Sunday, March 7, 2010

Chapter Forty-Four: The Proposal

Ilias

Is there a problem, Gemma?

Gemma was looking down. Ilias let go of her hand.

Ilias

If I am moving to fast, I do apologize.

She looked up at him.

Gemma

No, it’s okay.

Ilias sat on the bed across from her.

Ilias

In such chaotic times, normal acting would seem odd. Wouldn’t you agree?

Gemma

Yes.

She smiled.

Ilias

Gemma, you have a lot on your mind. More than ever, if I am correct. Even considering you were once thinking for two.

She almost laughed.

Gemma

I’d be lying if I said I didn’t. But then again, at what point is the mind ever clear?

Ilias

A solid point, Gemma. Are you happy with what I did for you?

Gemma

More than happy. I don’t know how I can repay you.

Ilias

You already did.

He smiled. Gemma wished she could see his face.

Ilias

I won’t be asking anything of you anymore, after this one thing.

Gemma knew where he was sitting and she tried to look him directly in the face.

Gemma

And what would that be?

Ilias

Well, I told you to let go of Arkain and hold onto me. That would be most rewarding on your part.

He stood up.

Ilias

I’ll get to that later. I almost lost myself in words I almost let the cat out of the bag.

Gemma

I like cats.

Ilias smiled.

Ilias

It still must remain in the bag until after we’re done.

Gemma’s smile went away.

Ilias

I may be wrong, but I’m under the impression that you have questions for me. Questions I think I can answer, if you’ll allow me to have them. Of course, that is entirely up to you.

Gemma looked up at the ceiling, wondering if it is black or white.

Gemma

I have many questions.

Ilias

You must let me have them.

Ilias’ voice sounded excited.

Ilias

I promise I will do my best to answer them.

Gemma stood up.

Gemma

May I lie on the bed?

Ilias

You may.

They switched positions.

Gemma

What is operation cleansing?

Ilias

It is a cleansing of this world. It is a monster, really. My sister and I will release a power on this world that will cleanse it of all that is evil, sick, divisive, and vile.

He crossed his legs.

Ilias

Imagine this world was perfect. No humans capable of doing evil, just good. No race, no ethnicity, just earthlings. A perfect world that humans finally realize their place in the animal kingdom and stop the massive genocide on their fellow earthlings and learn to live with them peacefully.. A world where love matters, love conquers and love creates. Imagine it without chaos, pain, or religion too. Can you?

Gemma

Yes.

Ilias

I can too.

Cameron, Velis, Malic, and the Syn clan all stood in a large circle around Arkain who slept while they spoke.

Cameron

It’s quite the plan.

Syn

Yes it is, Prince Cameron.

Pathion

Eh, I couldn’t care less.

He turned his back on them.

Velis

You know, you don’t have to be such a dick.

Pathion turned around and walked up to her.

Pathion

Why don’t I show you one, instead?

Velis

You pig.

Pathion

It’s okay, babes.

He walked towards Syn.

Pathion

I’m taken.

He kissed Syn on the cheek.

Velis

As if I care.

Malic laughed.

Malic

So that’s the plan?

Vesper

I think it will work. Together we may be able to defeat Ximendos.

They all turned to him.

Cameron

We can’t do anything until Arkain is awake.

Darby

He’s been out for awhile.

Cameron

We must let him rest. He’s been through a lot.

Syn

That’s fine. Darby, Tusa, take the surroundings.

They disappeared.

Pathion

How long we staying?

Syn

Didn’t you just hear him?

Pathion

Yeah, whatever. I’ll be checking our surroundings too. You fine alone?

Syn

Yes, love.

Pathion disappeared.

Vesper

I thought he’d never leave.

Velis

Same here.

Vesper

Believe me, he doesn’t grow on anyone but Syn.

Velis laughed.

Velis

Disgusting.

Vesper

Would you like to scope out the city with me?

Velis

Will you be okay?

She said to Cameron.

Cameron

Of course.

Velis and Vesper disappeared.

Malic

I’m going to catch up to that Pathion guy. He’s pretty cool. Anyone who can get under Velis’ skin is a friend of mine.

With him gone, Cameron and Syn stood together with Arkain.

Syn

I want to make this clear to you, Prince Cameron.

Cameron crossed his arms.

Cameron

Of course.

Syn

Akasha is mine. She is my sister and I will deal with her personally. Anyone who gets in my way will die.

Cameron

I shall speak with Velis about that.

Syn nodded.

Cameron

Where is Fallen?

Syn raised his arms.

Syn

I haven’t a clue. He said he had business to attend to before he met back up with us.

Cameron

He’s an odd one, that Fallen.

Syn

Oh you haven’t seen odd yet, Mr. Cameron.

Ilias set his hands on his lap.

Ilias

That world, that world is a perfect world.

Gemma

How can humans just stop hating? Stop killing each other? How can they just forget all they know they’re capable of doing?

Ilias clapped.

Ilias

Bravo, Gemma. The million dollar question I’ve been waiting for.

He stopped.

Ilias

It’s quite simple. My eyes will be the answer. I will recreate the human mind. I will make it so evil is unfathomable, evil is not even capable.

Gemma

Who’s to say what evil is?

Ilias

I am!

He stood up.

Ilias

I decide. The coming reality humans will base their lives upon will be mine. All will be subjected to my reality.

He walked back and forward in the room.

Ilias

No longer will we have mothers killing their children, fathers having sex with their daughters. No longer will we fight wars over what God is the right one. No longer will books dictate what is good and what is bad. Humans won’t be able to fight wars or kill each other without it being an accident.

He paused.

Ilias

No longer will humans be divided. I will unite them.

Gemma

Impossible.

She whispered.

Ilias

Is it Gemma?

He grabbed her hand.

Ilias

I will show you, soon. You may doubt me now but that will fade. When the day comes, you will find no words to describe the new world. You will only be able to smile.

Gemma smiled.

Ilias

Not now, save it for later.

She stopped.

Ilias

I will make this world perfect, for us to live in.

Gemma

I had no idea you wanted this.

Ilias

I do. I always have.

Gemma

Your father doesn’t seem to want it.

Ilias

He wants power. That’s all he’s ever wanted. This world will sadly be his after the cleansing.

Gemma

A perfect world, led by a God?

Ilias

It’s the closest we’ll ever get to perfection.

Gemma rolled over and looked at the wall.

Gemma

I don’t think perfection exists.

Ilias

You’ve never seen yourself in a mirror.

Gemma didn’t blush, not this time.

Gemma

Kind words, but I know better than that.

Ilias

What do you know?

Gemma

That love is only an excuse to get hurt.

Ilias

Is that so?

Gemma

How can you create a perfect world with love if that will only lead to pain?

Ilias

Gemma, the pain I spoke of was physical pain caused by others. Humans will still fall apart because of a broken heart and the death of a loved one. That isn’t something I’d dare to omit from the human mind.

Gemma

I guess so.

Ilias

Are you afraid of falling in love?

Gemma

No. I just don’t feel like it.

Ilias

I think you may be lying.

Gemma

And why is that?

Ilias

My sister tells me differently. Last night, she read your dreams for me. Your emotions, your thoughts.

Gemma’s mouth almost fell open. The things he knows because of that.

Ilias

I know how you feel about me.

Gemma

Feelings can change.

Ilias

But they won’t.

Gemma

There are no absolutes.

Ilias uncrossed his legs.

Ilias

Why are you running from me?

Gemma

Because,

She paused.

Gemma

I don’t know. I honestly don’t know exactly what I think.

She sat up.

Gemma

I have strong feelings for you. Feelings that are really odd because I just really met you. But still, I can’t fight them.

She turned to him.

Gemma

For so long I’ve been in love with Arkain. The only boy I ever laid eyes on. But now, I don’t know. I do love him. But I am starting to feel this thing for you I can’t even hide.

She paused.

Gemma

I don’t even know how you look. You could be ugly for all I know. I honestly don’t know. What I do know though, is you are beautiful. Not your face, because I will never see it, but your presence. Your words, your hands, and your laugh.

She got off the bed and went for the door.

Gemma

I sound so stupid. Like a fourteen year old girl confessing herself to her long time crush.

She opened the door but it slammed shut by Ilias’ hand.

Ilias

I told you already how I felt when I first laid my eyes on you. You’re more than just a beautiful girl. You’re something different. The mystery behind your eyes is irresistible.

He grabbed her hand.

Ilias

I’ve found myself lying in bed since the first day I saw you just thinking about you. How crazy is that, Gemma? I’m about to reconstruct the world and I can’t even keep my mind in one piece because of you.

He raised her hand to his face.

Ilias

Gemma, I feel exactly as you feel.

Gemma

Don’t say that Ilias, don’t lie to me.

Ilias kissed her. Gemma wanted to push him away but she didn’t want to let go.


Arkain woke up.

Cameron

Good afternoon.

Arkain

How long was I out?

Cameron

An hour or so.

Syn

Give or take.

Arkain stood up slowly.

Arkain

And who might you be?

Syn

My name is Syn.

He extended his hand. Arkain shook it. He almost withdrew his hand as he touched it. It was the coldest thing he ever touched.

Syn

My friends are out and about with young Velis and Malic. You will meet them later.

Arkain

I was out for a couple hours and you have new friends?

Cameron smiled.

Cameron

Well, one moment things are one way, the next they’re another.

Syn

Indeed.

Arkain

So, what’s the plan?

Syn

We’ve already worked that out.

Arkain

I figured. Cameron, can I ask you something?

Cameron

Of course.

Arkain

Can you take me somewhere?

Cameron

Where would you like to be taken?

Arkain

You’ll see when we get there, if you don’t mind.

Cameron

We can do that.

Arkain

Thanks.

Cameron

Well, we haven’t much time. Let’s go now.

Syn

I shall watch over the others until you return.

Arkain

Give us a couple of hours.

Cameron

Hold onto my arm.

Arkain grabbed his arm.

Cameron

Think about where it is and we’ll appear there.

They blew up into a giant flame and then were gone.

Syn

I’ve been gone for a really long time. That was the angel boy.

He looked at the ocean.

Syn

Reminds me of Jesus.

He laughed.

Syn

Jesus was a good man.

He walked towards the ocean. He walked on the water.

Syn

I’m not a good man. No, no I’m not.

Emmylou stopped the car in front of a cheap motel.

Emmylou

This place is the closest one for miles, says that map.

Suri

It’ll have to do.

Conor

I hope there are no cockroaches.

Ian

I hate bugs! Emmy, are there bugs?

Emmylou

I don’t know Ian, we haven’t been inside.

Ian

You go first Conor. If there are bugs, you kill them.

Conor

What if they’re big bugs?

Suri

I’ll go and save you.

Suri stepped out of the car followed by Emmylou.

Emmylou

I’ll check us in, baby boy.

She laughed. Emmylou walked inside the Motel lobby.

Conor

How long can we stay here?

Suri

I don’t know. For the night? We’re in Nevada.

Conor

That’s pretty far from where we were. You think we can stop by Vegas?

Suri

No, idiot.

Ian

I like Vegas.

Conor

Why would you like Vegas, little guy?

Ian

The lights!

Conor laughed.

Conor

You must like a lot of places.

Emmylou came back.

Emmylou

Alright, I got us a room.

They walked into the small two bed room.

Conor

You couldn’t spring for the suite?

Emmylou dropped her bag on the bed.

Emmylou

If they had one.

Suri

Home sweet home.

Ian got on the bed in the back.

Ian

I call this bed!

Emmylou

You don’t mind sleeping on the same bed as him, do you Conor?

Conor

That’s fine.

Conor jumped on the bed.

Conor

Move over, kiddo.

Ian

You’re taking up too much space!

Conor

I can take up more if you’d like.

Suri and Emmylou fell asleep quickly.

Ian

Conor, where are we going?

Conor was looking up at the ceiling.

Conor

To go save some people.

Ian

Are you a superhero?

Conor

No. Not really.

Ian

But you’re going to save people.

Conor

That doesn’t really make me a superhero.

Ian

Yes it does. A superhero saves people.

Conor

It takes more than that though. I don’t have any powers.

Ian

Batman didn’t have any powers.

Conor

That’s true. But he was rich though.

Ian

Superhero’s don’t need money. They just need a heart.

Conor

And a cape. Go to sleep Ian.

Ian

I hope you save those people, Conor.

Conor

Me too, Ian. Me too.

They fell asleep.

Malic

Hey, wait up!

Pathion stopped.

Pathion

Can I help you?

Malic landed next to Pathion.

Malic

Just wanted to kick it for a bit. I have nothing else to do.

Pathion

Go bother someone else.

Malic

Hey, we can be friends, you know?

Pathion

We can. But what makes you think I want one?

Malic

You sound so much like Velis. You might be related.

Pathion

The blonde one?

Malic

Yeah.

Pathion

Ew. Now if you’ll excuse me, I have borders to watch.

Malic

Whatever douche.

Pathion

Fine, come along.

Malic

Better!

Velis and Vesper walked together on the beach.

Vesper

You know, Pathion doesn’t have a heart for anyone other than Syn.

Velis

So they’re gay boys?

Vesper

You can say that.

Velis

He’s still an asshole. But it’s whatever. I’m not the nicest person either.

Vesper

I hope you will remain kind to me, Velis.

Velis

I don’t see why not. Our names both start with a V, so that’s something to work with.

Vesper smiled.

Vesper

You are a character.

Velis

I know, they should make dolls of me.

Vesper almost laughed.


Iris walked along the palace wall into her father’s path.

Ximendos

My child, what are you doing?

Iris

Nothing, just walking. I am bored.

Ximendos

Iris, are you okay?

Iris

Yes, daddy. Why do you ask?

Ximendos

Just wondering. You seem different.

Iris

Just not having the best of days.

Ximendos

You’re worried about Ilias?

Iris

Yes, father.

Ximendos

If you are there is something you can do.

Iris looked as if she’d just found out the best of news.

Iris

What can I do?

Ximendos set his hand on her head.

Ximendos

Remove all his enemies.

He walked away leaving her thinking.

Iris

Thank you, father.

Ximendos

Anytime, my daughter.

Amya sat on the palace wall looking at the sky. Akasha appeared next to her.

Akasha

What are you doing?

Amya

I was enjoying my day.

She looked at Akasha

Amya

Until you arrived.

Akasha sat next to her.

Akasha

Hey, be nice. I didn’t say anything that justifies you pulling your fangs out.

Amya

You ruined my silence.

Akasha

Oh get over it.

Amya

Is there something you want?

Akasha

Nothing at all. Just came to see the view with you.

Amya

As long as you’re silent.

Akasha

Of course.

They watched the sky together.

Ilias

Gemma, I want to know you’re going to be safe. I will even fight my father if he tried to hurt you.

Gemma

I wouldn’t let you.

Ilias

I wouldn’t let you stop me. Your life is my life.

Gemma didn’t know what to say.

Ilias

Gemma, if my father tried to kill you, I’d kill him or he’d have to kill us both.

Gemma

That means a lot, Ilias. What about your sister?

Ilias

She wouldn’t try and lay a finger on you.

Gemma

That’s not what she said.

Ilias

Don’t take her seriously.

He laughed.

Ilias

Gemma, if love is an excuse to get hurt, well I’m ready to go through the most excruciating pain I have to endure, just to have you.

Gemma

Ilias, what are you saying?

Ilias got down on one knee without her knowing it.

Ilias

There isn’t much time. Chaos comes our way and for all we know it, we could end up dead. I at least want to die knowing I loved you and had you.

She noticed he was under her.

Gemma

Ilias, you can’t be serious.

Ilias

Oh, but I am.

He grabbed her hand.

Ilias

Gemma Rose Lee, will you marry me?

Gemma put her hand over her mouth.

19 comments:

  1. Omg my mouth fell open lol...I cant believe Ilias has fallen so hard for Gemma its so sweet ..and I would love to have the world Ilias is wanting ...and i also like how Ian says a super hero only needs a heart awww..

    Awesome Steven...lets find out what happens next?

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  2. I believe there's not really a "proper time" on when you can tell you love and care for someone sincerely, you'll just know it.
    Ilias and Gemma, at times like that.
    With Gemma's situation and Ilia's part in operation cleansing, it's amazing they still found love in each other.
    Ilia's perfect world, wow.
    That sounds like a nice world to live in.
    Knowing us humans and all of our flaws, I know it's not even possible. Extremely impossible.
    To Ian's and Connor's conversation about superheroes.
    Good points.
    You don't need powers nor money.
    You just have to the heart to save people no matter what.
    Look at Velic and Pathion.
    as much as both of them are such bitches/douche bags. Hahaha.
    They show vulnerability because/for the ones they love.
    i saw the difference in how the Ilias and Iris talk to Ximendos and Akasha. They're more formal with Ximendos of course but I can see why.
    Even with that, Ximendos gave Iris advice on how she thinks she should eal with her current problem.
    i wonder what's the deal with Amya and Akasha.
    And also where Arkain wanted to go.
    i have a few guesses. to me it's far off.
    Cannot wait for more!
    I need some action soon!
    <3 greattttttt progress.

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  3. Ian seems totally adorable. I hear him say thing in my head and I just go aww.]

    *fangirly scream* Syn and Pathion <3333

    My jaw literally dropped at the ending.
    Oh My Goddess!!! I was stunned.

    I hope she says no, though.

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  4. HHOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYYYYYYYYY SSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT, what just happened!!!!!!! Amazing chapter, really reveals the character everyone in the story has, how different they are and what they want in life. I loved this chapter, and the end was E-P-I-C!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing job yo. =)

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  5. Wow really I didnt expect all the things that are happening right now.
    Honestly I do not know what is going to happen with Cameron and Arkain, things seem a bit weird between those two for some reason.
    Suri and the kids are going through adventures that I did not expect the to be in being that they are so young and all.
    Ximendos is awesome!! That is why he will not be stopped and his plan will come to fruition and everyone will bow before him. With the determination and heart that he has, there is no telling what he cannot do.
    Ilias and Gemmas' situation is getting pretty heated. I did not expect him to ask such a question to her after such little time. What will she say since she loves Arkain but she also has feelings for Ilias.
    Man this is getting crazy. How long will this story last!? Im so excited to see where its all leading to.

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  6. they better get married,
    they are so cute together.

    i like the syn clan a lot

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  7. Syn is gay. Syn walks on water like Jesus. I see what you're doing here ;)
    The Gemma sub-plot seems a lot better now, more direct and less cluttered. I don't like Ilias's take on the new world and I certainly don't trust him.
    Velis and Malic have become exposable. Just like Nicholas. Nicholas and Vesper need to get together to say goodbye ;)

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  8. cliff hangers D:

    ugh but her and ilias are so wrong for each other

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  9. whoa. Ilias fell a little too hard a little too fast. I'm also very curious as to where Arkain wants Cam to take him. I like the relationship that they're developing. hopefully it will continue to grow with all the new "friends".

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  10. OMG he wants to marry her...omg its so great..I love it..
    Im actually falling for ilias' character
    Im beginning to understand him a great deal better

    Also I like the coolness between the syn clan and cam "clan" lol

    I think the personalities mesh well
    Im still wondering about arkain and what is really "good" inside his head

    like what is up with arkain?

    Iris seems like a big threat to gemma
    Im wondering how this inside conflict will pan out

    U cud really take this anywhere
    I can see so many dif possibilities

    Your story is so many themes in one
    But I like the utopian society ideal
    I often enjoy these kind of stories as seen in The Giver or Truesight

    But they often end up being a false "peace"
    Ahh I love this

    On to the next chapter

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  11. NOOOOOOOOO Gemma is not allowed to marry Ilias!!!! but i guess it works cus Arkain and Suri are a thing.... but i highly disapprove! Gemma is so sweet and Ilias kills people........

    and i think Ximendos unknowingly gave Iris full permission to kill Gemma.... epic sibling battle coming up?? haha we will see

    waiting patiently for Fallen........ hurry up hahaha

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  12. What the? Isn't Gemma 16?

    LOL. So I'm guessing Ilias is the same age as her. What a kid. Awesome chapter. I really do like what's coming of these few chapters. It's getting spicy =)

    Oh & Malic is going to try and steal Pathion from Syn, that's gonna be interesting, no other reason for him to be interested in him!

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  13. INTENSE. Good thing they don't have any pedobear laws eh? But hey, age is merely a number when it comes to love in my opinion. Oh, and again. Yet another amazing chapter. Next one!

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  14. lame, Steven! Was expecting a fight between Cameron and the "Syn Clan" >:< instead they just reconciled. Oh well, good relationship between Ilias and Gemma, even if it is breaking the law

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  15. what i don't understand is that i ACTUALLY waited this long to read Arkain again, i don't know how i did it! Cause this stuff is amazing!!! idk, i feel like there is something fishy going on with Ilias asking gemma for her hand in marriage... it seems like he's going too fast???? After all, he is one of the bad guys, maybe its part of his plan.. and i think i missed the part where Cameron can teleport? o_O or i might not remember, idk. Velis still kicks ass! haha I love her

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  16. I want to know why the Syn clan decided to betray Ximendos, darn it! And I do agree with some of the other people who've commented, I do think that Ilias is going a little fast, but as a girl who loves those kinds of sappy love scenes and such, I have a great time reading the way they feel about each other....but I definitely do think that the marriage proposal was a biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit too strong! Is he serious when he says that or is he joking, the cliff hanger doesn't help, Steven! >:l Darn you!

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  17. I love hearing Ilias and Gemma talk!! Its just soooo beautiful:')
    Operation cleansing doesn't sound to bad! > . < lol
    By the way I love that you incorporated a gay couple! So different as it should be! But Velis saying "disgusting" made me laugh a little :) haha
    So Iris read her dreams! Dam I wish I had that ability....
    Fuck!!! I'm such a sucker for love!!! Darn you girl emotions!!!!!
    Haha Arkain wakes up to more people! Lol
    Hmmmm I wonder where Arkain wants to go to?
    Dam Ilias fell so hard so fast!.... How romantic :) I love that he wants to marry her already! Lifes to short! O well not for them! You know what I mean!!! Lol

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  18. Ilias asking Gemma to marry him?! Is she crazy? There is no way that Gemma will say yes because she still has feelings for Arkain that are not going to go way. Early one she stated that he was the only one that she could see clearly, that has to mean something to her and her decision making.

    Cameron and Arkain seem to be at a fork in the road and I am not entirely sure which path they will make. There may just be too much to overlook for Arkain so he may make the choice that alters the current story.

    Ximendos continues to be unstoppable and I absolutely love it. The will and determination to achieve what he wants and how he wants to achieve it is amazing. Everyone will bow before him if he has anything to do with it!

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  19. This is all so, so sudden. Ilias wants to marry gemma?! Im not sure if I fully trust this guy, I mean hes plan for the new world doesn’t sound too bad but he seems a bit off. Will gemma say yes…I feel even gemma suspects there is more to Ilias and his plan that even he can’t comprehend the complications if they should occur. Will iris see this as a threat, as an enemy of ilias?

    Im pretty excited to see the syn clan back but im more interested to find out what Ximendos will feel. Akasha will go down by the hands of her brother. Freak this is all so much to follow but I never seemed to get lost.

    I almost forgot about the quest with all the kids, the tigers whos names I forgot at the moment, were sent to find them and bring them back but we all know suri doesn’t want to go back without Arkain..how will this play out?

    Will gemma say yes??

    On to the next chapter…

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