Wednesday, April 1, 2009

Chapter Sixteen: The Hatching Egg

Amros
The city police have her. Humans somehow always get themselves involved.
 

Hayden
We must retrieve her.

Amros
And you shall.
 
Gemma was sat down at a table in an interrogation room. A cup of water sat on the table along with a pen and a folder filled with papers. 
Officer 1
Let’s get started.


Nicholas Romberg sat in his office and the phone rang.
Nicholas
I knew it was a matter-
 
He was cut off.
Nicholas
I understand. Yes, Yes, alright.
 
He put his hand on his forehead.
Nicholas
You have my permission.


Gemma looked down at her knees.
Gemma
I don’t want to talk to you.

Officer 2
You’re going to have to kid, it will only help you.
 

Gemma
You can’t help me.


Amya hung up the phone on Nicholas. She stood in a dark room alone. She grabbed the phone and dialed again.
Amya
It has been cleared, Elijah. You may proceed. I want the girl alive.


The officers sat down at the table in front of Gemma.
Officer 1
There are a lot of people missing, and you might be able to help us.

Gemma
They're not missing.
 
Officer 2
What do you mean?

Gemma
They're dead.

I want blood. 
Gemma
You will have it.

Officer 1
We will have what? Are you willing to cooperate?

I want their blood. 
Gemma
I don’t care.

Officer 1
So you will work with us?

Feed me Gemma, I grow hungry.
Gemma
Do as you please.

As the routine day of the police force continued without disturbance, Hayden slipped into the highest floor.
Hayden
She’d be on the lower levels. I’m on level six, she is in the basement.

He moved to the door. 
Gemma
Are you ready to die like the ones you search for?
 

Officer 2
Are you threatening us?

Gemma
No, I am asking you a question sir.
 
A helicopter hovered above the building high in the sky. Five figures dressed in black with masks stood ready to jump. 
Elijah
The girl is the priority, the humans are not. No casualties, just wound if you must.
 
The group agreed.
Elijah
Prepare to land.
 
Hayden opened the door and almost ran into an officer. As the officer reached for his gun Hayden landed his hand softly into his neck and the man fell unconscious on the floor. 
Hayden
This is going to be annoying.
 
Across the hall, two officers already had their guns pulled out on him. 
Hayden
Guns down humans and you shall walk away unharmed.

Officer 2 stood up. 
Officer 2
She’s not going to help us, she’s caught in her own fantasy world. The little girl has issues, we should call in a psychologist or something.

Almost, almost ready.
The windows burst in front of Hayden and black figures landed in the hall in front of him. He took this as an opportunity to find Gemma. The officers while covering their faces from glass were shot in the legs and fell to the floor.
Elijah
Good job. Kota, you have the first floor.

Kota
Right.
 
Elijah
Bonka, you have the third.
 
Bonka
On it.

Elijah
I have second. The child will be in those areas, stay alert.
 
The five figures ran apart. The police department was now in chaos as officers were called back in and others were forming together to see what they were facing. 
Intercom
All officers please report to the first level, all available officers to the first level.
 

Kota
That helps a lot.

He laughed in his mask. 
Hayden
Need to get to the first floor. Got it.

He slammed his hand into the ground below him and he fell through to the second level.
Hayden
One more.

The officers gathered in the main room of the building in front of the door that led to the basement level.
Officer 3
Alright, everyone hold. We’ve gotten a tip that they're after the girl we have down stairs. Once they get into this hall, they’ll see their attempt to kidnap her is useless.

Kota
Useless?
 
A small dart hit the man in the neck and he fell to the ground. Guns went off in all directions. Kota was pinned down across the room.
Kota
I’ve found the nest. Now let’s get that egg. First floor now. Proceed?
 
Elijah ran down the 3rd floor running into Bonka.
Elijah
No, we’re on our way. Do not hurt anyone.
 

Bonka
You’re never fun, Eli.

He lowered his wrist.
Elijah
Lady Amya said no casualties.

Gemma looked up. 
Gemma
They are more coming.
 
Officer 1 grabbed his radio. 
Officer 1
All under control?

Now.
A thick Darkness rose behind Gemma.
Officer 1
What the fuck?
It wrapped itself around him and he was gone. Gemma stood up.

Hayden fell through the ceiling and into the middle of the large room. The officers all pointed at him in utter horror. 
Kota
Aw shit!
Officers
Freeze!

Hayden
Drop your weapons and move.

Officer
We said freeze.
 
Hayden began to walk in their direction. The room began to shake. Every officer looked towards the door behind them. The door began to turn black. Then it was gone. The entire area behind them was sheer darkness. Suddenly black cords shot forward and pulled officers in to their deaths. 
Hayden
Goodbye.

Kota
Aw shit!

From outside the entire building was being consumed by some black force.
Free me, let me kill those who killed him.
Arkain opened his eyes.

33 comments:

  1. Woohoo! Awesome job as always :]
    So this is arkain's new home?? lol
    Let me know of the next chapter :]]]
    <33

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  2. WOW!
    Really good chapter right here.
    I like how Hayden is not waiting for them to let Gemma out, he goes in with authority and determination.
    This evil voice inside Gemma intrigues me because I want to know what it is capable of doing at full strength.
    Really curious to know why Arkain opened his eyes?
    Thats a new question that is in my mind now.
    Really good chapter over all.

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  3. I'm kind of confused with what's going on. Were the black figures helping Hayden? I TOLD YOU ARKAIN WAS ALIVE!!!! haha. Well, at least I hope so?

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  4. OMG HE'S NOT DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!! Phew now I can sleep at night haha. Gemma is scaring meeeeeeeeee. Well the voice inside her is at least. Ever see Jekyll and Hyde? Gemma reminds me of Jekyll/Hyde.

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  5. Oh yeah bby!
    Arkain is back! (I think XD)
    maybe he's inside of her or something like that? like on her thoughts =S i have no idea XD i can't wait for that next chapter
    Gemma is one interesting character =)
    The inside voice is very mysterious and obviously thirsty.
    This is the most amazing chapter so far XD
    And I had thought I had a favorite chapter back there. Great work!

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  6. Awesome chapter.
    Amazing as usual.
    Can't wait for the next chapter!

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  7. Wooooooh thats was
    pretty tiight :D

    & whaat Arkian isnt
    deaaaaaaaad?!

    I knew it!

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  8. dude!!!!!!!

    the last line, and then arkain opened his eyes.

    i got chills!!!!!!!

    that was dope. too dope. good job.

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  9. i really like this chapter
    so Arkain isnt dead?i got confused lolz

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  10. *cue dramatic music please* ARKAIN'S ALIVE. But where is he? And more importantly, what happened to Suri?? ANSWER ME. :p

    Ok so I must admit, I was a little confused as to whether the guys in black are helping Hayden rescue Gemma or...? I think i might have to read this one over again. Everything else about this scene was great. You could feel the energy and the urgency and we finally got to see a bit of Hayden's powers!

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  11. yay! i knew he was alive :)

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  12. who are these black figures?
    and go hayden. boo krysin. or gemma. idk. haha.
    and yessss. arkain!

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  13. I think hayden is hardcore kinda like Itachi.

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  14. I knew arkain wasn't dead I mean come on it's the name of the book. I'm interested to see how these people connected to Amya are going to play out in the whole situation. The evil voice inside her head I like it because it has the opposite view of her.

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  15. Ooooh I love the whole "chase" aspect of this chapter. As for Arkain, I was waiting to see when he'd reappear. :) He's the protagonist!

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  16. i'm speechless literally this was my response


    ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    Think of the girls from Legally Blonde screaming

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  17. I too am confused by the ppl in black. Rereading it again, they were sent by Amya with the President's permission? Is this a good thing or bad thing?

    It was obvious Arkain was still alive, he is our hero afterall.

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  18. yea, didn't understand the people in black text either. make sure you watch the "they're" "their" and "there". i would like to see arkain's new incarnation.

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  19. "No, I am asking you a question sir." oh i just love gemma.
    i knew arkain wasn't dead!!!!!

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  20. Arkain has returned!!!! :D I really like how intense this chapter is. And you leave the reader hanging and wanting more like always! Gemma intrigues me so much, she has so many layers to her character and her inner voice is both frightening and relatable. Everyone has had their "conscience" tell them to do the exact opposite of what they want to do and who they want to be sometimes. So that part of her character seems to be an extreme version of those random feelings every person has at times but doesnt want to be there. Love this chapter and I can't wait for Arkain to come back into the story.

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  21. i like how the imagery used here was not only normal anime style but it kinda gave me like a tactical swat. idk if that makes sense to you but its not only hand to hand or swords i guess.

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  22. All this for Gemma wow they really need her huh..
    Hes Alive!!

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  23. wait wtf im confused.. Where is Arkain????
    who is Elijah? where did he come from? and why
    arent there any cheese on these fucken nachos!?

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  24. hahaha i knew arkain couldnt be dead!!

    good chapter! i cant wait to see gemma just go all out and unleash her full power

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  25. Ahhhhhhhh can u say great chapter

    The race was on to get gemma
    But lil do they kno that they better hope to out run something more intense

    I love the scene
    I cud sense the utter chaos and the frenzy in the police department

    Hayden is badass

    How he just punches to get to the level below him

    And arkaaaiiin awakens

    Great chapter im loving the chase and action

    u pace it perfectly

    :)

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  26. I want to know whether Arkain is inside Gemma or whether he is alive and somewhere else. I suspect it is the first one.

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  27. Woo battle scene! I'm glad we get to see Arkain at the end, I was worried. And I'm worried about Gemma's "monster" dealio.

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  28. I'm so confused right now. What the-

    Kota/Elijah/and the other one are 3 out of 5 that are not humans with special powers ready to get Gemma to Amya. But I have no idea what the hell was going on. This is by far the most confusing chapter so far @_@!

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  29. I am interested to see why the president wants Gemma. Hayden is a BA as always and I didnt get to see his powers but I did get to see his impressive skills. I enjoy how this chapter was done. It allowed me to create a visual of what was going on.

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  31. I could sense trouble a brewing once the were interrogating Gemma....
    It was sooooooo good who's going to get to her first! agh! But why does Amya want Gemma too? hmmmm curious very curious....anyhow you did very good on playing the scenes out I love when I can visualize the story and I have been doing this all along.
    Arkain opens his eyes! I knew it....

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  32. Basically what we have here is a search party looking for the same person with different circumstances. The humans are no match for the "beings", since I do not know what to call them yet, and it is sad to see them engage in battle with anger and desperation, that is how people get hurt.

    Arkain opens his eyes, huh? Does this mean that his power may be teleportaion or flight? Could he and Suri have flown out from the church before it exploded in to 10,000 pieces? Questions upon questions upon confusions.

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