Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Chapter Fourteen: Good Men Die Like the Rest

Velis and Cameron walked in the Roger’s Pub. Roger saw Velis and began nervously cleaning.
Velis
Alright, I need everyone out.
 
The ten guys inside all looked around to her. 
Velis
You can leave with your lives, or stay here with your dead body.
 

Random guy
We suppose to be scared of you?
 
Velis dropped her coat and was wearing an all black suit. 
Velis
Yes.

Cameron walked forward. 
Cameron
Please gentlemen, there is a simple solution. We have yet to fight anyone since last night and we do not wish to kill humans at the moment.
 

Random guy
Humans? What are you, aliens?
 
Every man in the room laughed.Velis moved forward quickly without anyone even noticing, her foot hit the bottom of the man's hand and his cup flew up. Her foot then swept him off his feet and his head fell where the cup would land. As the cup fell down, Velis grabbed the cup in midair and smashed it into the man’s face. 
Cameron
If aliens could do that.
 
The other men quickly ran out of the bar. The man sat on the floor holding his face while weeping. 
Velis
You should have just listened. The last guy didn't either.

She snapped his neck.
Velis
Dispose of him.
 
Cameron lifted his finger and the man’s body was set on fire. 
Cameron
This is disgusting. You really should think before you act Velis. If I wasn’t here who would dispose of the body?

The body and fire were gone.
Velis
Roger would.

She looked over to the bar tender roger.
Velis
He did last time.
 

Cameron
How handy.

Roger set up two tables in the middle of the bar for them. 
Roger
Anything you need Velis, just call. I'm going to go clean the back.

Velis and Cameron sat down next to each other. 
Cameron
Who will be attending this?

Velis
Malic, Orthak, and Akasha.

Cameron
Why not Ximendos?

Velis
He has other things to attend to apparently.
 
Cameron
Figures.
 
The door opened and Malic walked in.
Malic
Hello, friends.

Velis
Sit down.

Malic
Wow, a little happy today Velis?

Velis
I’d say so. We killed the boy last night.
 
Malic sat down.
Malic
I’d sure as hell be happy. Master is going to love you.
 
Velis
He sure as hell better. I’m thinking about ranking up.
 
Malic
You quite deserve it. I don’t think there is a scarier woman in town.
 

Velis
Except her.

She pointed behind him.

Akasha
Well said.

She had thick long black hair and blue eyes. All she wore was a giant black coat. 
Velis
How are you, Akasha?
 

Akasha
The boy is dead, correct?

Velis
Thanks for answering my question. Yes he is.
 

Cameron
Where is Orthak?

Akasha
He won’t be attending. I’ve sent him on a mission.

Malic
Good, I hate when I’m around him, gives me the chills.
 

Velis
He’s on your team.

Malic
I know. I didn’t say I’m afraid of him, I just said he gives me the chills.
 
Cameron
He is fear in shapes, after all.
 
Akasha
Speaking of missions. I have a new one for you three.
 
Malic
Yes! I was waiting.
 
Akasha
Ximendos and I have decided we must get rid of Merdos and Masato. Their powers can prove to be of an annoyance should we continue to allow them to interfere with our plans.
 
Cameron
And this task belongs to?
 
Malic
Can I? I would love to finish the job.
 

Akasha
Yes, you can. Careful young Malic, you know fully well a touch by either of those two can prove fatal.
The setting will be up to your desire young one, but the time will be tomorrow. Those two are always first on the scene, so it should not be a problem. Even with the boy and those two out of the way the threat of The White Coats is still strong. As long as Amros and Hayden are present, they will remain a force we must remain weary of. 
Velis
I’ll kill Hayden.
 

Akasha
We do not need suicide missions, Velis.
 
Velis crossed her arms and sat back.
Velis
Someone has to do it.
 
Akasha
Someone will, soon. Velis, you will be a part of the president assassination.
 

Malic
Sounds interesting.
Akasha
It is. Amya of the human ranks is under the impression that she has a week to prepare for us to attack. Should we give her that week, things may prove to be tricky. For that reason, tomorrow will be the day.

Malic
You know, I do like this president.

Cameron
He is a good man.

Velis
And good men must die like the rest.
 
Akasha
Do not think this will be easy. There will be many guards, there will be army, there will be Amya's people. You are bullet proof Malic, but young Velis here is not.
 
Velis
No one will hit me, believe it.
 

Akasha
I do, your speed matches the speed of my power.
 
Velis smiled. 
Akasha
Cameron, you aren’t as insightful and enlightening today like on other days, anything wrong?
 
Cameron
Nothing, just a lot on my mind.
 

Akasha
Clear it, it will only slow you down.
 
Akasha quickly got up and lifted her hand. A thin blue line of lighting pulsed through the room and hit something by the hallway to the restrooms. There was a thud and a clatter. Velis stood up. 
Velis
That was Roger!

Akasha sat down. 
Akasha
Sit down.

Velis
Do you know how hard it is to find good human help these days?
 

Akasha
They're all dogs, and like dogs, they all lack the intelligence to further our organization and our agenda.
 
Velis sat down angry. 
Akasha
Well then. I think this meeting is complete. You have your missions. Also, congratulations on killing the boy, Ximendos will be most pleased.
 

Velis
Thank you.

Cameron did not respond to the congratulation. Akasha left. 
Velis
Let's go, now that Roger is dead this place lacks interest. Burn it to the ground.
 

Cameron
As you wish.


Gemma sat in the middle of her white cell.
Gemma
I'm wide awake, and it's morning.
 
It’s time.
Gemma
I can’t feel Arkain. I can’t breath.
 
They killed him, the dark ones.Gemma
We must leave, Krysin.
 

We shall. Nothing can contain us.
Gemma
Nothing can. Now devour me.

38 comments:

  1. Haha quoting Bright Eyes i see. & this Akasha is pretty tiight, she surely has them all in check. hah & i wanna read about the assassination of the president, should be a good scene :)

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  2. "I'm wide awake,and it's morning."

    nice....

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  3. "Velis is one badass chick. anyways this chapter was good, I liked "seeing" how the bad guys act when their with eachother. but if Arkain is really dead then who's going to save Gemma from her dark side, and what happened with Suri, is she also dead? I hope you post another chapter soon, I can't wait to read it."-Mari

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  4. "totally caught "i'm wide awake, it's morning" and i bet you didn't think i would've caught it. word.........such a shame that that guy didn't just listen to velis. what a badass, always. i wonder how gemma will act when finally coming face to face with everyone after this. ........and roger...rest in peace my friend. would've loved to see how a human would be able to help them though."- Chris

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  5. "Dude man intense. I like the way that Cameron just kind of controls the things that Velis does, she killed the man and the Cameron just disposed of the body. I feel that Cameron has a lot of hands involved in this plan that he has on. I do not believe that Arkain is dead because he is the angel in the story and thus he cannot die, in my opinion. Suri is probably with Arkain wherever he may be, Gemma is one crazy lady. I really think that it is going to be interesting when its time for Arkain to chose between Suri and Gemma, sounds like there will an issue there. This chapter was really good Steven, hope to continue reading man."- Chris Galvan

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  6. "Arkain is really dead? No :( I was definitely expecting him to come into the bar and kill Velis. What happened to Roger... hmmm....? Seriously Velis= Uma Therman in Kill Bill. Nice chapter, Can't wait for the action in the next one thoughhh."- Rose

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  7. "I found very interesting on how Velis reacted to Roger's death. ....I might've underestimated her.....It looks like Velis has competition (Akasha)....Cameron seems to be slowly pulling away from Velis bossing him around."- Ingrid

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  8. "whoah...i couldnt even say the characters....names lolz but this is really good........Velis has a bad temper which....mite get her in trouble in the next few chapters????"- Brittany

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  9. "Velis seems lesbian ........ahaha jk this was interesting....i liked the new characters even though this has been up since like days ago haha :]"- Tnaid

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  10. "OHMYGOODNESS.......i really am too 'ahhhhh' to say something.......but really.......i'm reading on like right now.......i'm intensely worried about this.......WHAT'S gonna happen?......one thing though, why was velis so upset about roger's death?......xD"- Clara

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  11. ok wow is all i have to say for this chapter! so they are going to blindside the president and Amya, and the way they think of humans as nothing is crazy! on to the next chapter!..

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  12. Arkain is not dead. I DONT'T BELIEVE YOU. This is HIS story! Rightt...???
    My comments are going to get a bit shorter because I want to find out what's happening dammit! Haha I don't have the patience for this.

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  13. hey sorry i havent been here for a while.
    btw i definately like the story here w/ all the colors for different people. great idea!

    Velis, she is so...destructive! i wouldnt want to get on her bad side lol. and i dont think arkain is really dead. but its probably better if they all think he is because then he can just come out of nowhere. definately reading the rest now!

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  14. uhmm. wow. velis just gets more and more heartless by the minute.
    then again, she was a teensy weensy bit upset about roger's death.
    oh boy. krysin.
    let's see what he can do. or is it she?
    xD

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  15. whoaah wait. Arkain is dead? :))))

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  16. I like how we got introduced to more of the dark side. I can't wait to find out about this guy there all given chills by. I also like how you gave us a sequence of what's happening next can't wait to see if any distractions come in.

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  17. I think I agree with Brittany. It seems like Velis' temper could really get her in some trouble, along with her pride. But of course it all makes for a more interesting story! :)

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  18. "Velis seems lesbian..." haha silly people.

    Anywho, Ohmygah what's up with Cameron?
    I wanna learn more about what's going on in his head. ahhh, i'm really excited

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  19. Loved the villain interactions here.
    Poor Roger :(
    I sense Cameron will prove to be more of a thorn in their side than they would ever expect.

    Velis is just counting down her days.
    And the President should not go down! =/

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  20. oh. you copied my comment already. lol

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  21. Gemma and Bright eyes...<3 This chapter was very interesting because it's building up the fact that more things are about to unfold. You are VERY good at keeping the suspense going! There is no way that Arkain is dead so I'm not too worried about that. But I am worried about this planned asassination on Nicholas :( he is such a good character, and I really hope he sticks around for awhile because I like reading the scenes with him and amya

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  22. Nooooooooooooooo he can't die! I am sure he will come back! Or he better! Or I will stop reading!

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  23. good and evil men plot to get what they see fit. like hayden did awhile ago about lying to arkain.

    i hope this assassination goes well for the bad guys :) i like watchin chaos

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  24. you're such an amazing writer . its getting so good (:

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  25. He can not be dead right? I hope not...

    As always Velis is sick!!


    And just like that Akasha killed that man ..he didnt even do anything wow..

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  26. omg omg omg, shes gonna escape!!!


    "I'm wide awake, and it's morning." <33

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  27. First let me point out "im wide awake, and its morning" :D awesomeness

    The meeting with everyone proved to be very insightful I get the impression that cameron is a bit numb and if not numb he is driven by
    sadness or anger..he isn't happy at all

    Velis irks me man smh

    Im scared ...gemma is letting krysin take her over becuz she believes arkain is dead

    At first I felt sorry for the president but in the last chapter he was not afraid to face death

    If he dies I at least know he died for peace and the greater good and he has done all he can...

    Poor roger

    Im excited tho to see merdos and masato tho..i been waiting for that :)

    Yesss!!!

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  28. I liked Roger!

    I also don't want the president to be assassinated.

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  29. I like Gemma's character! Leaving me wanting more. What's up with Arkain, what boy really died? Nice suspense.

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  30. Just got thru all the chapters up to this one...the story so far is really compelling and well-conceived, and I like the unique dialogue style. It has lots of potential, can't wait to read the rest!
    Have you thought about working with a comic artist on this? It'd make a really cool graphic novel series. Just sayin'.

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  31. Love the new characters. I love how they're introduced. I hate the fact that the main bad guy isn't introduced yet though =(

    But awesome chapter.

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  32. New characters = Fun
    I can't wait to find out what's going to happen with Gemma here.. This is going to be amazing.

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  33. Woo hoo new characters! Akasha seems more malicious than Velis except Akasha isn't stupid with her life. I secretly hope they get the president. :X Gemma is getting a little creepy. I like it! Krystin must b one strong dude/chick/thing. Im anxious to see!

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  35. damnit, roger was cool and now velis seems chilldish
    i do think i will like the "bad guys" more

    this is eugene btw sorry i didnt sign in, super tired

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  36. Dam Velis has some cool moves! she is like the mafia or something lol! I would love to see a flashback of her life...
    I love the conference you set up between the bad guys! very cool...
    WTF why did she kill Roger! ohhhhh :(
    More Gemma please!!!!!!! lol

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  37. Akasha and Malic seem to be higher ranks than Cameron and Velis thus they are quick to respond and accept whatever it is they say. However, I get the feeling that Cameron is thinking of doing something else besides just trying to murder Arkain, which I know he is not dead since it is only CHAPTER 14!!...so curious to see how that unfolds as well.

    Gemma seems to be schizophrenic to a certain extent. Voices, other personalities and thoughts that an individual should not have. Wonder where they are going to go and how this is going to affect the White Coats and their "plan" that I am yet to decipher.

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