Friday, August 13, 2010

Chapter Fifty-Nine: Get On My Level

The two giant wolves began to try licking the face of Ximendos while they sat at a round table together.

Kade

They still like you. They rarely like anyone.

Ximendos petted them.

Ximendos

There names are what again?

Kade

Mine is Aries. He’s the black one.

Kassle

And mine is Virgo. Obviously he’s the white one.

Ximendos

They are enormous.

Kade

We feed them right.

Kassle

They are beautiful creatures.

Ximendos took a drink from the cup in his hand and then lowered it.

Ximendos

I am very grateful for your union with my empire.

Kassle

Don’t mention it.

Kade

We’ve been really bored for the past hundred years without you. It’s about time we get to have some fun.

Kassle

I hope to meet more beautiful people. Are there more, Ximendos?

Ximendos

Yes there are. You will love my children.

Kassle

So you had children with that beautiful woman? How marvelous.

Kade

What are their names?

Ximendos

Ilias and Iris. They are twins.

Kassle

I am eager to meet them. Two rights do make a right.

Kade laughed.

Kade

And if they are ugly, brother? What then?

Kassle

I regret to say I might have to kill myself. Never put up my hopes of beauty. The thought of being disappointed is devastating.

Ximendos

What did you think of me when you first saw me all those years ago?

Kassle’s smile grew wide.

Kade

He was in love with you! Don’t you remember?

Kassle

I’m not one to deny. The humans would call me Bisexual. I’m not very fond of the name. I’m attracted to beauty whether female or male. I care little for the sex. Beauty is all that matters. You are still the most beautiful person I know Ximendos.

Ximendos

I am pleased to here it. I am glad out of the Christ family you two are the ones coming back with me. I always liked you two the best.

Kade

No need to rub us the right way. We’re long time friends. The least we could do is help.

Kassle

The council took the vote and now we will do our best to protect you.

Ximendos

Very well. We shall leave when the sun goes down.

Kade

In that case.

A bottle formed in front of Kade on the table.

Kassle

Isn’t it a little early to be drinking? No class at all.

Kade

What part of drinking involves class?

Ximendos

He has a point. I haven’t had vodka in years.

Three small cups appeared and Kade poured vodka into them.

Kassle

Unlike you, I have class.

Kade

Whatever.

Kade took both of the shots.

Ximendos

To our union.

Ximendos took his.

Suri jumped forward but was stopped in midair.

Iris

You aren’t serious, are you?

Bullets hit the shield of Iris’s body and she fell to the ground and they began to push her back.

Iris

(These damn large bullets)

She lifted her hands and suddenly a wall of energy appeared.

Conor

It’s not working! Why is it not working?

Conor and Emmylou could not believe her eyes.

Elijah

Iris is a protector. She is capable of creating shields at will.

Suri planted her hand on Iris’s face and sent her flying through the nearest wall.

Suri

Get up.

Iris climbed out of the rubble.

Suri

Your ultimate shield technique. I’m impressed.

Iris

I’m glad you like it. Now I’m going to kill that rogue Gears unit. You wait right here.

She began to walk towards Elijah’s unit.

Elijah

Here she comes.

Suri jumped at her but was caught in the air by Iris’s energy.

Iris

I said hold on.

Kota and Bonka dropped behind iris and fired rockets at her. She blast sent Iris and Suri both flying.

Conor

Kill her! Kill her! Kill her!

Ilias

Are you sure you have what it takes to kill me?

Merdos

I’m almost sure. Even if somehow I die here, I’m fine with that.

Ilias

Death can be so persuasive when you have something to get done.

Merdos’s hands glowed light blue. He took a step forward.

Ilias

I wonder if I’m going to kill you or take you prisoner.

Merdos

I’d prefer the latter.

Merdos appeared next to Ilias with his hand raised to strike.

Ilias

(He’s faster than I am.)

Ilias ducked and shot forward. He jumped onto the left wall and jumped then to the sky.

Ilias

Here goes.

He moved his hand forward and a giant wave of energy shot out of it to the ground completely obliterating the area he was just in. He landed outside of the smoking area.

Merdos

Gotcha.

Merdos slashed for Ilias’s head barely giving him time to duck. Ilias kicked his legs out from under him and punched him in the stomach sending him into the smoke.

Ilias

Child’s play.

Merdos

Oh really?

Merdos hit Ilias straight in the face.

Merdos

Damn!

His hand smashed on the face of Ilias.

Ilias

Expecting something?

Ilias gracefully moved to attack. His open palm hit Merdos in the face. His other hand his neck. Then he punched him in the ribs and then connected his foot to his face. Merdos fell back onto the floor.

Ilias

You know, normally I don’t like playing coy. You were never any threat to me. To perhaps the others you would, but not to me. I have my sister’s ultimate shield to protect me. Even if I didn’t, I wouldn’t be so generous in letting you get so close to me.

Merdos stood up.

Merdos

You’re quite lucky.

Ilias

Not luck. No, just prepared.

Merdos spat blood onto the floor.

Merdos

It’s not in our database that you are trained for physical combat.

Ilias

Not many are aware. My hand to hand combat is a surprise I like to employ on my opponents. Our main throne room is protected. How unfortunate for you.

Ilias lifted his arms up with his palms facing Merdos.

Merdos

What does that have to do with-

Ilias

Expand!

It was as if a giant invisible wall flew forward taking Merdos and the structure behind him with it.

Kegan stood before Amros, Hayden, Supriya, Roselyn, and Grey.

Amros

This complicates things further.

Hayden

Do you think your family would work for Ximendos?

Kegan

If I know them as I do, they’d work with him.

Supriya

What business do they have with this world? I can’t imagine Azusa getting involved.

Roselyn

What could she have to gain? Perhaps a seat of power in the empire?

Kegan

I doubt it. The Christ Kingdom is fine on its own. Plus, they have enough power to stand up to Ximendos and his minions. Even us and New order together with Ximendos.

Grey

Are these people really that powerful?

Kegan

I’d put us on the level of Amros and Hayden.

Grey

I see. So the fight gets tougher. Big deal.

Roselyn

Honey, you don’t understand.

Grey

I think I do. We fight. What more is there to it? The Empire not only has its princes and princesses, it also has this Syn Clan and family of magic users? The odds are stacked against us. The likelihood of death is high. So be it. We fight. We live, we die. Either way, we have to stay on course.

Amros

Wise words, young Grey Kasper. We will. We can’ let this hold us back.

Hayden

We should be able to hold our own against them.
Kegan

I don’t doubt our ability to do so.

Supriya

The Christ family is unpredictable. Even their entrance into this is. Either way, we’ll fight.

Masato entered the room.

Masato

My lords, I bear terrible news.

Amros

Speak.

Masato

The Empire has captured Suri. The children we went to recover forced Merdos to take them to the Empire’s palace.

Masato fell to his knees.

Roselyn

What is wrong?

Roselyn rushed to his side.

Masato

Merdos is in trouble too.

He spat blood onto the ground.

Iris walked towards the Gears units. They began to fire bullets at her. She made a shield to block them as she walked forward.

Kota

She is stopping them like nothing.

Bonka

Just keep on her.

Suri screamed through the air and attacked Iris. Each swing missed.

Iris

(Speed and power? If I were a little slower she might be able to hit me.)

Suri

(This isn’t working).

Kota’s unit blew up. Iris and Suri and the others turned to see. Kota landed on the shoulder of Bonka’s gears unit.

Nicholas

You may come in.

Nicholas said to the person knocking at his door. Luciana walked in.

Luciana

I’m sorry for bothering you so early in the morning. I am Luciana Gunner. I am a general in the army we have here.

Nicholas

Very nice to meet you, Luciana. Titles aren’t important here.

Luciana

I was wondering if you knew where Secretary of Defense Mrs. Molly was.

Nicholas paused for a second after hearing her name.

Nicholas

I’m afraid I have bad news.

He took in a deep breath.

Nicholas

Anna Molly is dead.

Luciana

How did this happen?

Nicholas

The Empire got her. She left on a secret mission on her own with a small fleet of Gears. She was killed personally by Ximendos. The leader of the empire.

Luciana covered her mouth in shock.

Nicholas

I will be speaking to everyone here tomorrow. I have a speech ready and all.

Luciana

I can’t believe it.

She walked towards the door.

Luciana

All is not lost. We still have you.

She left the room.

Nicholas

They still have me.

Iris crushed Suri bit her left thumb and placed it right below her left hand’s middle finger. She ran the blood down to her wrist.

Suri

You have the ultimate shield. I have the ultimate attack. Release!

She smacked her hands together. She began to glow white.

Iris

What is this?

Suri flew forward without Iris even noticing and she bashed Iris with her side sending Iris flying.

Elijah

You all must get out and find cover. Elijah opened the passenger compartment and they exited.

Kota

Hey kids.

Kota landed next to them.

Kota

Get behind those pillars over there.

They began to run towards them.

Kota

What do we do now?

Bonka

We cover Suri.

Elijah

There’s nothing else we can do.

Iris stood up slowly.

Iris

Congratulations. That’s the hardest anyone has ever hit me. For a second it honestly felt as if my shield was going to collapse.

Suri

Oh but it will. The power I released is a special one. It makes me unstoppable. I’m sure with a few more hits you will lose your shield. I have a question. Where’s Arkain?

Iris laughed.

Iris

Arkain? That boy hasn’t been here for quite some time.

Suri

Liar!

Iris

I only speak the truth. Cameron stole him away from us.

Suri

Cameron is one of you guys.

Iris

Was one of us. Not anymore.

Suri

What do you mean?

Iris

Cameron, former prince of the Empire, was sentenced to die. He escaped. He took Arkain with him.

Suri

I don’t believe you.

Iris

Why would I lie? Take this place apart, you won’t find him here.

Suri

If that’s true…

It hit her. Her leaving the base was pointless.

Suri

Still. I doubt you’ll let me leave alive.

Iris

You’re correct. Shall we continue?

Suri

Yes.

Suri flew forward and grabbed Iris by the wrist. She began to try and crush it.

Suri

How much longer?

Iris

You won’t break me.

Suri bashed her head into Iris’s head. She would have flown backwards but Suri held her by the wrist and pulled her back. She grabbed her by the neck and slammed her into the floor.

Iris

You won’t win.

Iris tried to use a wall of energy but it broke on Suri’s body.

Suri

I told you that I can’t be moved by your power.

Suri began to punch the shield blocking the face of Iris.

Merdos lied on the ground.

Merdos

(Damn. What power. I may have overestimated myself.)

Ilias

Silly assassin.

Ilias landed above Merdos’s head.

Ilias

You really thought you had a chance.

Ilias grabbed him by the neck and lifted him up.

Ilias

Now die.

Ilias blasted towards his check with a sharp energy blast. Merdos kicked off Ilias and the blast hit him on his left side above his hip. It took out of chunk of his skin. He fell to the ground on his knees and held his side.

Ilias

Get on my level.

Ilias kicked his face and Merdos fell backwards.

Nick

Well good morning to you.

Arkain

Morning.

Cameron

Sleep well?

Nick

As well as I could on the ground.

Arkain

You better get use to it.

Nick

I will when I get back.

Cameron

Get back?

Nick

I have to return to the White Coats.

Arkain

Why’s that? You’re one of us.

Nick

I know. I just promised my mom I’d be back. I also have a close friend there I haven’t spoken to since the world changed. If you don’t mind, I’d like to mend things with him. He’s my best friend. Well, human one.

Cameron

Who is your mother?

Nick

Roselyn.

Arkain

The red head?

Cameron

I know the woman. She almost killed me once. Luckily for her I had no more energy at the time.

Nick

Well yeah, I have to see her. Before I came here it was my first time seeing her in almost 4 years. I promised her I’d be back. I don’t break promises. Just like, I promise now, I’ll never leave you guys. New Order until the end.

Cameron

I’ll keep you to it.

Arkain

When will you be back?

Nick

Probably tomorrow. You still need to use the blue ball to contact Amros. They’re planning on attacking tomorrow.

Cameron felt a sudden urge of joy.

Cameron

That’s excellent. That’s when we were planning on attacking.

Arkain

So it’s all settled then. We’ll contact him once you leave.

Nick

I’ll be back in no time. Hell, we might even meet at the Empire’s palace.

Arkain

Just make sure you make it in time. We might need your help.

Cameron

I hope you prove your worth in battle, Nick.

Nick

I will. Aw man, sad sauce. I don’t want to leave you guys.

Arkain

The quicker you go, the faster you’ll be back.

His entire lower half began to turn into green leaves.

Nick

Later gator.

Iris formed her sword in her hand. It was a small white blade. She aimed it for Suri’s face and Suri jumped back.

Suri

That’s your last resort?

Iris winked.

Iris

Looks like you didn’t break me.

Elijah and Bonka fired at Iris sending her flying again.

Suri

Thanks guys!

Emmylou saw him. She has his little dirty face.

Emmylou

Ian?

She said softly. She couldn’t believe her eyes.

Conor

What?

Emmylou walked towards him without even notifying Conor who was watching the battle.
Emmylou

Not Ian. Ian’s dead.

Emmylou thought of the fake Suri.

Emmylou

You’re the black monster.

Emmylou began to raise her gun. She raised it so that she was aiming at the back of Ian’s head.

Emmylou

You’re not Ian!



Syn held Fallen in his arms while petting his head.

Syn

So she appeared?

Vesper

Yes. She also wanted us to deliver a message.

Fallen

What is the message?

Pathion

He doesn’t need to hear it! It’s a waste of time.

Darby

Quiet, Pathion. We’ve heard enough of you.

Pathion stood silent.

Syn

Out with it.

Vesper

She said she loves you.

Munro

Can we trust him fully, brother?

Germ

I believe so.

Germ and Munro stood before Azusa and Keir who were sitting on the throne.

Azusa

This is far more interesting than I could have ever imagined.

Munro

Why is that?

Azusa

Ximendos is back! Also, think about all the gifts mommy will get when this is all said and done.

Keir

My dear, you are so materialistic.

Azusa

Materialistic in a materialistic world. Who could blame me?

She kissed Keir on the nose.

Germ

If Ximendos does not follow through with the deal one of us will have to kill him.

Munro

He is a formable opponent to us all.

Azusa

Who would do it?

Keir

Kassle and Kade would.

Germ

No.

Keir

You can’t expect your mother to fight him.

Germ

Munro and I will.

Munro smiled.

Munro

I like the sound of that.

Germ

Munro, get your coat.

Munro

Where are we off to?

Germ

We are going window shopping.

Munro

Very well. We shall be back soon, mother.

Azusa

Go, go. Just don’t be late for dinner.

They exited the room.

Munro

You spoke in code. In front of mother.

Germ

I did. I’d prefer if she were to not find out our plans.

Munro

I don’t think she’d stop us.

Germ

No, she’d want them for herself.

Munro

You are correct. If we’re going to do this, they are ours.

Germ

My thoughts exactly. The Sky Walkers are ours, brother.

Suri grabbed Emmy’s gun and lowered it between the two of them so Ian could not see it.

Suri

Emmylou, that’s really him.

Emmylou

Don’t lie to me, Suri.

Suri

I’m not.

Ian

Emmy!

Ian hugged Emmylou’s waist the hardest he has ever hugged her.

Emmylou

Ian! You’re alive.

She hugged him. Conor ran over.

Conor

Ian! You’re alive!

He hugged Ian too.

Suri

I have to get back.

Elijah and Bonka’s Gears blew up. They landed beside Suri.

Suri

It’s time to end this, Iris.

Iris

It is.

Iris flew forward as Suri did the same. She ducked aiming for the others. She slashed Elijah’s chest and stabbed Bonka through the shoulder. They fell to the ground.

Kota

Bitch!

Kota landed in front of her. He had two long blades in his hands. He swung them both down on her head and scattered into pieces on her shield.

Iris

Fool.

She stabbed him through the rib.

Suri

Damn you!

Suri’s tried to punch her but Iris ducked and aimed her blade for Suri’s face. Suri didn’t flinch.

Iris

Got you.

Iris jumped back. Suri’s cheek was bleeding.

Suri

How?

She said shocked.

Iris

My blade is no ordinary blade. It is my dragon blade. It is my Nya. The only thing that can stop a blade like this is another one or an Eagles sword. Not even your unstoppable attack can protect you from it.

Suri fell to her knees.

Iris

Did I mention the blade on its own posses a paralyzing liquid? Once you’re cut, you can no longer move. Looks like I got you instead.

Ilias stood over Merdos. Merdos looked up at him with his eyes barely open.

Ilias

I must commend you for even attempting to kill me. Though it was futile from the beginning, it is not something all have the audacity to do. Bravo, Merdos of the White Coats.

Merdos

Go fuck yourself, kid.

Ilias laughed softly.

Ilias

A very poor choice of last words. Oh well.

He raised his hand to deliver the death blow.

Masato

I’m ready, Hayden.

Hayden

It took you long enough.

Masato

I’m sorry. Merdos has taken much damage, therefore transferring it to me also. You know our bodies are connected.

Amros

Go. Bring them back.

Hayden

It will be done. Let’s go, Roselyn and Grey.

They each approached Masato and placed a hand on his shoulder.

Ilias

Done.

Gold Chains shot from the body of Merdos. They wrapped themselves around Ilias.

Ilias

A last ditch attack? It won’t save you-

Grey

Yes it will.

Grey rose from the body of Merdos. Two black figures flashed through the air in the same direction passed Ilias.

Ilias

Do you think you can hold me?

Grey

Oh I do. Those chains are unbreakable.

He smiled at Ilias.

Grey

Didn’t think you’d get caught so easily, did you?

Grey lifted Merdos on his shoulders.

Grey

We’ll be seeing you, kid.

He ran in the direction the others went.

Suri could not move.

Iris

Goodbye, Suri.

Iris flew forward with her blade raised to stab in the chest of Suri.

A black figure appeared between them. The black figure held Iris by the wrist keeping the blade pointing up.

Iris

You.

Hayden

You will not kill my daughter.

General Gunner

What is going on out here?

Emmylou, Conor, and Ian turned around to see General Gunner followed by two soldiers standing behind them.

Emmylou

Daddy.

Conor

No!

General Gunner shot at Emmylou with his hand gun. Conor took the bullet. He fell to the ground in front of her.

General Gunner

Heroic, but pointless.

Emmylou

Please don’t, dad.

An arrow hit him in the hand right after he pulled the trigger. He dropped his gun while two arrows hit the two soldiers behind him. He shot Emmylou in the chest. Emmylou fell back next to Ian. Ian screamed hysterically.

15 comments:

  1. A FUCKING CLIFFHANGER.
    OH MY GOD.
    OH MY GOD.

    YOU BETTER WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER ASAP.

    SO MUCH ACTION IN THIS CHAPTER.
    GOTTA LOVE IT.
    I'M ON TEAM SURI.
    FOR NOW. ;)

    Emmylou's dad went psycho, most likely under the control of the solace empire.
    FUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCK.

    Nice little touch there though, didn't see it coming?

    Did I mention that I want to see the magician family visually?
    I want beautiful. :)

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  2. WTF!! Im like screaming and gasping!! Whats going on now!!

    Ok lots of fighting, crazy fighting, good detail!!

    The twins are so hard to kill their so strong and powerful!!..haha and i like how they all talk when there fighting its cool!!

    OMG i thought Emmylou was gonna kill Ian yoah!!I had my hand over my mouth!! lol

    And whats up with the dad hes crazy?!

    I dont want anyone to die lol cant they all live!! <3

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  3. Oh man best chapter in the history of chapter lol. I'm not gonna lie I creamed myself so many times i could... nvm not going there. Anyways yeah amazing chapter man, like amazing is an understatement. All the fights going on at the same time is crazy its like the whole story is erupting in one huge explosion and I'm freaking loving every second of it!!!!

    P.S. GET ON MY LEVEL!!!!!!!!!!!! Best line ever =P

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  4. I love the title of this chapter, Get On My Level. I mean how could you not, right?

    I love how everything was made to look like it was falling apart and how everyone was just gonna die. Like i'm all like oh god no especially since everyone seems to be dying.

    Nick is fucking awesome. I like the kidd more and more everytime you write him in.

    Conor is starting to get less on my nerves.

    This chapter was literally amazing.

    Ohmygod! When Ems pointed the gun at Ian, I thought I was going to die.

    Kassle totally intrigues me :]
    I love the "unlike you I have class" bit

    There was so much going on in this chapter, so many surprises, i'm seriously like all over the place right now.

    I loved it, it was really good as always.

    I agree that "Get on my level" was the best line ever. lol

    I hate that this chapter left me hanging. I feel as though I was like "high five" and then the person just walked away. Not nice.

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  5. There was so much happening through this chapter that I am at a loss for words, once again. Thanks for that haha.
    Nick, Nick, Nick when I begin to allow you to get into my favorite characters, maybe once I see a great fight that you are involved in, then maybe you will be placed in there. For the mean time keep doing your thing and then well talk haha.
    Kassle is intriguing me a bit because I do not know what came out at any given time. It appears there is a lot more to see and know than what we have read so far. Really, really curious to see how Kassle flourishes in the upcoming chapters and all.
    Ima just skip to the ending because there is so much happening that I will be here for cool minute trying to address every single point, thanks for that Morales haha.
    This cliffhanger that you have once again left us with does not sit well with me because I want to know NOW what happens not have to wait for the next chapter to know. General Gunner "Heroic but pointless" that is what is up right there. That felt so good when he said that because he is correct, there was no point to that, everything came into fruition the way that it was supposed to. Les go General Gunner!
    The only thing now is to see the reaction that Ian will have because something tells me that it will not be very pleasant for whomever is on the receiving end. There is definitely going to be some fireworks happening on the next chapter. And like a decent rapper said once, onto the next one.

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  6. Wow man, LOL. That was crazy


    I gotta say I did not like the ending at all.

    But there were amazing parts, Hayden & Grey came outta no where. God I love good guys =)

    Nice chapter!

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  7. FFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU The end.. :( I expected it I have to admit but it's still amazing. Everything is meshing together quite nicely to be honest. Although the jumping around is kinda getting to be a bit too frequent.. It's still not bad. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapters Steven so get on it!

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  8. horrible way to take Emmy out of the picture...getting killed by her own dad...sickening. A lot of drama this chapter, though in a good way :) I got to admit, I am still confused on Nick's importance to the series. Was he really important enough to introduce. With such a big ensemble, I would imagine that it's tedious keeping track of all the personality traits and trying to consolidate all the events surrounding them. I really hope you know what you are doing, as I would not dream of writing something to that scale haha

    It was exhausting reading your story at the last stretches, but overall it's been a pleasure reading up to this point, Steven! I hope to see more of your work in the future

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  9. ...................!!!!!!!!!!! Duuuuuuuuude, wtff!!! so much action happend here my mind is racing. i dont know what to think.. so many fights and deaths and almosts deaths......!!!! emmy lou's dad is controlled by them!!!!:o everyone is soo fucken shady behind everyons back, its like they all want their own plan to control the world and to control what they cannot... damn. i feel like the war has already started! fuck i cant wait to read the next chapters!!!! Excellent work Steven!! im sooooooo.... idk. fuck, speechless...

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  10. Okay so I don’t like Iris or Suri personally but their fight is kick ass. Suri’s power seems awesome.

    Ilias is cold man. <3

    The imagery is so awesome here, like the descriptive language. Nick’s lower half turning to leaves. I can see it so vividly in my head

    EMMY has lost her damn mind!! Can’t believe she almost annihilated her won brother. SMH

    That chapter was so good. The action was great.

    The different fights taking place was so engaging. The ending was outrageous though. Conor and Emmy getting it like that. I just felt so taken aback with that.

    The scene sequence change was smooth. I understood what was happening. The 3rd and 4th prince to the throne of the Christ family intrigues me. I look forward to their roles in this piece. The dialogue was also great. This piece always has so many lines I want to quote. Great job once again.

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  12. I want a giant wolf! Lol
    Kind of thought Kassle was a little bisexual, he can appreciate beauty and I like that :)
    Lol Iris stopped Suri in midair and said “ I said hold on a minute” hahahaha
    Oh no merdos!
    This fight between Suri and Iris is so awesome, good way to get Suri out!
    Oh my gosh that’s bad, Emmylou is going to kill her own brother!
    Yeah Ian and Emmylou are reunited! :) you had me scared for a moment.
    That is one awesome blade but Oh crap what is Suri going to do now?
    You can’t let Merdos die! :(
    I did not see that coming! Why did their dad shoot at them? What’s going to happen to the both of them this is so sad!!!!!!!!!!

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  13. And i'm glad you saved Suri and Merdos just in time! :D

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  14. D: Why did their dad kill them!?!??!!? It was so sad especially since he just found Emmylou and Ian again! I thought it was cool that Suri and Iris are almost equal in power. iris seems to be smarter and have better fighting technique - Good thing Haydden got there in time, or else Suri would probably be Iris food.
    As for Ilias, I wonder how he got chained up so easily. My memory is fuzzy, so I don't remember if Grey is or is not human.
    Cool chapter, looking forward to finishing the rest soon. :)

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