wouldn’t do that. A physical attack would only lead to your death. The black walls absorb anything that touches them. If you do not believe me, feel free to die.
Akasha lowered her hand.
Ilias
A brilliant piece of work. What is your name, stranger?
Kegan
My name is Kegan.
Ilias
I am Ilias. This is Akasha and Amya.
Kegan
Introductions are unnecessary.
Ilias
Join our side.
Kegan stepped back.
Kegan
My days of evil are over.
Ilias
I assure you evil is far from our agenda.
Kegan continued to walk backwards.
Kegan
So you say. I’ve seen differently though.
He reached the edge.
Ilias
We can give you the world.
Kegan
I don’t need the world.
Cameron
Orthak has found us.
Nick
Who the hell is he?
Pathion
A demon beyond this world.
Tusa
He scares me.
Orthak stood below them with his feet in the water.
Nick
So what are we all waiting for?
Fallen, Syn, Darby, Velis, Vesper, and Malic all appeared.
Fallen
What is going on?
Pathion
It’s Orthak.
They all looked down at the black figure standing in the water.
Velis
Oh fuck.
Fallen
How did he find us?
Pathion
He came dressed as the apple of Arkain’s eye. I sensed his energy when he appeared.
Syn
We never forgot the feel of his energy.
Pathion
Never.
Darby
His power is close to Ximendos’ level.
Fallen
He doesn’t look like he’s going to leave.
Pathion
He came for something.
Syn
Indeed. But what exactly?
They all looked at Arkain.
Arkain
Me?
Arkain looked at Orthak.
Arkain
He’s still after me?
Fallen
It would appear so.
Arkain could feel his hands shaking.
Arkain
This guy doesn’t give up.
Fallen
He’s not supposed to do that. He’s Ximendos’ monster.
Pathion
What’s the plan?
Cameron
What other plan do we have? We either fight or flee.
Darby
Fleeing would be our best option. The young ones are at risk here.
Vesper
I agree. Orthak could slip passed us and get to one of the young ones.
Pathion
Fuck that. We don’t all have to leave.
Cameron
He’s right.
Malic
I say we all just get the hell out of here.
Syn
The Syn clan will stay.
Fallen looked up at Syn.
Fallen
Are you sure?
Syn
Yes. We owe it to you, Fallen.
Fallen
Very well. The rest of you come with me.
Pathion
Finally, some action.
Darby and Vesper stepped forward.
Darby
It doesn’t matter. Orthak must be stopped.
Vesper
Let’s give it our best shot.
Tusa
He’s so ugly.
Pathion turned to Syn as the others ran off.
Pathion
Go with them.
Syn
Excuse me?
Pathion
Go with the others. You’re not needed here.
Syn
I will stay with you guys.
Vesper
No master, you will go.
Darby
We can handle it.
Syn
Are you sure?
Tusa
Yes. Master must go.
Pathion
You have a sister to meet someday.
Syn
Come back alive. All of you, my friends.
He disappeared.
Pathion
Shall we begin?
They all nodded.
Amber
You will go and destroy every human.
Ximendos
I will.
Amber
And you will do it alone if you must.
Ximendos
I won’t be alone.
Amber
Do what must be done.
Ximendos
I will, mom. I lost my way without you. Now that you’re here-
Amber
No baby, I can’t stay. I know that’s what you were thinking.
Ximendos
Why? Please don’t go again.
Amber
I have to, darling. This is temporary. Just like life, baby. It’s all temporary.
Ximendos
Not for me.
Amber
What do you mean?
Ximendos
I found out how to live forever. I’m not the only one momma. There are others too. I’ve learned from them.
Amber smiled at her son.
Amber
You did it. You really did it.
Ximendos
I did.
She raised her hand on put it on the glass. He raised his and put it over hers.
Amber
I’m proud of the man you have become and the boy you will always be. You may have grown both physically and mentally, but in that heart you carry you’re still the young boy I left behind.
Ximendos
And I always will be.
He was crying now.
Amber
Don’t you weep.
Ximendos
I can’t help it. I never thought this would happen.
Amber
It’s okay. You have made mommy proud.
Ximendos
I love you.
Amber
I love you too. I always have. Now it’s time for you to go.
Ximendos wiped his face and stood up straight.
Amber
I can’t stay any longer.
Ximendos
Will I ever see you again?
Amber
Probably not. You’ll survive though. You have things that need to be done. You’re living forever, remember?
Ximendos
Yes.
Amber
That doesn’t mean you have all the time in the world though. Kill them all.
She winked at him.
Ximendos
Goodbye, mom.
Amber
Goodbye, my son.
She disappeared. Ximendos fell to his knees.
Kegan
No matter what comes from the truth I know better than to think it will be good. Poison hearts never change. Ximendos will never change. I must go now.
The glass box burst open with a green energy blast Ximendos sent everywhere from his body.
Ilias
It’s over.
Ximendos walked towards Akasha and Amya.
Ximendos
Where is he?
Ilias
Gone.
They turned towards Ilias who was standing in front of a cloud of smoke.
Ximendos
How did he do it? How did he do that?
They walked towards Ilias.
Ilias
He left you a message.
They looked at the ground below Ilias where the smoke had just been. On the ground they saw writing in ashes. Ilias read it to them.
Ilias
A magician never reveals his secrets.

Am I first? Fuck yeah.
ReplyDeleteOhmygod! Who are the new people that are coming?????
Oh thank goddess! Fake suri isn't around them anymore.
I felt bad for Ximendos and the mirror thing :/
LOL I didn't think Ximendos had a soft spot so obvious. This is like seeing a robot cry. Amazing chapter Steven!!!! Wasn't as much action as I thought you had told me there would be, but w/e hopefully more next chapter??? Good work =)
ReplyDeleteI knew it!! I knew that wasnt the real Suri!! Now they have to fight Orthak and more will die agh!!
ReplyDeleteI liked Truth!! its crazy how it broke down such a strong person like Ximendos.
And His Mother is crazy, she still has all that hate for the humans and doesnt care that her son now rules them she just wants them dead!! wow!!
Loved the last line---A magician never reveals his secrets.---awesome!!
This chapter was ridiculously awesome.
ReplyDeleteThe first thing that comes to mind is that when Arkain tried to kiss Suri she backed away and did not kiss him. That was a bit odd to read, I though that they were really happy with Each other. Curious roses if that is explained or not.
Ximendos having such an epiphony was good to read because we got an insight on whathe is doing and why he is doing it. To think that his mom is the reason behind it is amazing, there is a reason and not happening just for fun.
And what Amber sai that nothing is forever but temporary is so true.
I'm wondering what is going ro happen in the next chapter with Kegan and everybody that he comes into contact with.
Could he possibly come into contact with Arkain and do the truth thing on him and the reader can get a better and deeper insight on Arkain.
This chapter is just awesome and I am glad that I am a helping in this journey that I cannot wait to see where it goes. I can't wait for the motion picture and the novel that will come out from this. Keep doing great things and don't stop Steven.
Amazing. Amazing. Amazing.
ReplyDeleteYour idea of magicians fascinate me greatly.
I love this idea of 'Truth' I wish our magicians here could do that.
I'm really pleased to see that it didn't turn into Orthak kills everyone. We're fucked kind of thing and Arkain doesn't do anything EXTREMELY stupid to save his girlfriend. hahaha. ;)
Hopefully though, the Syn Clan will still be complete after Orthak's challenge.
STILL SO HAPPY IAN IS ALIVE. yeaaaah life!
RIP Anna though, her fault. Tsk tsk.
Mr. Prez hopefully will see how this situation will make him really have to adjust and see some things aren't possible anymore.
Ximendos was my favorite here, that is all.
I can't wait for the next one!
sorry for the shortish review, i'm like.. overwhelmed with all of the things I need to work on right now.
YEAAAH ARKAIN. let's get to 60 soon!
;D
damn it ....new chapter soon. great chapter though. lol at nick "now thats a woman" . I cant wait to see what happens next. it shall be good :D
ReplyDeletei feel bad foe Ximendos. all he has ever wanted was to make his mom proud. i am glad he got to see her. even if it wasnt true cuz it was a distraction or whatever. it was so sadddd.
ReplyDeletei had forgotten that that was not suri -_- effing tits. i was so mad!
Syn clan without Syn versus Orthak, I'm pretty sure they can take him down, although they won't due to this being very long -_-
ReplyDeleteWell great chapter. Ximendos is gay as usual. I like Kegan's personality and I want to know more about him =)
AMAZING Keagan is now my favorite new character hahaha. Now I want to see the Syn clan minus Syn fight Orthak.. This oughta be amazing.
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ReplyDeleteOnce again the details that you add to the characters like the wings of kegan and supriya are just so cool. The way the fake suri avoids kissing arkain or how Cameron bursts into flames from triggered emotion. Or “a magician never reveals his secret.” Small details like this matter to me.
Storyline
I was so curious and still am to know about the Triple K Brothers and Kegan’s history and how he and ximendos know each other. You always know how to set up a story. You leave us wanting more knowledge and u set it up as…we now know of the other two brothers but NOW we want to KNOW them.
But he trained them? MAGICIANS?? HA! Too good.
Fake Suri has learned the plans. Can you say effed up move in general? I wanted to kill you but what is there to say. In a war they have spies and enemies and this is a war that’s about to go down. <3
*sighs* Why is Emmylou and them still going to the Empire? I will never know. Ximendos has dragon’s flying out of swords and we got a magician on our hands and yea…we have Emmylou… >.> how tragic
I suppose I should commend her for her determination.
Now let’s continue
Fights? JEA!!
First Fight
X-man versus Magic K LOL
The flames of the dragon’s breath (kegan’s) and real dragon’s breath and green energy balls; I just want to see it all in action you know.
Now this part is something profound. The glass boxed lined with mirrors; Truth. I must say I found that to be ingenious. I loved it. Bringing back is mother. It makes me wonder if he created her in his head or summoned her from the afterlife. I mean I have so many questions but that’s what makes it so good. To leave me with questions, but it doesn’t bother me if you don’t answer them. Sometimes its good to leave it to the reader.
Second Battle…to be continued….
Syn Clan Minions VS DARKNESS itself
“We are fools.” I seriously died when Cameron said it. It could not be helped. Suri popping up all of a sudden? They should have seen it sooner. Thank god for the syn clan though. I’m so on to 56 right now. I must comment on the EPIC battle I know that is about to take place. To be continued…in the next comment.
and last but not least the title of this chapter makes me smile. It reminded me of lyrics from an AFI song called The Leaving Song. The words are:
You...walked away, heard them say
"Poisoned hearts will never change." Walk away again...
<3 <3 <3
oh my fucking god!! plz plz pleeeaaaase put me in the TRUTH !! ahah i would love to see what would come up.. overall impressive chapter! im soo happy more and more action ALWAYS seems to follow up on every new chapter! i love the idea of the magician! iwonder if they are going to find Kegan again.. my brain is kinda racy right now and i dont even know what to say. it sucks that they kinda spilled the beans to orthak when he was suri /: do they have to make a new plan? talk about ximendos HAVING somewhat of a heart though, especially for his mom.. maybe that can be a key point to something later on in the story! i cant wait to read more! :D
ReplyDeleteXimendos is such an asshole! Lol kind of funny….. I think I am going to enjoy Kegans and Ximendos fight!
ReplyDeleteOh wow, I wonder what it’s going to take to notice that’s not Suri!!!!!! And poor Nick both girls are taken….
It’s really nice to see the real Suri and Ian talk, I’m so happy he is alive <3
Oh my gosh! Did Kegen just do that!? Can Ximendos really see his mom?
I wish I could see Arkains face when Suri was punched, they found her out!
Wow that truth box is an amazing thing you conjured up! It seems like talking to his mom is a bad thing tho, would his real mom say such things? Hmmmmm
“A magician never reveals his secrets”…..EPIC!!!!!!!!!
I really liked Kegan's trick. I was also really starting to like Ximendos again, but now his mom mindfucked him and he might become crazier. :(
ReplyDeleteRight now, he is just at the right level of crazy. I hope what Ilias has planned is something good to stop his father, but that might be wishing too much - I really hope that that is not the case.
I wonder how Kegan pulled off his trick though, because simple magic can't explain what is in a person's heart. Is it real magic, or simple trickery?
I tthought it was funny that he was kind of let go and not killed.